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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
puttar has trapped...i heard about Kabbab ME HADDi..but ye HAddi me Kabbab kaha se aa gaya😆... ab ye lust kumar hai to thoda kasht to milega na😉...
Caution-- weak pplz keep way for her stories...some shocking twist can cause you a heart attack🤣 jokes part ,,, fabulous update

tysm for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Be honest ,over dose twists kill the essence of story..i bet most of the readers felt the same ,what im feeling.hmm some readers not open up..but im not in their page.

Its a abhi plan..3 days stand of sarika and raman sexual relation make a baby?raman dated shagun for 2 months..wow..

How mrs.bhalla doing injustice to ishita?what she said to raman in previous part...toshiji dnt want ishita to be like her,and raman like om..now what she is doing to ishita..stupidity..

I really hate bhallas..how mr.bhalla decide raman life,he dnt have any right,he losted his right as a father..

May be sarika is pregnent with abhi or romi,who knows.twist keliye tum kuch bhi kar sakthe ho..

sarika,she is giving warrning to raman,great...I REALLY WANT JKR ISHITA AND OLD RKB TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM.ITS BETTER ISHITA KNOW THE TRUTH AND ENTER BHALLAS FAMILY AS A BAHU AND RAMAN WIFE..

I WANT ISHRA WORK TOGETHER TO COMPLETE THE TASK..I WANT MIKU PATCH UP WITH ROMI..
ROMI KE AKAL CHOTI MADRASAN TEEK KARENGE..

WHO IS MR.BHALLA SECOND WIFE?U not mentioned her name?USKA NAAM NEELU HAI KYA?:-D:-D:-D:-Dyeh pammi aunty?

thanks for pm,im really disappointed..but if the problem is solved readers will cool down..u really raising my b.p..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Jaanu wait for next update it's superb it seems.. let's see
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Jaanu wait for next update it's superb it seems.. let's see


How can u say that 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
not liking this twist yaar 😒
is sarika really pregnant...i don't think so and if she is then it's surely not raman's child
most probably it's abhi's plan to separate ishra and maybe romi is also involved in this 🤔
but how mr.bhalla is so sure that it's raman's baby and if he knows this much about raman
then why he doesn't know about raman's marriage with ishita 🤪...stupid man...
hope soon raman will be able to know d actual truth of sarika's pregnancy
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: --abha--


How can u say that 😆

maine bola isiliye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Hi Kutties... 😃

I'm sorry to say but I'm so much disappointed in my readers as much as you people are regarding the twist.

I've brought this story to this phase so far with my twists and turns not with actual planning.

And if you're not at all liking it or haven't have faith in me...
Just tell me to stop this one (the story)

I don't want to hurt your feelings by my scribblings at all.

No offends please 😳


Love you all for the support you gave for my writings so far ❤️


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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
I didn't comment today after reading update
I don't know way BT after reading urs note I can just say dat plz do cont dis story bcoz we really want to know what will be next...

I can't say anything about twist BT after reading update I want to know wat will happen next to ishra relationship...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Gayu,..plzzz continue yar...I really liked the twist...past is coming back biting...how they come out is best...
I have full faith on u...
I am really excited... 😊

Dont dare to end it...plzzz 😔

Update soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
Gayu di.. no
Please don't end..
i love it so much..
Bring in as much as u want please don't end

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