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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: surabhiasthana9
This is a different concept n ruhi is Raman's child or not did not get it n is it about ishra or is it ishita's story sorry it is a little confusing

I'm the weird kid on the block with random concepts. Ruhi is Raman's child. I don't want to be skinned for not having her to be his kid. Ultimately if it is IshRa or not IshRa it does end up as Ishita's story. Every story. It's girl meets boy and the world comes crashing down!

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sri1091
Omg vandhana how could she behave like dat with ishita??? She is disgusting I hate her poor ishita how much she suffered due to her... Nobody loves her?? Even her parents?? How can dey do dat to her?? Raman is a jerk who is dis nikhil?? Is he a childhood frnd of ishita or became frnd when she left her so called family??? Plzz continue soon... I loved little rooh...

IKR! Vandhna 😡 My poor Ishita 😭 I am really predictable aren't I?

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SurabhiA91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -Ara-

I'm the weird kid on the block with random concepts. Ruhi is Raman's child. I don't want to be skinned for not having her to be his kid. Ultimately if it is IshRa or not IshRa it does end up as Ishita's story. Every story. It's girl meets boy and the world comes crashing down!

Hmm will wait for the next update just a die hard ishra fan that is why want it to be ishra story can't see them with other people

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: whitelily
awesome start👏👏

thank you!

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: AraMusesID

Because in life, real life, you don't meet and fall for just one guy. It's much more complicated that. Meherbaan doesn't have them with other people and nor does Their Iyer Girl or Kiss and Don't Tell even.

Read the story as it unfolds. It has a plot and isn't an angsty tale with a broken heroine.

You don't like people or chose people just because they're beautiful, love. That's low but the choice is yours.

As I said, wait for it to unfold. :)

i love your feedback ..its the reality of life.yeah im not judge people with their beauty,i judge the people,who are honest and true..but in your story people are so hated towards ishu?she is a sin of daughter? i will wait for unfold of story, its give every person view..

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abha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

That was really heart touching...I felt for ishita...I feel moved with way u have written. This is going gr8...I don't know why Raman, Veer and Vandhana was so insensitive to her...Why her parents too hard for her...

But ishitaa is strong girl...I really loved it...I am waiting to know what Raman is see...Bcoz I cant imagine him stone hearted...

Brilliant peice...Update soonish

Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago

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AraMusesID

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: --abha--
That was really heart touching...I felt for ishita...I feel moved with way u have written. This is going gr8...I don't know why Raman, Veer and Vandhana was so insensitive to her...Why her parents too hard for her...

But ishitaa is strong girl...I really loved it...I am waiting to know what Raman is see...Bcoz I cant imagine him stone hearted...

Brilliant peice...Update soonish

Thank you!

You do? That's so nice. Thank you! :)

Read :)

I haven't plotted him as yet.

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: surabhiasthana9

Hmm will wait for the next update just a die hard ishra fan that is why want it to be ishra story can't see them with other people

I get that. I do. But ishra were with other people to begin with. Just saying.

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: janani_divan

i love your feedback ..its the reality of life.yeah im not judge people with their beauty,i judge the people,who are honest and true..but in your story people are so hated towards ishu?she is a sin of daughter? i will wait for unfold of story, its give every person view..

No. She isn't born out of wedlock. She's a legit child.

When I judge people the first time from afar I judge them from their appearance coz I don't know who they are then. :) It isn't that bad.

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-mujna-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

I saw the new title and immediately got all excited thinking it was another FF from you... Once the page loaded... realized it was Hairat... by the way... I still love that title...

Also... I love the characterization of your protagonists... be it Hairat (for some reason I still want to call this FF Hairat!) or Meherbaan or GoU... they are all flawed, insecure, impulsive, a bit selfish, a little gullible... easy to relate to... and the build up of the complete scenario, the attention to detail is amazing... 👍🏼

I love Ishita's character here... somehow... the Momma tiger concept just gets to me... walking away from her whole life for her daughter... just pulls my heartstrings...

I really liked this story... Please update soon...

PS: Meherbaan still trumps all... love that FF or yours!