IshRa OS ~My Plight~ - Page 2

I love this! So often we see these potentially beautiful tracks end in a horrible, grotesque comedy. There are so many instances where a small emotional conversation in place of or before comedy could do wonders for the show, but for some reason the CVs don't care about honest emotion & their characters. That's why I'm grateful for forum writers like you who can give us some type of emotional closure! 😃

THANK YOU!

wow yaar awesome
emotional update
loved raman side of story. and
ishra cute moment

AWESOME UPDATE
Loved it
Thanks

Sakshi my dear thank you so much for writing this OS. I really apreciate your talent in writing and this time Again I am so proud to be your reader.you had taught us about Raman plight in diferent way that they show on TV. It look like silly thing that Raman overact for normal sick like allergy. BUT if we think we are in Raman shoes we will be end up doing the same thing. If you know you are very sick and had less time to be with your love ones you will have to prepare for their security for their future to live when you not around. Raman is hurt and sad cause everybody look at him like a joker. But in reality he went to his pain and hurt that he think he is going to die and no one understand or support him he did eveything for evrerybody and never think of himself in that two days of his illness it is really tough time for him he never think he can live without his wife so in the same way he taught Ishu must be understand him and suppot him butn she also making fun of him,that was hurt his feeling the most after he talk to her now she understand what he going through and she feel sorry that she didn't understand him I really want the show on TV to show us like your taught instead of make it like comedy. The end of this story was cute I like they talk even they die becoming like ghost they will never leave each other how sweet of them. Thank you once again for the beautiful OS and come back to writng world again . I knnow all the writer need inspiration from the story from TV if we get good story line or awesome scence from the show. Love you my dear.👏👏 Have a wonderful weekend.

nice os and thank u for pm and sry for late rpl aur aapne apne precious time mein se waqt nikala mere liye so sweet of u and i m very grateful to u

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi

This is nice OS on Raman point of view about his misunderstanding. Even though I find it irritates me to watch it on screen because every time CV turn it into a comedy circus but your os shed a different light to the entire scenario.

Originally posted by: sapna_22

Bingo !!! Even i was thinking the same
This isn't funny anymore
i liked the way you have described whole situation

well written

😳 👍🏼

Originally posted by: raatkikali12

Hi

Its beautiful 😃

It would b lovely if v get a similar scenario in yhm too...

Nice approach to the current ongoing sequence 😃

Originally posted by: aarohi26

you gave us your stories after so many days and this was fabulous di. totally enjoyed this one. ya we really didn't thought about such point, thanks for pen down your feelings. let c what is stored for us in show. I loved their bag hug. the best part of story. will wait for another one from you