FF: KISMAT part 26 updated on page 137

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this is my another try hope you all will like it...

FF: KISMAT...

CHARACTERS:

Raman kumar bhallar: ceo of bhalla industries son of santosh and omprakash bhalla, loving caring and kind at heart... want to marry a simple traditional girl who only love him not for money

Santoshi bhalla: good at heart but some sort of materialistic... want to marry her son with shagun( daughter of her friend po*nimaa arora who is modern only want to marry with raman for his money)

Omprakash bhalla: only want his son happiness supportive father

Mihir: brother of raman

Mihika: wife of mihir

Ishita iyer: beautiful caring loves subbu...

Madhvi iyer: mother of ishita...

Vishwa iyer: father of ishita middle class ... employed in raman's company. Friend of mr. bhalla... but very professional... vishwa know bhalla family but iyer family does not know bhalla family only they know mr. bhalla... because toshi does not want to meet middle class people...

Ashok Khanna: madly love ishita

index

part 1 updated below

part 2 : page 3

part 3 : page 5

part 4 : page 8

part 5 : page 11

part 6 : page 13

part 7 : page 18

part 8 : page 22

part 9 : page 28

part 10 : page 34

part 11 : page 41

part 12 : page 49

part 13 : page 54

part 14 : page 58

part 15 : page 63

teaser on page 68

part 16 : page 72

part 17 : page 79

part 18 : page 85

part 19 : page 90

part 20 : page 97

part 21 : page 102

part 22 : page 109

teaser on page 115

part 23 : page 119

part 24 : page 127

part 25 : page 131

part 26 : page 137

part 27 onwards

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part1

Toshi reading horoscope section in newspaper and jumps in joy... Bale bale...

Shagun enter in room: kiya hua aunty jee? Bohat khush lag rahe ho?

Toshi: haan puttar mein ne aj raman ka horoscope parha hai is mein likha hai kay is week shadi ya engagement kay bohat chances hain sochti hoon tery liye raman say baat kar loon...

Shagun: nahe aunty mein khud usy propose karne wali hoon iss Saturday ko...

Toshi: changa hai...

Shagun: acha aunty jee mein chalti ho

At evening when raman enter the house toshi jee was sitting on sofa with close eyes... raman gets worried...

Raman: kiya hua maa? Tabyiat theek hai?

Toshi: kahan beta... Dekh meri gal sun..

Raman: maa phr shadi ki baat kaha hai na ap say jab muje meri pasand ki larki mil jaye gi to karloonga shadi...

Toshi: dekh puttar tere chote bhai ki bhi shadi hogayi... tu kab kary ga shadi jab mein mar jaongi???

Raman: maa aisa to mat bolo...

Toshi: nahe kahoongi bas tu aik wada kar lay...

Raman: kaisa wada?

Toshi: wada kar...

Raman: acha kiya... bolo..

Toshi: is week jb tujhe koi larki mil jaye gi jo tuhje pasand ho to tu us say shadi ka liye maan jae ga..

Raman: acha maa theek hai... Khush...

Next day... raman enters his office everyone greets him...

Mr. iyer comes to raman: sir...

Raman: ary sir kitni baar kaha hai apko muje sir nahe beta kaha karain... koi problem hai??

Mr. iyer: nahe... wo iss Saturday ko meri beti ishita ki shadi hai apko invite karna chahta tha... agar apko koi problem na ho to...

Raman: I will try... promise nahe karta...

Mr. iyer: thanks apka ye kehna bhi kafi hai...

Saturday comes...

Mr. bhalla: raman muje aur teri maa ko Mumbai jana pary ga mihika ki maa ki dead hogayi hai mihir aur mihika wahan hi hain... to tum mr. iyer ki beti ki shadi mein chale jana... Humain 3 din lag jain gay

Toshi: per raman tune to shagun kay saath dinner per jana hai...

Raman: koi nahe maa shadi say seedha dinner per chala jaonga...

Mr. bhalla: acha theek hai hum chalte hain... Bye...

Raman: bye...

Phone rings...

Raman: hello...

Person: tumhain warn karna chahta hoon dinner per mat jana...

Raman: kiyon??

Person: aik baat samajh nahe aati...

Raman: aby romi kay bache... Mazak band kar bol kiya news hai???

Romi friend of raman: shagun tuhe propose karna chahti hai...

Raman: ab samajh mien aya kay maa ne promise kiyon liya... thanks yaar bacha liye tune... Warna iss wade kay chakkar mein muje haan kehni parti ab mien dinner ditch kar loonga...

Romi: tere liye to jaan bhi hazir hai... wesy tu shagun ko bachpan say janta hai shadi kiyon nahe kar leta???

Raman: haan janta hoon isiley to nahe kar raha shadi wo sirf money kay liye mere saath hai kal jab mein problem mein hoonga to wo muje choor day gi... Acha chal mein rakhta hoon muje mr. iyer ki beti ki shadi mein jana hai...

Unknown to raman what has KISMAT decided for him...

Waiting for response...

Shall I continue????

Edited by sparkingsoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice story please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
i guess raman gone complete his promise
do continue n thanx for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow superb please cont it want to know more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome start
i guess raman gone complete his promise
do continue n thanx for d pm


hmm your guess is right...
will update next part tomorrow thanks for liking
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pretty_h

wow superb please cont it want to know more


thanks for liking
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nyc starting. will wait for next part. update soon
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Superb start...Waiting for next and Ishra meeting or kismat faisla😳
Continue soon and thnx for pm...
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Wow superb story...
Starting is very interesting & surely want to know what will happen next...
Continue soon

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