ISHRA ' FF ' DOOSRA JANAAM' UPDT PART 15 pg 108 oct 28

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: usaonly
Hansa please update this one I want them to meet again. Waiting for big surprise and want Ishu to runaway from engagement😉

thx jum im going to write it n tomorrow you will get it n as you said it can be that too wait to know

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

HELLO GUYS ME AGAIN HERE BEAR ME OK THX A LOT GUYS HERE WE GO DONT DELAY.

NOT PROOF READ N IGNORE MISTAKES TOO.

DOOSRA JANAAM

PART 7

It start with raman being lost on his pari thought , even ishita was in full lost in the unknown guy whom give her all feeling on day, both wanted to meer each ever again but how they dont know.

Suhana too was dreaming of raman n was waiting when she will met him again. Two days passes like this rinky notice ishita new change n was sure something was wrong but she was happy to see her happiness face.

That night ishra was in their room looking at sky n both was talking n ask to make them hear each ever voice n same time there was a falling star n both make a wish too n after some time raman start to get his head paining , it was un bear able but he did not wanted to paint he roll over floor due of pain n was calling only pari name in pain.

Ishita who get a feeling n anxious some thing is wrong n as some one was calling her n she start to pray n ask to god if some one who is in pain then relief his pain help him n why she felt it related to her some one who is so close , who it could be n just think if it could be the same mall guy n she pray with full of devotee for him.

Raman was still cont rolling in pain he try to call mihir but it ishita num which he click n it ring too. She run n take the call but before she talk she could feel his pain n her heart beat fast like she knew who was the other one ... she soon ask what happen as raman was unable to talk due of pain but on hearing her voice he get a little courage , " my head is so paining im not able to bear it come fast yaar . without realizing it a girl voice due of pain

Ishita could feel his pain his suffering she become restless n take courage n talk with her sweet voice , she say ... " im not your yaar but may be your well wisher tell me what happen please I may be help
you ". On hearing her voice his heart beat fast n he talk n say ... " my head is paining im cant bear the pain " , in a sob voice

She told him ... " listen to me im far from you , but I can feel your pain I dont know why, just do what I said please for me . She was stunned how can she talk like this with unkown guy n with so caring way why she feel it n her heart too which is paining along with him. He reply ok with pain.

She told him ... " JUST CLOSE YOUR EYES, THINK OF SOME ONE WHO IS VERY CLOSE IN YOUR HEART , WHO MEANS A LOT FOR YOU, WHICH YOUR HEART BEAT FOR, THE ONE WHOM YOU WANT TO BE WITH , MAY BE YOUR LOVER, THINK OF THE BEAUTIFUL MOMENT WHICH YOU SPEND WITH HER, THE MOMENT WHICH YOU MAY LIKE MOST IN YOUR LIFE, THE ONE WHOM YOUR HEART WANT TO SEE OR BE ALWAYS WITH, THINK OF HER SMILE, HER FACE ECT , HER VOICE WHICH STAY IN YOUR EARS , WHICH YOU WANT TO HEAR AGAIN N AGAIN , YOU WILL FEEL BETTER IM SURE JUST DO IT N IM HERE WITH YOU UNTIL YOU WONT TELL ME YOU ARE OK ". In a sweet n nice way she talk to him , she too was closing her eyes as she to was connecting to him .

He did as she said ... he close his eyes, he recall his talk on phone n sung too, he open his eyes n think why sung call is recalling him . She said dont leave cont to recall your memory which he did n saw his painting how he feel attached to it n with the girl face, he cont n most think arrive his delhi entry n how he was following the girl then both lost in their eyes n how they fall n the romantic scenes which he spend with his pari, how he said to not waste tears it prescious for him how he wanted that time stop there n their hug too n how he call her pari.

On recalling all this he feel relax n better n he got to know it related with the first time call too which he sung, he thx her after being normal way n good too, he thx her for being their n help him without knowing her n relief his pain too.

Both was not recognizing their voice , she said your welcome to him, main time sumeet who was calling her n it come busy he get angry on thinking with who she is busy to talk n cont do it until ishita told raman to hold she will attend a call.

She receive sumeet call, he blast on her as she say hello , ... " With whom you are talking so long time haan ". she feel sad as he did not give her time he start to shout on her ... she lie to him n talk rudely too on saying , she is talking with one client for work n sumeet cut it . She has tears in eyes n feel sad to pe soon part with sumeet whom her heart dont love n she dont like too .

She recall her call n unhold it n just say sorry with a sad voice which was not hide from raman n he ask,..." What happen her voice sound sad is she crying ? , he ask in a concern way with nice n polite way. She try to hide on saying no only some thing enter in her eyes .
... Which he said ..." dont try to hide he can feel her sadness n pain too what happen whose call it was did some one talk badly with her ? .

She cont try to hide but after his way of asking n make her feel close to him n the way he said ..." YOU JUST HELP ME FROM MY PAIN N NOW YOU LOOK SAD N YOU WANT ME TO NOT RELIEF YOU NOT GOOD, PLEASE TELL ME WHAT HAPPEN OR WHAT I CAN DO FOR YOU? ".

She could not refused n keep thinking he is a stranger still want to cheer her up n the one whom she will have a relation did not even think to say sorry what type of relation is this , she came out of thought with his sweet voice ... hello are you there miss .

I " HMMM YES SORRY TO DISTURB YOU I WILL HANG NOW ".

R " OH HELLO DONT TRY TO ACT SMART , I TOLD YOU I WONT LEAVE YOU LIKE THIS OK ,YOU DONT WANT TO SHARE YOUR PROB IT OK BUT I WILL DO WHAT I FELT TO DO N ITS TO CHEER YOU N FOR THAT DO AS I SAID " .

I " HOW YOU WILL CHEER ME ? ".

R " DONT WORRY FOR THAT , JUST TRUST ME , WILL YOU TRUST ME? " .

I " DO I HAVE OTHER OPTION THAT TO TRUST YOU ".

R " THANKS , OK CLOSE YOUR EYES , THINK YOU ARE IN A GARDEN , YOU CAN SEE A BENCH IN A CORNER N A BEAUTIFUL GIRL IS SITTING , ALONE WITH A SAD FACE , IT YOU WEARING A BLUE N BLACK SARWAL SUIT , WAITING FOR SOME ONE TO CHEER YOUR MOOD TO BROUGHT SMILE ON YOUR FACE N A HANDSOME GUY LIKE ME WALKING TOWARD YOU " .

She open her eyes as he said the same color of dress which she like which she saw in the mall but how he know , then he cont.

R " BUT HOW YOU WILL RECOGNIZE ME, WE NEVER MET BEFORE ? " , he ask.

She reply with eyes close in a soft voice

I " YOU WILL BE IN A BLUE LIGHT SHIRT N A NAVIN PANT TOO .

R " WOW YOU SAID MY CHOICE OK I CAME TO YOU SIT NEXT TO YOU N ASK TO STOP BEING SAD N YOU LOOK PRETTY WHILE YOU SMILE , YOUR SMILE IS PRESCIOUS FOR ME , I WILL DO A FUNNY SMILE WHICH WILL BRING YOUR SMILE BACK , I WILL SAY KEEP SMILE ALWAYS ".

Which she really smile n talk in a sweet way ... which he say see my magic has work on you , she feel relax n forget about sumeet too.

She thx him n say ..." ITS STRANGE WE DONT KNOW EACH EVER N WE HELP EACH EVER TOO BEING STRANGERS , IT STRANGE I FEEL COMFOTABLE WITH YOUR TALK , YOU ARE A NICE GUY , I FELT I HAVE HEARD YOUR VOICE SOME WHERE BUT DONT KNOW WHERE " .

R " HEY YOU KNOW WHERE RADIO REMEMBER IT ME THAT NIGHT CALL N WE SUNG TOO IT ME SEE TODAY WE GOT ANOTHER CONNECTION WE KNEW EACH EVER TOO, LETS BE FRIENDS WHAT SAY ? I WILL CALL YOU DOST OK ".

I " OH IT YOU YES I STILL REMEMBER THAT NIGHT CALLING N THE SONG TOO , OK WILL BE FRIENDS TOO WILL CALL YOU DOST .

R " PROMISE ME YOU WONT STAY SAD NOW WHEN YOU FEEL SAD JUST THINK OF ME OR CALL ME I WILL CHEER YOU OK DOST , MAY I KNOW IF YOU ARE MARRIED , ENGAGED OR SINGLE ? IF YOU DONT MIND " .

I " IM SINGLE FOR NOW BUT SOON WILL GET ENGAGE TOO " . in a low sound

R" LET ME GUESS WITH THIS VOICE IM SURE YOU ARE NOT HAPPY OR DONT LOVE YOUR WOULD BE FIANCEE RIGHT ? .

I " ACTUALLY YES I DONT LOVE HIM IT FOR MY PARENTS SAKE IM DOING THIS BUT MY HEART IS NOT LET ME TO LIKE OR LOVE HIM ".

R " HMM I THINK NOT HIM WHOM YOU SHOULD BE THAT MY FEELING.

I " MAY BE YOU ARE RIGHT .

R " IF YOU MET SOME ONE BEFORE YOUR ENGAGE N YOU FALL IN LOVE THEN WHAT WILL YOU DO ? ".

I " I DONT KNOW N WHAT ABOUT YOU ARE YOU STILL SINGLE ? OR ".

R " IM BUT SOON WILL NOT BE SINGLE AS I MET MY DREAM GIRL TWO DAYS AGO MY LIFE MY PARI ".

On hearing him say pari she recall the last time she heard pari was in mall n even after song call she want to be sure if his the same guy whom she met two days ago , her heart was beating faster too n ask him

I" YOU MET HER TWO DAYS AGO WOW ,WHERE ? IF YOU WANT TO TELL ME ". she was praying in heart to be him whom her heart beat for .

R " WHY NOT , I MET HER IN SHOPPING MALL IN DELHI , N WHILE SHE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE THE MALL ON CALLING HER PARI SHE TURN N LOOK AT ME ".

now she was sure with whom she was talking she was on cloud nine with so happy her face was red woth blushing on thinking that day n now she is talking to him she dont know how to react on this to shout yells with happiness scream what to do she pinch her to know it not a dream tears of happiness was droping from eyes , she wipe her tears n

I " YOU FALL IN LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ? .with smile on face

R " NO I WAS ALWAYS IN LOVE WITH HER BEFORE I MET HER FROM MY MIND N DREAM TOO BUT MET HER PERSONALY TWO DAYS AGO , SHE IS EXACTLY THE SAME WAY I USED TO SAY , OUR HEARTS MET , I COULD FELT SAME FROM HER SIDE TOO , MEANS LOVE FOR ME , I LOVE HER MADLY BUT ONLY ONE THING I DONT KNOW IF SHE HAS THE MOLE IN HER WAIST TOO ".

she place her hand on her waist where is the mole n surprise how he can know about mole but was happy he too love her that why she felt comfortable too with him .

I " WHAT IF SHE WILL OR ALREADY ENGAGE WITH SOME ONE ELSE ?" .

R " IM SURE SHE IS NOT YET BUT IF SHE WILL AS YOU SAID WILL BE , THEN ANY THING CAN HAPPEN DEAR , SHE WILL BE NOT ABLE TO BE WITH OTHER ONE AS I WONT LET IT HAPPEN IF NEEDED TO FIGHT I WILL TOO MY LOVE IS SO STRONG N DEEP THAT NO ONE CAN DEFFEND IT I HAVE GOD BLESDING WITH ME N I THINK MY LOVE IS NOT FROM THIS UEAR BUT LONG YEARS AGO ".

I " DO YOU REMEMBER ? YOU CALL ME PARI AFTER THE CALL THAT NIGHT ".

R " REALLY I DID THEN I WILL ASSUME IT YOU THEN " , he laugh n say " YOU WOULD TELL ME THAT YOU WAS THERE TOO WHY YOU WILL HIDE TELL ME IT WAS YOU ? " .

I " NO I WAS NOT , HOW I WILL BE THERE WITH YOU IN THAT MALL N FALL ". she stop

R " WHAT HAPPEN AHEAD ? CONT IT PLEASE PARI FOR ME ".

I " IM NOT PARI N HOW WOULD I KNOW IT LATE I NEED TO SLEEP BYE DOST ". try to avoid him she the end call without listening to him .

Raman found it strange why she cut fast m why behave strangly n suddenly too on hearing him call her pari but he feel happy n relax too .

Both in their side they wish a good night to each ever with smile on face n they sleep well too as after long years they fall sleep peacefull .

Next day pass well for both raman who cont searching for his pari , ishita was is full happy mood n smile on face too .

Appa inform ishita her elder cousin anna from chennai will come for her engagement ... ishita was please to know it n was so excited to meet him for first time ... after she ask her appa why anna never met them before ... he told her anna was not interesred to meet family after his sweet little sis death , n they could nit went to meet him that time as your amma was expecting you n you born after two days of his sis death he told us to keep your name ishita .

She ferl strange when appa was talking on anna n most when she hear his name from appa mouth ashok her heart wad feeling very happy like she was so cravy to meet him why this n she know she heard this name before too ashok it was doing echo in her hears .

PRECAPE : ASHOK ENTRY N ISHRA DANCE IN MASK PARTY

SUGGEST ME ONE SONG WHICH WILL RELATED ON A MASK SONG

HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT N WILL LEAVE COMMENT TOO

THX
HANSA

Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago

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raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Too good hansu

Like ishra conversation, they r so comfortable Yaar

Sumeet is a dog.

Precap is interesting.

Continue soon.

Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Lovely update hansa
i like ishra phone conversation.
Ashok entry in next update.
Ishu recognised ,the same boy she talking...

Ashok is cousin to ishu..
precap is intresting..

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Sushma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

hansa amazing wow!!! I'm so happy they r recognising each other lil lil... please continue soon

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..ishra..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

awesome update dear...raman and ishita phone convo was beautifully written...summet is so rude yrr he made ishita cry..but not to worry raman is here for his pari haha...wow now ishita know that guy was raman and she is happy too..raman also joins the dots...ooh now ashok entry will happen..excited for ishra dance..continue soon..

Edited by ..ishra.. - 10 years ago