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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: --abha--

Thank u...I personally love this one...yar I am confused
Di its prohibited ..call me abha 😊

Ok miss abha 😉

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Hello all

I am back with a new update

Read and enjoy 😉

As it is not proof read plz avoid mistakes if any 😳

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Part 8

It continues from where it stops

After saying that bye Raman walked away and shagun smiles and excuses herself for a call and goes so their are only mihir and ishu left over there

Mihir : ishita look I can explain it is just ...

But was cut by ishu as she said she knows

Mihir :( confused ) what do u know ????

Ishita : mihir ( and she turns towards him) do u trust me

Mihir : ( more confuse ) what where did that come from

Ishita : yes or no mihir

Mihir : yes I do ( as he looked into her eyes he could see pain hurt anger and what not but he kept quite )

Ishita just held mihirs hand and said chalo ( come )

Mihir : kha

( where )

Ishita : mihir no questions just walk

And ishu took mihir to her home

Mihir : ishita hum yaha kya kar rahe hai see I like u but mai us type ka ladka Nahi hoon

( what r we doing hear see I like u but I am not that type )

Ishu : shut up mihir

And led him to a closed room mihir looked at her questingly as she opened the door it was too dark and when ishu switched on the light what he say shook him to the core

Mihir : ( stammering ) ni..ni..nishita ...nishita Iyer

Ishu looked up at him as he wiped her tears

Ishu : right nishita Iyer iyers ki badi bati and my elder sis

( big daughter of iyers )

Mihir : no no no this is just not possible ishita look I will tell u what happen plz don't land up into conclusions plz ...

But was again cut by ishu

Ishu : mihir I know Raman is innocent

Mihir stared at her with a blank expression so much was running in his Mind he could not just voice it out

Ishu as if reading his mind

Ishu : yes mihir ur thinking right I am ishu vahi ishu jis se Raman payar Kartha tha vahi ishu jis ke vajah se aj vo is halath mai hai

( yes mihir ur thinking right I am ishu that ishu whome Raman loved that ishu because of whome he is like this today )

Panch sal ho gaye mihir picle panch saal se I am searching for Raman

( 5 years mihir from last 5 year )

Aur finally muje shagun mili us na muje ek jhooti khani sunaye that Raman ne nishu Akka ko ...

But what she dint know is jab yeh sab ho raha tha mai vahi par thi mai ne sab Kuch dheka aur sab Kuch Suna

Par is sab ke piche shagun ka dimag Nahi hai yeh koi aur hai jo yeh khel khel raha hai shagun is just a source

Mai us tak phounchana chathi hum aur is liye I am hear

(And finally I got shagun she said me a fake story of how Raman tried to ...

But what she dint know was when all this was happning I was there I saw everything I head everything

But shagun s is not the one behind this she is just a source used by someone else

And I want to get him and that is y I am hear )

Par mai yeh sab akele Nahi kar sakthi I need ur help

( but I can't do it alone )

Mihir : how can I help

Ishu : told him the plan

Mihir : r u out of ur mind Raman risked his life to save u to keep u safe ur sis lost her life just so that u can live and what r u doing do u have any idea ki if this plan fail u might loose ur life for gods sake

Ishu: Raman hai mare zindagi mihir I can die for him any time I want justice mihir and this is the only way out will u help me or no !!!!!

( Raman is my life )

Mihir : fine just cool down but I don't understand y did u get me in this room u could have told me in the hall also right

Ishita : mihir this house has spy cams in it what ever u speak and tel gets recorded and they would come to know fortunately I have manage to discard the cams of this room and as it remains close no one cares about it

Mihir : ishita thum jantha ho na ki thum kya kar rahi ho

( u know right what ur doing )

Ishu : haaa mihir I know but I don't have an other choice

Mihir : and how exactly do u think ur going to remind Raman everything u know his condition don't u

Ishu : bhale hi us ka dimag muje Nahi phchantha par us ka dil vo muje jantha hai

( what if his brain dosent remember me his heart does )

Phele bhi yeh music hum ko pas laya tha is dance ki Karen Hume payar ka ehasas hua Tha aur abb yahi muje mere Raman se phir milvaegay

( first also music bought us close because of dance we fell in love now that will only help me get my Raman back )

Mai aj bhi vo din Nahi bholi jis ne Hamari zindagi badaldi

( I still dint forget that day which changed our life )

Flash back

If was a cloudy evening and was fully dark out there but a persons heart was so full of joy that she was feeling it all to be very beautiful

Ishitas diary

Dear diary

. Aj finally Raman muj se apne dil ki bath Bolege mai aj bhoth khush hun itni khush ki mai bata bhi Nahi sakthi

( today finally Raman will tell me what is their in his hear I am so happy that I can't even express how happy I am )

At the same time Raman entered ishus room and saw her lying on the bed and having a dreamy smile holding a photo frame close to her heart

He moved a little closer to get a better view and was his photo which she was holding and a naughty idea pope in his mind

And he silently went and sat beside her feeling someone's presence ishu opened her eyes and say Raman

Ishu : kya ravan Kumar abhi tak sirf sapno mai athe they aur abb tho so they jagtey hastey rotey sirf thum hi nazara athey ho and

pulled him to herself

( what ravan Kumar till today u used to come only in my dreams but not I see u every where )

as she felt him responding to the hug she realized it was not a dream he was hear it was him he really was hear and all she coul do was say

Ishu : Raman !!!!

And he pulled her more closer if even possible and replied yes sweetheart

But their this romantic trace was broken by a phone call a call that changed this life's and made it a living hell

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Asha

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Unres

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Hey how did u know ill be the first one?? Chudail hai kya??

Hihi..

okay so u know rgt since morning I have been irritating u for telling me wht u had written n u nicely refused to tell me and told I have to wait till might..

now what happened raha nahi gaya nah!!!!

isiliye jaldi update hannn...

okay ..

coming to the update...

Kya baat hai.. Sach mein gun powder hi hai yaar.. manna padega boss twists toh tum log aise laate ho naa...

now waiting to know what happened in the phone call .. that changed their life...

wht happend to nishita that she lost her life .. why did she give up her life for saving ishu. . Y did raman lose his memory..

show their propose track as well...

okay ab bahut pooch liya .. aur pakaa bhi diya..

ill wait for gayas update now...

PS gaya tannu aka asha tells me that she is a lot irritating and doesn't let u live in peace.. she does that to me does she do that to u too...

Edited by sush_rddt - 10 years ago

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
Res

As expected ur first waiting for u to unres 😉

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abha

@..abha..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

res

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Update aa gaya...

So its revenge not from Raman but Guru...Raman and nishita tried too save ishu from whom Guru obsession...

So all this we see was to show shagun and her sathi (offcourse as per u since twist devi can change anything)...

I loved she involved mihir in this...I am so happy that finally understand something🤣...nhi to i was so confused...

Flashback was so cute...naughty and romantic Raman...

Amazing asha...

All the best Gaya😆😆

Waiting for next

Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: --abha--
res

Hey abha waiting for u to u res 😳

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: --abha--
res
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Update aa gaya...

So its revenge not from Raman but Guru...Raman and nishita tried too save ishu from whom Guru obsession...

So all this we see was to show shagun and her sathi (offcourse as per u since twist devi can change anything)...

I loved she involved mihir in this...I am so happy that finally understand something🤣...nhi to i was so confused...

Flashback was so cute...naughty and romantic Raman...

Amazing asha...

All the best Gaya😆😆

Thanks abha well this was my version of the story abb readers ko itna bhi kya confuse karna 😉😆 but u never know with our in house twist queen 😉 puri ki puri kaya palat ho sakthi hai 😆 just wait and watch 😉

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
Unres
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Hey how did u know ill be the first one?? Chudail hai kya??
Hihi..
okay so u know rgt since morning I have been irritating u for telling me wht u had written n u nicely refused to tell me and told I have to wait till might..
now what happened raha nahi gaya nah!!!!
isiliye jaldi update hannn...
okay ..
coming to the update...

Kya baat hai.. Sach mein gun powder hi hai yaar.. manna padega boss twists toh tum log aise laate ho naa...
now waiting to know what happened in the phone call .. that changed their life...
wht happend to nishita that she lost her life .. why did she give up her life for saving ishu. . Y did raman lose his memory..
show their propose track as well...
okay ab bahut pooch liya .. aur pakaa bhi diya..
ill wait for gayas update now...

PS gaya tannu aka asha tells me that she is a lot irritating and doesn't let u live in peace.. she does that to me does she do that to u too...

Hwww 😲 ulta chood kotval ko datey 😉 dhekho gaya3 she is still teasing me 😭

And I knew u will be first as subh se u literally ate up my head for the update miss Dracula 😆

Kha tha na gun powder hoga 😉 and thumare questions kya karu mai tera arey mari maa adha suspense tho. Thu hi khulvadegi 😆 tere sath soch samaj kar bolna padega 😉

And yes I irritate gaya3 and I irretate only her she is special u see 😉😆

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Hey asha..i loved this twist:-)

hey ishita find out shaggy truth,shaggy is just a source to find real culprit..

Criminal batch under estimating ishita..

Gaya3 kounse twist lekai ayenge etho dekna padiga..

mihir is loving ishita na?then how he took all this..:->

O nishita death time ishu is also there..
She witnessed all..

To protect ishita,nishita sacrified her life..and raman lost his memory..

Shaggy put spy camers all over house,yaar smart batch..
How they are planning this..

Ishita is smarter then criminal batch..

Flash back is dreamy to ishita..raman is there with her..ha ha ha puttar moka nahi choda...

Waiting for next part:-)

thanks for pm:-)

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Hey asha..i loved this twist:-)

hey ishita find out shaggy truth,shaggy is just a source to find real culprit..

Criminal batch under estimating ishita..

Gaya3 kounse twist lekai ayenge etho dekna padiga..

mihir is loving ishita na?then how he took all this..:->

O nishita death time ishu is also there..
She witnessed all..

To protect ishita,nishita sacrified her life..and raman lost his memory..

Shaggy put spy camers all over house,yaar smart batch..
How they are planning this..

Ishita is smarter then criminal batch..

Flash back is dreamy to ishita..raman is there with her..ha ha ha puttar moka nahi choda...

Waiting for next part:-)

thanks for pm:-)

Ur most welcome after a long time lamba wala comment although not the longest but long I am sooo happy 😆😳 glad ur liking the twist abb gaya3 amma ka tho vahi Jane 😉