NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA - Page 16

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Raman cheats Nishita or she died Bcz of him
So from where ishra loved each other??
Who is new entry..
Ayyo.. Mera sir ghoom raha hai

Originally posted by: hana_y

wow awesome asha so big twist about shagun she love raman n want to snatch him from ishita too good n the song the scene of ishra too

ishu feel sad for n hurt for raman n who tge hell is the other man han not ashok or subu please hate them

too good

Originally posted by: divazfankau

nice update
tabhi toh main sochu
shagun itni achi kab hogayi
nice twist
continue soon

Originally posted by: --abha--

Awesome asha...

Wow...tumne gaya ka sapna todh diya😆...Shagun with negative trait🤣...Gaya3 love positive shagun, param, ashok...Since u are too there I am hoping she will be negative😆😆😆

Ishu loves him...How? What about Nishita? We know about Raman and Mihir being flat on Ishu😳😳... looking for some Ishra moments😳...

Why chotu update...I want big one...

Continue soon...

All the best Gaya...

Originally posted by: ..crystal..

Nice update

Originally posted by: rk654

nice update...

Hi Kutties 😊

Fever...🤢
So no PMs from me... (Sorry 😳)

Here goes the next part

Not proofread

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PART-7


"Raman Bhalla...He is mad. You better stay away from him. Kab kaise behave karega iska pata nahin. And Ishita...I want her. Ek baar haath se nikal gaya. Voh bhi uski voh naajayas behen ke vajha se."

(When and how'll he behave is unpredictable___ Once she slipped off my hands because of her illegitimate sister)


Shagun: "I know everything Gurveer...Still I love him."


Guru: "Toh karo...aur Ishita ki saath do. Anyhow, Raman will reject her.She has to come to me."

(Then do. Be with Ishita)


Shagun: "Mujhe dar lagta hai...Mihir!"

(I'm afraid... Mihir!)


Guru: Furrowing his eyebrows, "Kaun hai voh?"

(Who's he?)


Shagun: "Raman ka dost. Bhai bulathe hai use. Something is fishy. Voh kabhi kisiko Raman ke aas-paas jaane nahin deti. Like a guard!"

(Raman's friend. He calls him Bhai. He never lets anyone to come close to Raman)


Guru: "Distract him."


Shagun: "You won't like the way he is being distracted."


Guru: Loudly, "Spit it out you..."


Shagun: "He loves Ishita."


Guru: Fisting his hand, "I'm going to strangle him."


Shagun: "Toh aur kya karun?"

(Then what to do?)


Guru: "Don't worry...I'll deal Mihir. You just focus on Raman and Ishita. Use kuch nahin hona chahiye"

(Nothing should happen to them)


Shagun: "Both will be safe"

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Raman woke up with a terrible head ache. He looked at the large frame of him kissing Mihir with a quote under it, "My best friend...My mind and soul...Forgive me if I forgets you".


Mihir was home and came to Raman with a cup of coffee. He in no time ran to the bathroom feeling pukey. He screamed furiously from inside to Mihir , "What crap was that! You know I can't drink this...bitter...shit!"


Mihir: "But you're the one who asked me yesterday to make it."


Raman: Opening the door in anger, "In your dreams. Why wil I ask for such...shittt...!!!"


Mihir:Showing his palms, "OK calm down. I'll make some tea."


Ramzn: Making a face, "No thank you. I'm fine thirsty"


In half an hour they came out of Raman's home for college. Raman asked Mihir the bike's key which Mihir politely denied to give.


Mihir: "Bhai...you know you can't drive."


Raman: Sadly, "Till when will I be this useless yaar?"


Mihir: "Don't think like that bhai...everything will be alright."


As usual Raman's bike entered the compound carrying him on its back by Mihir. Shagun and Ishita were standing under a tree awaiting them for the practice. They walked to the boys as soon as they stopped the engine. Raman walked past them showing attitude while Mihir smiled nervously. In no time he also followed Raman without saying anything more.


Ishita: Calling them from behind by clapping, "Wow...what a drama...! You both promised us of participating in the fusion drama."


Raman stopped in his track and turned to her crinkling his eyebrows. She stared at him her arms across her chest. He stood close to her in anger. His breath fanning her face. She closed her eyes melting in his proximity while a shocked or jealous Shagun and hell nervous Mihir looked on. Raman hissed at her by pulling her closer by her arms, "WHO ARE YOU?"


Ishita: In shock, "RK..."


Raman: "B...! (Stressing each lettee) R.K.B...I know who I'm...! I'm asking who the hell are you?"


Mihir: Intervening in between, "She is my girlfriend bhai"


Raman: Loosening his grip genuinely feeling bad, "Oh...is it? I..I'm sorry...I didn't know it. Oh Miss...he never told me...Pardon me.."


Ishita: Dreamily with teary eyes, "It's OK RK..."


Raman: Smiling at her, "Hmm...no RKB."


Ishita: Nodding her head, "Yeah...yeah...RK...B"


TO BE CONTINUED BY ASHA 😃


NOTE: Most of you've assumed of RKB's memory lose. I couldn't help but use that here, but differently. The concept is inspired by a Malayalam movie Ormayundo Ee Mukham (Do you Remember this face?) in which the heroine has a decease that she can't remember anything happened the last day when she wakes up the next day.


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Gaya3 Devi ki jay

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Gaya3 Devi ki jay

Sare bolo jay gaya3 zoor se bolo jag gaya3😆

Yeh kya tha I mean like really😲

This was exactly what I wanted😉

Thank u gaya3😆

What seeing my reaction u thought I was surprised no darling😉u exactly did what I wanted😉abb dheakna asha ka Blast !!!!!😉

You're the one who made me do it 😆
By that twist...
Ek Chadke mein Ishita to RKB kar lover banakar bhada diya dhana mujhe...🤣
I needed to do this😭

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

You're the one who made me do it 😆
By that twist...
Ek Chadke mein Ishita to RKB kar lover banakar bhada diya dhana mujhe...🤣
I needed to do this😭