IshRa FF : ||Tum Dena Sath Mera||(chap 17/pg 132) 17th OCT Th #1 - Page 61

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diya positive shagun...chalo ...hopefully
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Yeah!! When Ishita will come with proof, Raman hav to believe her. thank you.
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diya positive shagun...chalo ...hopefully Abhi ke liye positive. 😆

i hope all girls give support to ishu...and param ka pardafash ho... Of course, jab JKR mission mein hai toh success toh hoga hi.

uske liye intezaar kijiye agli update ka...😆 Hehe!! Waise chapter toh likh dia hai par post kal karungi, abhi english translation add karna baki hai but this update has ishra romance.

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Chapter 15


"Kya hua waha Ishita?" Shagun asked when Mihika and Ishita got down from car, they explained everything.

(Shagun: What happen there Ishita?)

"Yeh Param toh ek number ka fraud nikla!!" Mihika said.

(Mihika: This Param is a No.! fraud.)

"Hume kuch karna hoga. Yeh Simmi di ki zindagi ka sawal hai. Mein abhi bhai ko sab keh dungi, phir jo karna hai wohi karenge." Rinki said tensely.

(Rinki: We have to do something. This is about Simmi di's life. I am going to tell everything to bhai now, then he will do whatever he wants.)

"No Rinki. Yeh Param bohot chalu hai, Jiju ke kuch karne se pehle hi wo apna bazi palat dega." Mihika said, meanwhile Ishita didn't say anything.

(Mihika: No Rinki. This Param is very clever, before jiju will do anything, he will do something.)

"Ishita!!" Shagun shook her to bring her back, "Kya soch rahi ho?"

(Shagun: Ishita!! What are you thinking?)

"Umm!! Wo... Mihika tera jo dost hai usse Param ki sari khabar le." She said to Mihika and then looked at Rinki, who was crying, Ishita patted on her back to console her, "Sshh!! Kuch nehi hoga Simmi ke sath, mein kuch nehi hone dungi. Bharosa rakho." She wiped her tears and continued, "Ghar pe kisi ko kuch maat batana abhi." Rinki nodded.

(Ishita: Mihika you collect all information about Param from your friend.
Ishita to Rinki: Nothing will happen with Simmi, I will never let him do anything. Trust me. Now don't tell all this to family member.)

"Acha chalo akka!! Mein kal milti hoon." Mihika bid bye to them and took a leave when Three ladies walked to their apartment, suddenly Ishita noticed Raman's car, "Arey Raman aagaye itni jaldi." She thought and walked in.

(Mihika: Okay let's go akka!! See you tomorrow.
Ishita: Raman has arrived so early!!)

Ishita opened her flat with the key and walked in, it was completely dark, "Shayad mummyji ke waha hai." She murmured and turned on the lights. She then put the bags on sofa and headed towards her room, she opened the room and turned on the lights. She was stunned to see the decorated room, it was decorated with the heart shaped balloons and flowers and scented candles.

(Ishita: May be he is with mummyji.)

"Kya chal raha hai Raman ke maan mein." She murmured with a smile and looked all around to search him.

(Ishita: What's going on in Raman's mind?)

"Raman!!" She called his name but she didn't get any answer.

"Raman aap ho kaha??" She said and suddenly felt his arm around her stomach, she smiled.

(Ishita: Raman where are you?)

"Kya baat hai kuch alaag hi mood mein ho aap!!" She said smiling.

(Ishita: What happen, you are in different mood!!)

"Haan!!" He made her turn towards him and continued, "Pata hai aaj kya hai?"

(Raman: Yes!! Do you what's today?)

She flicked her eye brows to ask, he replied while putting his both arm on her shoulder, "Aaj hi din bhagwan ne mujhe tumhe dia."

(Raman: On this day, god gave me YOU!)

"Matlab?"

(Ishita: Means?)

"Matlab aaj hamri shadi ko ek mahine ho gaye."

(Raman: Means today we completed one month of our marriage.)

"Aapko yaad hai?" She asked in disbelief.

(Ishita: Do you remember?)

"Kyu? Tumhe kya laga sirf tumhe hi yeh sab yaad rehta hai?" He asked.

(Raman: Why? What do you think, only you can remember all these.)

"Mujhe toh yaad nehi tha!!"

(Ishita: I didn't remember.)

"Achha?? Phir wo ghadi kiske liye kharidi? Koi naya aashiqu?" He asked while raising one eye brow.

(Raman: Reall? Then for whom you bought that watch? New lover?)

"Konsi ghadi?" She pretends.

(Ishita: Which watch?)

"Wohi jo shayad hi tumhare shopping bag mein hai."

(Raman: That one, which is may be in your shopping bag.)

"Nehi toh!!" She replied.

(Ishita: No.)

"Achha?? Zara mein bhi toh dekhoon!!" Saying this he was going to check when Ishita snatched the bag saying, "Ladkio ke bag dekhna buri baat." Raman smiled.

(Raman: Really? Let me check then.
Ishita: Checking ladies bag, bad manner.)

"Achha theek hai. Phir khud hi de do!!"

(Raman: Okay fine. Then give me yourself.)

Ishita smiled and was going to give him the watch but stopped and asked, "Waise aapko pata kaise chala?"

(Ishita: By the way how did you know?)

"Rinki ne bataya."

(Raman: Rinki told me.)

"Rinki ko na mein..." She murmured.

(Ishita: Rinki, I will...)

"Ab uss par gussa baad mein karna pehle mujhe mera ghadi do." He pouted when she gave him the watch, he opened the box and exclaimed, "Wow!!!"

(Raman: Now show your anger on her later. First you give me my watch.)

"Pasand aya?"

(Ishita: Do you like it?)

"Bohot." He said and paused for a while then said again, "Par tumse zyada nehi." She blushed.

(Raman: Yes!! But not than you.)

"Achha ab ankhe band karo!!" Raman demanded.

(Raman: Okay now close your eyes.)

"Par kyu?" She asked sarcastically.

(Ishita: But why?)

"Mein kaha iss liye." She closed her eyes, "Jab tak mein na kahu kholna maat."

(Raman: I told you that's why. Now don't open it till I am saying.)

"Theek hai baba."

(Ishita: Okay fine.)

After came there with a cake, and said "Ab kholo."

(Raman: Now open.)

She opened her eyes and smiled seeing the cake, then they cut the cake together and fed each other.

"Than... Thank you Raman."

"Kis liye?

(Raman: For what?)

"Meri zindagi mein aneke liye." Saying this she hugged him when he hugged her back.

(Ishita: For coming in my life.)

After a while they parted from each other and Raman said, "Phirse ankhe band karo, ek aur surprise hai."

(Raman: Again close your eyes, I have one more surprise.)

"Ab kya?"

(Ishita: Now what?)

"Karo na!!"

(Raman: Do it.)

"Aap bhi na Raman..." Saying this she again closed her eyes when Raman slowly took her near the mirror, "Kaha le ja rahe ho?"

(Ishita: You are too much Raman. Where are you taking me?)

"Sshhh!!"

He made her stand near the mirror and then gently tied a diamond necklace around her neck, "Ab kholo."

(Raman: Now open your eyes.)

Ishita opened her eyes and shocked to see that necklace, "Raman yeh!! Itni mahengi cheez kyu?"

(Ishita: Raman this!! Why did you buy this expensive thing?)

Saying this she was going to remove it when Raman stopped her saying, "Come on Ishita. Tum iske price pe maat jao, iss mein chupa hua mere pyar ko dekho."

(Raman: Don't go to it's price, see my love hiding in it.)

"Nehi Raman yeh sahi nehi hai."

(Ishita: No Raman it's wrong.)

"Ishita... Tumse zyada expensive mere liye aur kuch nehi hai. Please mere liye." Raman lovingly said when Ishita couldn't deny, she accepted it.

(Raman: Ishita nothing is much expensive than you. Please for me.)

"Dance?" He forwarded his hand gently when she put her hand on him, Raman hold her around her waist under her saree, Ishita could feel his warm touch on her bare waist, she gently put her one hand on his shoulder and the other one entangled with him, they moved their bodies with the song...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki...
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam...
Tere naam pe meri zindagi...
Likh di mere humdum...

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena...
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum...
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena...
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum...

Raman caressed her face and then twirled her in a circle and the hold her around her stomach, he rested his chin on her shoulder and waved their bodies.

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein..
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain...
Duniya meri humdum...

Raman twirled her holding her finger and then hold her around her waist.


O aasma mila zameen ko meri...
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum...
Tere naam pe meri zindagi...
Likh di mere humdum...

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena...
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum...
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena...
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum...

Raman cupped her face and looked into her eyes, Ishita looked down when Raman kissed on her forehead, and slowly started leaning towards her lips, she could feel his warm breath on her cheeks, she clutched his shirt and closed her eyes. Their lips were inches apart when suddenly Ishita's phone started ringing, they came back to sense.

"Kya yaar!!" Raman murmured and parted from her, Ishita blushed.

(Raman: What's this?)

"Kya?? Ab khade khade Sharma kya rahi ho?? Phone uthao!!" he irately said, Ishita made a face and then answered, "Haan!! Mihika bol."

(Raman: What? Now why are you bluching? Receive the call.
Ishita: Yes Mihika, say.)

"Akka!! 2minute ke niche aao!!"

(Mihika: Akka please come down for 2minute.)

Ishita looked at Raman and replied "Abhi?"

(Ishita: Now?)

"Akka bohot zaroori hai. Param ke barey mein. Please."

(Mihika: Akka, it's important, it's about Param.)

"Theek hai, mein aati hoon!!" She hanged up the call when Raman said, "Kaha chali abhi?"

(Ishita: Okay, I am coming.
Raman: Where are you going?)

"Wo Raman... Mihika se milna hai. Mein bas 5minute mein aati hoon." She said in a pleading way.

(Ishita: Raman, going to meet with Mihika, will be back within 5miutes.)

"Wow!! Abhi toh pati ke liye waqt hi nehi hai tumhare bas." He replied.

(Raman: Now you havn't time for your husband.)

"Pakka 5minute mein aati hoon." Saying this she was going to leave and turned at Raman and kissed on his cheeks an quickly ran away, he smiled.

(Ishita: Will be back within 5minutes, promise.)

******

"Kya hua? Aisey achanak kyu bulaya? Aur Shagun tum yaha?" Ishita asked worried.

(Ishita: What happen? Why did you call me suddenly? And Shagun you here?)

"Haan!! Mujhe Mihika ne bulaya." Shagun replied.

(Shagun: Yes, Mihika called me.)

"Akka!! Meine Abhimanyu se baat ki aur usne mujhe Param ke barey mein ek baat bataya!!" Mihika said.

(Mihika: Akka!! I talked with Abhimanyu and he said something about Param.)

"Kya?" Shagun asked.

(Shagun: What?)

"Wo Param UK mein ek job karta tha Abhimanyu ke company mein, par waha..." she paused.

(Mihika: Param was woring in Abhimanyu's company in UK and there...)

"Kya Mihika??" Ishita asked tensely.

(Ishita: What Mihika?)

"Waha pe usne ek Indian ladki ke saath badtameezi karne ki koshish ki thi..."

(Mihika: There he tried to rape an Indian girl.)

"Kya!!" Ishita exclaimed in shock.

(Ishita: What!!)

"Haan!! Akka uss ladki ne waha uske khilaf case kar dia tha toh waha ke government ne uski green card cancel kar dia aur phir wo India aagaya."

(Mihika: Yes Akka!! That girl filed a case against him there and the government cancelled his gree card and then he came back to India forever.)

"Chee... Kitna ghatiya aadmi hai yeh." Ishita said disgust.

(Ishita: Such a jerk, he is.)

"Meine Abhimanyu se uss ladki ke barey mein pata karne ke liye kaha hai, shayad wo ladki hamari madad kar paye." Mihika suggested.

(Mihika: I told Abhimanyu to find out about the girl, may be, she can help us.)

"Kaisi madad?" They heard Raman's voice from back when they became shocked.

(Raman: What help?)

"Raman aap??" Ishita asked.

(Ishita: Raman you?)

"Kya hua hai Ishita? Konsi ladki ke barey mein tum baat kar rahe ho?" Raman asked suspiciously.

(Ishita: What happen Ishita? About which girl, you are talking?)

"Raman wo..." She stammered.

"Arey Raman, kuch nehi. Wo Mihika k ek dost ki baat kar rahe the!! Tum chhodo, hamari ladkio ki baat hai yeh." Shagun changed the topic.

(Shagun: Raman, nothing. Mihika was talking about her friend. You leave it, it's girl's talk!!)

"Mihika, kya yaar!! Yeh kya waqt hai faltu ke baat karne ka!! Kabhi bhi apni behen k bula leti hai tu."

(Raman: Mihika, what's this? Is it a time to talk all these nonsense? You called your sister anytime.)

Ishita looked down smiling, "Sorry jiju!! Aagey se dhayan rakhungi, pakka!! Waise kuch kar rahe the kya akka ke saath?" She teased, Ishita gave her a deadly glare.

(Mihika: Sorry jihu, I will take care from next time, promise. By the way are you doing something with akka?)

"Kya akka!! Mein toh bas aise hi pooch rahi hoon!! Kuch khaas hai kya? Wo jiju ne apko itni sundar necklace gift kia." Mihika said pointing at the necklace.

(Mihika: What akka!! I was just asking. Anything special? Jiju gifted you that beautiful necklace.)

"Chup kar. Aur ghar ja." Ishita said.

(Ishita: Shut up and go back to home.)

"Okay, okay. Shagun chalte hai yaar. Unko unka romance continue karne dete hai." She teased and left from there smiling, Ishita too left.

(Mihika: Shagun let's go yaar!! Let them continue their romance.)

Raman was going to leave when Shagun called, "Raman!!"

He stopped and turned at her, "Haan Shagun!!"

(Raman: Yes Shagun?)

"Raman mujhe kuch baat karni thi, Ishita ke bare mein."

(Shagun: I want to talk with you about Ishita.)

"Ishita ke bare mein?" He asked sarcastically.

(Raman: About Ishita?)

"Raman tumhe nhi lagta Ishita ko khudko thoda badalna chahiye!!"

(Shagun: Raman don't you think Ishita should have change herself!!)

"Matlab??"

(Raman: Means?)

"See!! Please don't take me wrong, as you know Toshi aunty ko modern ladki zyada pasand hai, toh tumhe nehi lagta agar Ishita khudko thodi badlegi toh shayad Toshi aunty ko pasand aye!!" Shagun suggested.

(Shagun: As you know Toshi aunty likes modern girls. So don't you think if Ishita changed herself little then Toshi aunty will at least likes her.)

"Haan!! Mein samjh raha hoon tumhari baat. Par mein Ishita ko janta hoon, wo kabhi iske liye raazi nehi hogi." Raman thoughtfully said.

(Raman: Yes!! I understand what you are saying. But I know Ishita, she will never agreed for this.)

"Tum uski fikaar maat karo, mein usse sambhal lungi." Shagun happily said.

(Shagun: You don't worry about that, I will manage her.)

"Thank you Shagun." Raman replied and they walked inside.

*************

(Song from: Badlapur)

That's it. I hope you liked it. Bohot ho gaya idhar udhar ki baat, now let's come to the main track.

Don't forget to comment.

Thank you.

Edited by _KP.ISHRA_ - 10 years ago

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