IshRa FF : ||Tum Dena Sath Mera||(chap 17/pg 132) 17th OCT Th #1 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
First I love all its dialogues commendable job there.
Both have some kind of infatuation or affection towards each other. It was sad .. She lost his father.
Plz just one request don't make an entry of shagun as his second wife plz plz
Now is he gonna help her in making educate.
N again saying update soon ;)
N thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

First I love all its dialogues commendable job there.
Both have some kind of infatuation or affection towards each other. It was sad .. She lost his father.
Plz just one request don't make an entry of shagun as his second wife plz plz
Now is he gonna help her in making educate.
N again saying update soon ;)
N thanks for the pm :)

Thanks!! Umm.. Shagun is here but not as his 2nd wife.. Chill.. 😉 Yeah, I'll update tomorrow 😊 .. Thank..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey, peeps!!


Wow.. I got superb response from you all & I, myself really liked this story & that's why I'm almost giving you regular updates, I hope you all like this.. Here goes the next chapter.. Enjoy...😊 And drop your comments...


As you all want Raman, Ishita's POV.. So, here I have posted.. I'm not good in writing POV, and I definitely know it was not good so please don't throw tomatoes.. 😆

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Chapter 4


Raman's POV


I never thought, in such way, my life will be change.. Raman Kumar Bhalla, who always runs away from the word marriage, is now no more bachelor but I'm not regretting at all, as I myself decided this..


We landed on Mumbai & in way to our house, I don't know how will I convince my family but for now I need some time.. I looked at my side where Ishita sits... Mumbai is a city of joy, people who comes here always lost in the waves of this city.. But Ishita, she looks least interested in all, I know her body is here but her soul, mind still at Chennai, in her own house.. Today I feel so small, I'm a business man, I have enough money to spend, but this time my money couldn't save someone's life, I wish, I could have save him... If he would be alive here, she won't stay like this.. I don't know why but I can't see her like this.. I want to see her always happy, the smile, I really missing it..


I placed my hand on hers & asked "You okay??" She shook her head with a slight smile, it was not the smile which I want to see.. She again rested her head on the window glass, I don't know what she's thinking but I didn't do any favor on her by marry her... I don't know but I couldn't see her in pain that time & I give in for marriage, may be I don't love her yet but I will keep her happy always, I will not let a tear drop from her eyes, from now she's my first priority, I'll give her so much happiness that she never feel alone in her life.. I'll be there always for her & that's my promise...


I closed my eyes in a relief & in next moment I jerked out as I remembered about my family, what if my family don't allow her, okay!! I can leave that house as I know Romi, Mihir all are there.. I looked at Ishita, but I know she will win everyone's heart, yes it will take time, but she has a lot patience than me...


"Bhai, Mr. Murali want to talk with you.." Mihir informed as he got a call, hearing this my anger rises, that bloody man!! Now what he wants "But I don't.. Tell him clearly what I invested on his company, pay me back.." I angrily declared & looked away..


Ishita's POV


I came in a new city, I don't know what god has written in my fate.. Once Subhu rejected me whom I loved a lot & but now he marry me whom I knew just a day back.. Wait!! Why did he marry me?? I'm not educated girl whereas he's business man, we are not perfect in any way then why did he marry me?? Did.. Did he do any favor on me?? No no!! I don't think so.. I don't know what's in his heart but now I'm his wife & I'll do all my duties towards him & his family.. Family.. Do they accept me?? How they are?? I looked at him, if he's with me, I'll win everyone.. I smiled, he will very nice, he's different, when he saved me, I had seen concern in his eyes then first time someone motivated me to study, he's a successful business man but showed off it.. At least not in front of me, may be appa has chosen a right partner for me.. I closed my eyes & I don't know when I drifted in sleep..


Writer's POV


"Ishita!!" Raman called as they reached at the complex, she opened her eyes & found herself sleeping on his shoulder, she was so fit in his arms, she jerked out & was going to straightened up when her hair stuck in his button "Ouch!!" She moaned..


She was going to remove it & at the same time Raman was going to do it when their hands touched, they looked at each other, Ishita quickly looked away & tried to remove it but in vain..


"Ek minute!!" Raman stopped her & gently remove it..

(Raman: One minute!!)


"Tum itna ghabra kyu rahi ho?? Relax aur chalo mere sath.." Ishita smiled a little & took a deep breathe, meanwhile Raman got down & walked to her side to open the door..

(Raman: Why are you getting so nervous?? Relax & come with me..)


"Aao!!" He forward his hand, Ishita looked at him shockingly & with a hesitation she placed her hand on him..

(Raman: Come..)


They walked in the building when Raman stopped her at the gate "Ishita.."


"Hmm!!" She humed..


"Woh.. Meine.. Meine tumse kaha tha na mujhe thoda waqt chahiye.." Ishita shook her head while looking down when he continued "Toh kiya tum kuch din ke liye iss sindoor ko.." Ishita shockingly looked at him as she get what Raman want to say..

(Raman: I.. I told you I need some time.. So can you remove the sindoor for few days...)


"Par.." She was hesitated..

(Ishita: But..)


"Please yaar.. Kuch din ki baat hai.." She nodded helpless...

(Raman: Please yaar.. For few days only..)


"Par.. Aap mujhe mangalsutra utharne ko maat bolna.. Kyu ki yeh mein karne nehi wali hu.." Ishita strictly said...

(Ishita: But.. Please don't force me to remove this mangalsutra because I'm not going to do this..)


Raman sighed "Then just make it sure one one see it.."


"Haan??" She sarcastically asked..


"Sambhalke.. Koi dekh na le.." She shook her head & they goes away..

(Raman: Make sure no one see it..)


Raman rings the door bell as Neelu opened the door "Bhaiya aagaye!!" She shouted..

(Neelu: Bhaiya arrived..)


"Arey chup kar.. Mein koi mehmaan nehi hu jo swagat ke liye sabko bula rahi.." Raman irately said in which Ishita giggled... Raman looked at her & felt relief as something made her smile genuinely..

(Raman: Arey shut up... I'm not a guest here that you are calling everyone to welcome me..)


"Sorry bhaiya.." Neelu apologized..

"Arey puttar!!" Toshi jee walked in hall along with other members & Raman greeted with everyone, meanwhile Ishita stood a far..

"Haye rabba!! Tera yeh kya halat ho gaya, mujhe pata hai woh idli sambhar khake hi hua.. Kitna patla ho gaya mera bachha!!" Toshi jee said with a puppy face..

(Toshi jee: Oh god.. What has happen with you.. I know it happened as you ate idli, sambhar... You became so thin..)

"Arey yaar.. Phir suru ho gaye.." Raman murmured in frustation just then Simmi saw Ishita there "Arey bhai woh kaun hai??"

(Raman: Arey yaar.. Again you start..

Simmi: Arey bro who's she??)

Ishita grabbed everyone's attention, she walked in & took blessing from Toshi jee.. "Kya naam hai puttar tera??"

(Toshi jee: What's your name??)

"Jee.. Ishita Bh.." But she stopped & looked at Raman "Mera.. Mera matlab Ishita Iyer.."

(Ishita: Ishita Bh.. I.. I mean Ishita Iyer..)

"Madrasi hai??" Ishita shook her head in reply..

(Toshi jee: Are you Madrasi?)

"Woh mummy actually iske Appa ek accident mein death ho gaya aur Chennai mein uska koi hai bhi nhi.. Toh meine socha kyu na usse Mumbai le aau, yaha kaam waam karke reh leki.." Raman cleared all things..

(Raman: Actually mummy, her father died in an accident & she haven't anyone in Chennai.. So, I thought to bring her in Mumbai, here she can stay by doing some work...)

"Par woh rahegi kaha??" Toshi jee asked..

(Toshi jee: But where will she live??)

"Mera woh dusra flat hai na.. Waise bhi woh toh bekar hi padha hai.." Toshi jee glared at Raman but before she could say Raman said "Simmi, Rinki uss flat ki chabhi le aur le jaa bha.." Toshi jee glared when Raman corrected "Ishita ko!!" He looked at Toshi jee & sarcastically asked "What??"

(Raman: I have one more flat... And there's already no one lives.. Simme, Rinki take the keys & take Bha.. I Mean take Ishita to the flat...)

Meanwhile Simmi & Rinki took a leave along with Ishita just when she heard Toshi jee said "Tu yaha kya asraam khol rakha hai?? Jise marzi le aaraha hai.." Ishita felt hurt but ignored but Raman saw it & felt bad..

(Toshi jee: Did you open any home here??)

"Arey maa kyu iss choti si baat ka batangar bana rahi ho yaar?? Woh flat toh kisi ko dogi nhi.. Phir agar koi rahega toh kya problem hai??" Raman angrily asked..

(Raman: Arey maa why are you making such issues on this small matter?? You are not going to give this flat to anyone then if she is staying there then what's the problem??)

"Tu ek gaal bata agar kal ko tu kahi aur jayega aur waha bhi aisa hua toh kya tu uss ladki ko bhi yaha le ayega aur rehne dega??" Toshi jee asked back..

(Toshi jee: You say one thing if in future you will go somewhere & there again this thing happens then will you bring that girl here & let her live here??)

"Look ma!! Woh flat mein kharidi thi.. Toh woh mein decide karunga waha kon rahega aur kon nhi.. Iss topic ko aap yehi khatam karo.." Raman angrily declared..

(Raman: Look maa!! I have bought that flat & only I'll decide who will stay there & who will not.. So, stop this topic here only..)

"Haan!! Sab samajhti hu.. Dekh Raman agar tu uss ladki ko kuch aisa waisa sochke le aya na toh yeh baat apne dimag mein daal de aisa mein kabhi hone nhi dungi.. Samjha??" Toshi jee cried on Raman's behavior..

(Toshi jee: Yes.. I understand everything... Look Raman, if you brought her here by thinking something then just let the thoughts out of your mind, I'll never let this happen.. Do you get that??)

"Arey yaar!! Mihir, samjha inko.." Raman said with a frustration & took a leave..

(Raman: Arey yaar.. Mihir make her understand..)

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Ishita walked in the new house, for now it was her house, she was looking all over the flat when Simmi said "Pasand aya tujhe??" Ishita smiled..

(Simmi: Do you like it??)

"Achha chal mein tere liye kuch khane ko le ati hu... Waise tu toh veg khayegi hai na??" Simmi asked & Ishita shook her head little "Jo ki humare ghar pe asani se milegi nhi.." Simmi chuckled & took a leave..

(Simmi: Okay wait.. I'll bring some food for you.. By the way you eats veg right?? Which you'll never get so easily in our house..)

Ishita was looking the flat when Rinki called "Bhabhi.."

Ishita shockingly looked at her "Arey ghabrao mat.. Bhai ne mujhe sab kuch bol diya hai.. Mein bohot khush hu ki aap bhaiya ke life mein ayi ho.. Aap bohot pyaari ho.." Rinki said & hugged her.. For a moment Ishita was startled but later she composed & hugged her back..

(Rinki: Don't get nervous.. Bhai already told me everything.. I'm so happy that you came in my bhai's life... You are so sweet..)

"Apko pata hai bhabhi bhai ne apke barey mein jitna kaha, aap usse bohot achhi ho.. Bhai aapko hamesha khush rakhega.." Ishita smiled & walked to the window side, Rinki took a leave..

(Rinki: You know what bhabhi whatever bhai told me about you, you are more than good from that... Bhai will keep you happy always..)

Ishita saw Raman at outside & recalled their marriage, she took out her mangulsutra which she hide under her dupatta, "Mujhe pata hai Rinki mein unke sath khush rahungi.." She smiled..

(Ishita: I know Rinki, I'll stay happy with him..)

At other side, Raman came out from building angrily & threw all his anger on car, he banged on car in which his hand got injure, Raman recalled Toshi jee's word "Mujhe ghar pe sab ko sab kuch bolna hi hoga!!" Then he remembered Ishita heard what Toshi jee said, he looked up at her flat where Ishita was still standing, "Ishita!!" He whispered her name & goes inside..

(Raman: I have to say them the truth as soon as possible..)

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So, how's the chapter?? Don't forget to comment & also hit like..

Thank you.. 😊




Edited by _KP.ISHRA_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome yaar. the relationship that they share is unique and very interesting please continue soon, cannot wait to read more.
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Originally posted by: ishraBest_2014

wow awesome yaar. the relationship that they share is unique and very interesting please continue soon, cannot wait to read more.

Yes, there relation is unique & that's why their jodi is best.. 😉 Hmm!! Even I can't wait to write.. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow this update is too good...
Raman is so caring towards ishita...
They understand each other soon cutely...
Rinki is a sweetheart...
Eagerly waiting to know why happen next...

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Originally posted by: mayraa

Wow this update is too good...

Raman is so caring towards ishita...
They understand each other soon cutely...
Rinki is a sweetheart...
Eagerly waiting to know why happen next...

Aww!! Yes, Raman is such a sweetheart here 😉 & thank you dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you for PM for all of your updates...nice unique stories..please update regularly
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love ishra pov..
Hmm sudden news of raman is not digested to toshiji.
but maintain the secret is difficult..bcoz toshiji not liking ishu.

arey maa hai yaar,raman ke shaadi ko lekar kuch dreams hogi.raman clearifying situation is not realistic,so toshiji use those words on ishu.

rinky know the news,atleast ishu can share with rinky what she want to express.

o raman hand is injured,y u stopped in mid way diya?

P.s:i love yeh hai mohabbatein of your work..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am loving this silent marriage...It will be different experience...I liked the trust ishita showed in Raman...Toshiji is loud...Rinki is cute here (she pissed me off in show)...
This chori chori chupke chupke thing...and excited for next...Update soonish...Thanx for pm...

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