IshRa FF - Ruined or Reformed || DISCONTINUED|| Note on Page 19 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

This story is really awesome

Continue soon
Waiting for the next update

Thank you so much! Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: usaonly

Now Ishra in danger they are follow them. Where will they drop the girl or take her with them Raman didn't like kid. Please continue so excited for next part.😊

IshRa have gotten in trouble as well since we only know about those people wanting the kid and since IshRa have the girl, let's see what happens with them and that girl...
Thanks for commenting!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

interesting story
enjoyed ishra convo😛
precap🤣
thanks for pm...update it soon😊

Thank you! Glad you liked IshRa's convo and the precap! Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: --abha--

Superb update...I am loving this story of urs...Whole Ishra struck with a kid and with their typical nok jhok...Its amazing...With Raman in love with her and we unaware with what ishu feels create mystery...,

Precap is interesting and cute...

Continue soon
I didn't get pm prabh... 😔

Thank you so much! Glad you're liking this story's concept and the nok jhok! Will try to update soon and will send you a PM for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is just marvellous
Eagerly waiting!!!!
Along with COL#2 too

Good luck prabh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: littlejenny313

This is just marvellous
Eagerly waiting!!!!
Along with COL#2 too

Good luck prabh

Thank you! Will try to update soon! And today's update of COL is up!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 4

"Raman, she's asking for her mom! What do we do?"

"Now where do I get a mom from?"

"Mumma!" the girl started to wail and angered Raman further.

"Man I'll go crazy if she doesn't stop."

"Beta come here." Ishita gently smiled at the small child while Raman turned away unaffected by all that was happening.

The girl was scared seeing Raman's yelling and what all that she had seen in the past hours, she wouldn't trust any stranger in any situation right now.

"Trust me we won't hurt you. And it was your mom who told us to take you with us." Ishita tried to explain.

"Where's mumma?" the child asked innocently.

"You will meet her very soon."

"Promise?"

"Don't worry you will be with your mom very soon! Now come with us until then." She opened her arms and slowly walked towards the girl. The child on the other hand kept on looking at him who was boiling with anger. He looked at one of those angry old men who yelled at you for accidently walking on their lawn. She took a step back again looking at him and Ishita noticed. Walking closer to the child, she quietly whispered to her...

"He looks scary, but he's nice!"

He looked at the small child and gave a fake grin he forced himself into as he got a glare from Ishita. The girl though she tried to remember her mom's rules about strangers couldn't help herself from smiling and agreeing to go along with the two people.

"So I'm Ishita and he's Raman. What's your name?" she asked as they walked back to the car to see if he could do something to get it started and if not they still needed their bags.

"Ruhi." She replied cheekily as they reached the car.

As the two girl waited for him to finishing checking why the dented car wouldn't start, Ishita heard Ruhi's stomach growl. Opening the trunk to take out her camping bag, Ishita pulled out an energy bar and handed it to Ruhi with a smile.

"I don't want that. I don't like it." She whined like any child of her age.

"Okay I'll get something else." She told the girl and wondered what she would want.

She thought of asking Raman, but then knew she would get a weird answer in return or a taunt considering his dislike for kids. She carefully peered over at him standing behind the open bonnet of the car where he was busy trying to fix the car. He looked so tired and had grease, blood and sweat on his face. Feeling concerned for him, she went back to her bag and pulled out a water bottle for him.

"Put a band aid on that cut please." She asked handing him the bottle as he pulled out his handkerchief wiping off his face.

"I'll do it later. Right now I need to get this car started." He said taking a break to drink the water.

"Raman what do kids like to eat?" she asked in one go earning a confused look from him.

"How am I supposed to know?"

"I don't know!"

"Then why did you ask me? Not like I have kids!"

"I thought with the amount of girlfriends you've had, you must have ended up with a kid or two."

"Oh really Madrasan?! Actually who knows maybe secretly I am already a dad? After all I have been with "hanging out" with quite a few people." He smirked at her

"Chee Raman! You're so shameless."

"Chee Raman, so shameless." He mimicked her.

"You are disgusting!"

"Are you just saying that because you're not one of those girls yet? Wait I forgot you probably want to get married first."

"Who wants to be the girlfriend or wife of Ravan Kumar?! I'm better off single!" she marched off declaring she wanted nothing to do with him.

"Jhansi Ki Rani, I hate kids, but how awesome would it be if you had small little Ravans?!"

"Excuse me?!" she turned back.

"I said I know how you are showing ignorance, but come on don't we all know any woman would like to mother small innocent Ravans."

"Shut up Raman, you're just so annoying!" she started to walk away only to get pulled back by him.

"Am I?!"

He came closer to her making her lean back. She bumped into the car and knew there was no way out. She closed her eyes as he came closer enough that she could feel his breath on her...

"Raman..."

"What Raman? Huh?"

He lifted her chin with his finger and tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear giving her goosebumps. He leaned in closer to her and brought his mouth near her the tucked in strand.

"Do you not feel anything for me?" he whispered to her.

She opened her eyes as his warm breath blew on the crook of her cold neck. He noticed a small scratch by her neck and ran his fingers over it. She hissed as his fingers trailed the scratch making him back off. He looked at her as her eyes were still shut tight. Cupping her face, he made her open her eyes. She found a softer look that he had hardly showed to anyone. Seeing his concerned face, she also loosened her stiff body and gave him a look that reflected his. He brought her face near his and started to leaned over bringing their lips closer and then...

"Aunty! Where are you?!" Ruhi's voice interrupted them.

"I'm coming! Raman move aside." She gently pushed him aside and went off to Ruhi who was wondering where they had disappeared all of a sudden. As she ran over to attend the child, he found his palm meeting his forehead.

"There are more haddis in my romance than in my body!" he muttered and walked behind her to see what they would do now in this forested area with a small child in tow. What had their trip become?

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That was all! Please like & leave your feedback! Will look forward to it! And sorry for the late update!

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Posted: 10 years ago
All part read in one go
it was awesome but ishra
are best friend but woh ladki kon
thi n aur ki bacchi confusion
precap it was superb
waiting early continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Prabh!!!
Awww...that was so lovely...Raman and his monologue...He should say open out to his ladylove...Then little Romance and flirting😳...


Ruhi is so cute...Uncle and aunty ke sath struck...where aunty is loving & caring , uncle is grumpy but cute and is madly in love with aunty😳😳...


U are a gifted writed prabh...Update asap...I cant wait for next...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
small innocent Ravans ☺️
RES😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kadus uncle and lovely aunty..awesome.
story is going intresting ..
Y he hate kids yaar..?
is he really a secreat dad to a child?dont do that in this story prabh..pls

ishu be na.how raman knows what kids like to eat..their conversation end with raavan proximity..

im loving this romantic and flitering raman..
Raman is disclosing his girlfriends list to ishu..

O he want to give little raavans to ishu..Awwe such a cute moment.she dnt want to be his girlfriend or wife,its better to be single.:-)

i eagerly waiting for next update,without any huddies in their life..

thanks for pm prabh..:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
i read all parts in one go... beautiful concept👍🏼..
i liked ISHRA nokjhok...ab ye chhote Ravan ka prodution kab hoga only you or God knows🤣...
simply awesome update..if possible pm me for all your works😊

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