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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Mere dimag me ek title hai

Marrying The______

Yeah blank k lie either Ishita k lie suitable term mile toh title is from Raman's pov
Or for Raman toh from Ishita's pov

Marrying the what?
Raman is a loyal person dear... 😊

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
this sounds interesting
update soon

Thanks...
Updating... 😉

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Hi Kutties... 😊

First I thought of not adding the character sketch in this story but to go on with the flow 😳

Then kinda felt inconvenient in not mentioning the same 😕

Readers are getting confused of everything

So I'm clearing it out... 😊

It's nothing of a broad description... 😆

RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA

Elder son of Mr and Mrs Bhalla.
As in every stories, is a well-rooted business mogul. A kind hearted but cunning person. Arrogant and gentle at the same time.

ISHITA IYER

Only daughter of Mr andMrs Iyer.
Abreast to Raman in power and calibre. Infamous for her love-affairs which she poses to be just scandalous.

ROMI BHALLA

A watchdog of Raman's business world. He is the key to unlock Raman's secrets. No one knows him being with Raman. Even his family thinks him to be useless.

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Hi Kutties... 😊

Here goes the first part...

Ignore typos and other errors...

Not proofread...

Enjoy reading 🤗

Chapter-1

NUMB AGAIN...

"I found the one, he changed my life

But was it me that changed

And he just happened to come at the right time

I'm supposed to be in love

But I'm numb again..."

BREAKING NEWS

TOP BUSINESSMAN RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA MISSING...!!!

Top Business Magnet and fiancee of Buniness Empress Ishita Iyer has been missing since last day. Suspecting to be a kidnapping. Miss Iyer lashed out at the police force calling them "USELESS" for the incovinience making it a controversial issue. People counting it to be a false business-politics. As far as the clear background of Mr Bhalla Jr is concerned, it can be a consipiracy to outsmart the upcoming busness entity.

Reports suggests it to be resultant of his affair with Miss Iyer; the heartbreaker of many. Clear proofs are at arm's length to know whether these allegations are true or false...

IYER MANSION

Mr and Mrs Iyer tried to pacify a freaked out Ishita in futile. She was rambling to herself about their last meeting and the chances of him being kidnapped. Is it for money? Is he fine? Is he hurt? She pulled her hair in frustration and threw away the tab on the granite floor shattering it into pieces.

"Why the hell aren't they calling if it's a kidnap? Who did this? Where is he?"

That was when a call came alarming everyone. Ishita picked it up before the police officer could reach. The man from the other end demanded ten crores in exchange of Raman. She didn't think twice before nodding as it was an insignificant amount of money for her. Ignoring all the warning of the forces, she walked out of there for him with his younger brother Romi.

They had reached an isolated building to find no one. They observed the place and found a note stating that the kidnapper want to meet Ishita alone. Romi objected it smelling a trap but Ishita showed deaf ears. She left Romi in the lonely place and rushed in her car to the place noted secretly in the chit. Romi called the police to inform the changed plans and tried to get a taxi.

Meanwhile Ishita reached a posh banglaw following the instructions. The security let her in after checking her completely. She walked in to the house and looked at it with her dropped down jaws to see its exclusiveness.

There came a man of around his thirties wearing a black tuxedo with a combination of gray vest and white shirt. The black and gray check cravat was complimenting the dress code. He descended while fastening his diamond cuff-links. This man needs more than what she had thought of. She mentally noted down his appearence and mannerisms and concluded him to be the owner of the palace she was standing.

"Why don't you take a seat Miss Iyer?" He asked while approaching her.

"Where is Raman...?"

He politely ignored her while pouring a cup of tea, "Coffee or tea?"

She gritted her teeth, "Where is My Raman Damn it?"

Throwing his hands up in mock fear, "Whoa...whoa...whoa...cool down...let's talk it out..."

Infuriated, "I'm not gonna spare a sec. I want my Raman back, NOW. You got me? NOW!!!"

Menacingly, "If I say that I'll kill him? Then will you spare a sec?"

His soft precept made her sit on the sofa lifelessly. He sat across her asking her to take a sip from the tea which he claimed to have made himself.

Helplessly, "What you want?"

"The Heera Construction Contract!" He replied nonchalantly.

Frowning in confusion, "But that's under Raman...I can't do anything."

"But you can make him do anything..." He smiled diabolically.

Sternly, "I will not..."

Taking the remote control, "So you should see this"

He turned on the projector were the live telecasting of Raman being tortured by some goons had shown. A man constantly beat him on his knees and shoulder with a thick metal making him yelp in pain. Ishita screamed on top of her voice to stop hurting him by tightly closing ger eyes.

After letting a sigh, "So...let's make a deal...?"

Creasing her eyebrows, "What if I show you to the public for harassing me and my fiancee?"

Gurgling evilly, "No you won't... (looking deeply at her) You loves you parents way too much that you won't let them see you're being nasty with men"

On top of her voice, "Stop you bas***d! I've never done such ugly!"

Showing mock pity, "You can't prove. Even that Raman of yours won't believe."

Miserably, "You can't do this..."

Firmly gripping on the tea cup, "I WILL..."

After a long silence, "What you want me to do?"

"You should speak against him" He said while surfing through the news paper.

Getting agitated, "It is impossible. If you want the contract you should ask him straight away. By manipulating me against him will trouble his entire business. He will be ruined. I can't do it. I'm never gonna do this!

Smashing the tea cup on the floor as if it is her, "I'm not begging you. You'll do as I said. That's final. Now to convince the piblic, you can leave the money here which is not worth buying some snuff."

Ishita walked out of the place dejectedly and drove past expecting him to turn up. Some people threw Raman out of a van in front of her car. She was in her deep thoughts that she didn't expect such a blow. Her car hit him hard that he sprung up and fell on the glass breaking it; diffusing her pale face in his blood.

BREAKING NEWS

A FATAL BLOW TO RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA BY HIS OWN FIANCEE

The young CEO of the year has been wavering in news channels for the past twenty four hours on his sudden disappearence. Now that we found him battling with death by a fatal accident with Miss Iyer's car, police got a clear picture that Miss Iyer might be the culprit behind all these facade.

The 'MONEY MINDED HEX' as everyone calls her should have planned this fake scenario. However, we cannot conclude the same because of not finding Mr Bhalla Jr's car anywhere. It is impossible for a person like Mr Bhalla Jr to walk around bare-foot which makes the focus shift to some unknown master-mind. People waiting to hear Mr Bhalla Jr to speak-up.

IN THE HOSPITAL

The entire business world was in the hospital when Raman was fighting with death. Ishita kept on pacing back and forth ignoring the scrutiny of everyone. Media tried their best to cover her in vain as Romi stood as shield for her. Mr Bhalla came there hurriedly leaving his business conference in USA. The whole dramatic event was being recorded and lively telecasted like a 'Suspense Hollywood Thriller'.

BREAKING NEWS

MISS IYER HIDING BEHIND HER TO-BE-BROTHER-IN-LAW

In the past hours Miss Iyer, the suspect of 'Mr Bhalla Jr Missing and Accident Case' is seen hiding behind her to be brother in law, Romi Bhalla. Grapewine is going on regarding their illegitimate affair behind Mr Bhalla Jr's back. Mr Romi Bhalla is not responded till now making the suspicions sprawl that way. Miss Iyer's silence is making the matters worst.

OUTSIDE ICU

Ishita looked on through the square see-through glass at an inanimated Raman. His body connected to the machines which are acting like Gods to make him clasp on to his dear life. She couldn't make out whether he is breathing or not. Only thing she knew is HE IS STILL THERE...ALIVE...!

I've been ignoring this big lump in my throat

I shouldn't be crying,

tears were for the weaker days

I'm stronger now, or so I say,

But something's missing...

TO BE CONTINUED...

How was it...

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

New fresh start so grand opening track with the action of kidnap and business war.who is behind their back and in this story look like Ishu background well known to many media. Very interesting and full with suspense. Please continue update.😊

Edited by usaonly - 10 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: usaonly
Is it not going to be long story ? I don't know why I am impress with your Ishu in all your story. This story had start with the nice plot. Please continue.

Thanks Jum... 😊
It's gonna be a lengthy one 😆
Bear me 😉

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Thanks Jum... 😊
It's gonna be a lengthy one 😆
Bear me 😉

sorry Gaya for double post dear first one you reply was when I read first page and I edit after read the story in the last page I think page 6. I am not mind long one so far you come up with all awesome story. Have agreat weekend dear. One more question very important if leap happen you will write Ishra story here.😲

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: usaonly
sorry Gaya for double post dear first one you reply was when I read first page and I edit after read the story in the last page I think page 6. I am not mind long one so far you come up with all awesome story. Have agreat weekend dear. One more question very important if leap happen you will write Ishra story here.😲

My stories got nothing to do with leap Jum 😆