QUOTE=DipaRB6]Double res for two chapters 😆
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Baapre! What chapters! I'm usually a very fast reader but it takes me forever to read your stuff because mein atak jaati hoon, reading the same delicious lines over and over. Certainly for the ishralicious stuff but even your other sentences are so beautifully built. Love reading your work Anju!
By the way so glad it went from a one chapter conclusion to 3! Feel free to break that last one up too 😃
Now to the updates. First of, this line was just epic: "Can I borrow the Business Express please?" I'm a total sucker for revisiting cherished ishra moments in their new avatar of lovers. Swooned over it and the kiss that followed. Next all the stuff in the room upstairs, God, made me a bit sweaty to be honest (sorry TMI). Other tidbits: Mihika and Simmi's teasing was also spot on. The nice moment with Ishu's thoughts of Ruhi never growing up to look like her was wrenching. And Raman standing there and noticing and knowing everything that she was thinking in that moment was beautiful.
The Raman and Ishita in your story are the purest, sweetest version of themselves that I keep in my head too. Awesome job 👏
Dipa!! OMG ! One page comment? Read ur other comment as well. Been itching to respond to this since morning.
Thank you!! I was grinning like an idiot reading ur comment. I love that Business express wala scene. So thought of incorporating that somehow.I am glad u liked it. I don't always find the writing process to be enjoyable. But when I read the comments it makes the whole process so worthwhile 😃
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