ISHRA SS: AGAINST ALL ODDS (Last chapter - Pg 24) - Page 8

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Aru.Divan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: KRamya

Nice update
Eagerly waiting for next chapter
Please update soon



Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

lovely update

interesting plot
update soon n
pm me
take care



Thanks a lot .. Will continue soon and pm you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Finally read it 😆
Arreee Romi bechara...😕
This Dubbu is bloody pathetic 😡 😡

Puttar n Biwi at loggerheads again But it felt so real
I hope Puttar beats the shit out of Dubbu 😡
N puttar n Biwi make up soon 😳

U take care, write aaramse. U know what we all want 😉 😆 😆
🤗 🤗
Edited by .TIA. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
finally unres on page 6...sorry about the length but i got ur bimari i guess 😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

*RES*

*hiding my face while unres*

ok no lectures from me on elbow here...let's limit that to a different place 😆😆 Thanks for being generous 😆.. No worries I am taking care 😃

coming to update...do i even need to mention all those words again and again...you know it has to be good...until it is good enough you don't even post it

every character was rightly justified

Raman's anger and beating Romi, others members trying to stop and stuff

i really liked the mother son conversation...the way you defined Toshi Ji was something touchy...that's how a mother, always trying to defend a child even if he is wrong...she must be in some real pain when she said she already feels guilty of Romi's deeds plus the natural punishment Romi got

Raman is always my favorite...he loves his family way too much...he can beat Romi black and blue himself but cannot see anyone else putting a slightest finger too...so real...that's how we humans are...Raman's feelings wala part is my favorite for obvious reasons

Subbu's hidden intentions 😡 i dont even want to comment...anything can be expected from him

Ishita's disappointment was justified too...that is how she is...cannot see injustice happening to anyone but but but she is wrong this time...i so wish she understands it all soon

their argument...actually it is weird but i like to see them argue...they both argue so strongly putting forward their points...i mean there is nothing like if they love each other their will accept anything wrong from the other one...they argue to show each other the right path

and you always bring that out perfectly 👏👏

Raman's battle between the truth and his family and Ishita being hurt 😭😭😭...so tough to see them in this state...i really hope things get sorted soon

the last line broke my heart

phew done...di this was again a great update...waiting for next one eagerly and thank you for having mercy on us readers even with your broken hand
Aww such sweet words. I am touched. The beauty of their relationship lies in fighting but cutely 😳😆. Well did not have great thoughts when I posted. Thanks for the encouragement, it really means a lot.

Next will be updated by tomo or monday. You comment made my day .. !!!!!! Thank you so much

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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
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Originally posted by: .TIA.

Finally read it 😆

Arreee Romi bechara...😕
This Dubbu is bloody pathetic 😡 😡

Puttar n Biwi at loggerheads again But it felt so real
I hope Puttar beats the shit out of Dubbu 😡
N puttar n Biwi make up soon 😳

U take care, write aaramse. U know what we all want 😉 😆 😆
🤗 🤗


Hey Tia 🤗
Dubbu will be khalosofied as planned 😡. They fight to make up and will give you what you want but with BKT 😉😆. Thanks a lot, will try updating by Monday. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Aru, this is such an interesting story, but sadly, it mirrors the show now. That kameena Dubbu is going to waltz off with Ishita and Raman will mu her.
I am so depressed yaar.

Please kill dubbu in your story. I need to see Dubbu suffer.

Die Dubbu die.

Sorry I was so late in reading. Maaf karna please.
Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Veeann

Aru, this is such an interesting story, but sadly, it mirrors the show now. That kameena Dubbu is going to waltz off with Ishita and Raman will mu her.

I am so depressed yaar.

Please kill dubbu in your story. I need to see Dubbu suffer.

Die Dubbu die.

Sorry I was so late in reading. Maaf karna please.



Vee .. !! Dubbu will def die 😡😈.. I can't deal that idiot anymore.
No depression till we have our B parivaar 🤗❤️.

Don't be sorry and I take days to edit my comment .. Bigger wala sorry for that 😳. Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Thanks for all your comments again. Another 2 more parts and then I will be done with this SS. This part is dedicated to my Becky darling. Becks this is for you 🤗 and yes romance to all of you and to Anu (AnuIshRaDivan).

CHAPTER 3

Next day morning, he woke up to an empty room and the windows were still shut. He rubbed his temples and tried looking for a glass of water to quench his early morning thirst but happened to find only a sip in the tiny jug and it was a day old. Emptiness started creeping its way in to his life very early in the morning was his only thought. He opened the windows of his bedroom and looked out at the morning sun which gave hope to every entity. He stretched his arms outside the window trying to capture the sunshine with his arms and hugged himself immediately like he would hug her. This poise moment was soon disturbed by a knock on the door.

A guilty Romi entered his room and looked at his worried brother who was lost in the morning. He wanted to clear certain things with his brother. They have done more than what was required for him.

"Bhai, I promise you. I have committed many mistakes but not to the extent of killing someone. It's a very sincere promise.

Not once his little brother has come up to him and shared about his problem. His brother was innocent and felt more confident about it after hearing from him. He patted Romi's shoulders and thought

"Saale Subbu, aaj tera saare jhoot ko pakad ke hi rahunga, ye iss Raman Kumar Bhalla ka wada hai" (Dear Subbu, I will untangle all your lies today and this is a promise of Raman Kumar Bhalla)

He opened his wardrobe to get his clothes for the day when he came across her suits and sarees. He ran his hand over one of her black sarees and let his fingers linger on her saree for few more seconds when his eyes fell on one of his many blue shirts. A warming smile lit up his face when he thought about her acting all possessive about him and his blue shirt a few months back. He stifled a laugh and wore it with one of his beige trouser and came down planning the things that need to be done. It was a relatively silent breakfast and with kids not around no one were forced to act about anything. Raman stepped out of the house talking with someone, when he found her walking out and felt something different about her which he couldn't really point out. He focused on his call but kept glancing at her every now and there whilst she couldn't take his eyes off him. They both reached the main door at the same time colliding against each other. She tripped over his legs when he held her immediately by her stomach. He slid the phone in to his pocket and helped her balance with his hands now wrapped around her back. He did not let her walk alone after that. He placed his hands firmly on her waist and pulled her closer to him. She was clinging on to his shirt now. It was not something new to them but their one night separation got her blushing and staring at his chest which was exposed. He left her near the car and remembered about his call which was left disconnected. He started instructing the person and kept a hawk like eye on her till she got her car started. As expected, she got out of the car and opened the bonnet to check if the basics were wrong. At the same time he identified a few men staring at her back. This was it for Raman Bhalla. Without waiting any longer he punched one of their nose which made the others flee for their lives. Public started witnessing the scene while she kept parting him from the guy yelling her husband's name. She managed to drag him out and when he noticed she wasn't wearing any stole or shawl which she is very particular about angered him more. He held her wrist tight and pulled her in to the car shouting

"Stay here and I will be back now".

She never understood the man whom she got married to. He has always been a mystery to her. She sighed and prayed that he talk to her at least now. More than Subbu, she wanted Romi to learn a hard lesson and change for the good. When she opened her eyes she saw him coming with some shawl which did not match her outfit and it nowhere looked like something she preferred. He passed over the shawl and got checking with the engine. She set off in her car once the issue was sorted and he set off in the opposite direction to sort the trivial issue in hand.

Neil, ACP, Mihir and Raman met at Raman's office and they sat down discussing the issue in hand.

Raman: Romi is innocent and even if not I need to make sure he is proved innocent.

ACP: but Raman this is not easy. It's a hit and run case. They have all proof.

Raman got up from his seat and patted ACP's back. I have seen a lot of you and also pretty aware of how you deal with things. Come on let's work on this for one last time. He was almost convinced but did not neither expressed his acceptance nor displeasure to the whole scenario. He preferred being the silent one.

Neil: Bhai, we need to get the accident footage at any cost. We will need the exact date and time to turn the issue in our favor.

Raman: Mihir, Look in to last year's Asia business head felicitation ceremony and get Neil all the details.

Mihir got back in a few minutes with all the details. After taking a look Neil and ACP set out to traffic control office to get the video footage of the vehicle to take a look at the evidence. With the help of some familiar people they got hold of the footage for few days, both before and after the accident. Later that evening once they were back with the evidence, the four of them say and watched through hours of recorded video. The video came to them as a surprise and the next set of actions.

After achieving a fair amount of work done for the day, he sat in his cabin checking his mails. He frantically tried Mihir's number and next minute both Neil and Mihir were standing right before him. An angry Raman smacked his hand hard on the table and both shouted "bhai". He showed them Simmi's Roka video which had ACP coming in with Subbu.

Neil: Bhai, we need to have a check on ACP. I trust him but after this we need to be little careful.

Mihir: Mihika is the only one who talks to him comfortably. Maybe we should get her check him for today.

"Mihir, make sure Mihika gets in touch with him today. If he enquires anything at all about Simmi or anyone from the family then he is still touch with Subbu and working over something. Even if he remains silent something is wrong" said a worried Raman

Mihir: Bhai I understood

"Mere samajhdhar bhai, ask Mihika to do what we want her to. ACP Pradhuman banne ki koyi zarorat nahi hai samjhi?" but his thoughts started hovering over his Jhansi Rani as he was shutting down his laptop. Her happy face and those embarrassed eyes which spewed passion every time he spoke about consummating their relationship. He got hold of himself and walked out of his cabin with the other two.

Mihika knew her sister was upset. Her sister was missing her jiju and she wanted to cheer her up. Ishitha sat in her room with her legs bent and back rested against the head rest turning the pages of book which did not catch her attention. Mihika sat before her asking something which made ishitha's eyes to almost pop out. "Akka it's just one time and we are going to have fun here in our room" spoke an excited Mihika. "Aise Kaise Miku?? Hum Iyers hain, yeh sab galat hai" said a dull Ishitha trying to convince her. Back of her mind she knew how stubborn and kiddish her sister was. The thought of stubborn made her think about him. These days his name anywhere made her blush and his sudden advances have always made her to hide her face on his chest. She wanted to forget her pain and Mihika's continued persistence wanted her to give it a go. Her shivering fingers got hold of the glass and slowly bought the glass near her mouth and took one tiny sip. But looking at her sister going in for generous sips encouraged her do the same. Soon she started feeling tipsy and now instead of sipping from the glass, her bold fingers held on to the vodka bottle. A steady Mihika was still convincing her to put the glass down. Mihika warned her about her mother but Ishitha did not listen to her. Now she started blabbering with the bottle in her hand "I want him Miku.. Amma I want him.. Go miku, Go get him for me" and giggled at her. "Akka please stay quiet, you will get us caught" kept shushing Mihika. She quickly got up from the bed giggling and shouted "Mein unn hi ke pass jaa rahihun, catch me if you can". Within minutes she was out of the room. "Akka, periamma will wake up and all of them are asleep. Chalo Akka" and she gathered Ishitha's hands. Ishitha withdrew herself from Mihika and kept her index finger on her lips "Shushing" and stood in front of his house. Mihika smacked her head for coming up with stupid idea and prayed to her Murugan to have the house locked. By the time she opened her eyes, she found a tipsy Ishitha climbing the stairs. Mihika dialed Raman's number and told him everything. He had mixed feelings. He was happy that she was coming to him but did not like the fact that she drank with Mihika. He stood at the room entrance waiting for her to enter. He saw her giggling, dancing and heard her humming "Mere Raavan Kumar Mere Ramu Kumar" and he smacked his forehead but couldn't ignore her kid like face.

She pouted the second she saw him and pointed her finger asking him to come near her. He looked around thinking he was hallucinating but she was really pointing her finger and shaking her head up and down. Her arms encircled his neck as soon as stood before her. She looked at him with her eyes wide open and their eyes locked and his arms started to snake around her waist. The distance between them reduced gradually and she rested her head on his shoulder and whispered in to his ears "Carry me Raavan". Hearing her saying Ravan this way made his heart beat faster for her and carried her. She rested his head on her shoulders while he carried her till the bedroom. He whispered "Aaj madarasan talli hai, isse kaise rokhun! Mata Rani" and laid her on the bed. She had other plans for the night and pulled him on her by pulling his shirt. He fell hard on her and their breaths fanned their faces. They kept looking at each other's face and their eyes did not blink. She moved her head a little on top and kissed his forhead. After pecking both his eyes, she shut her face tight with her hands and moved her ring finger to catch a glimpse of him. He made up his mind and slowly moved her hands off her face. She tilted her face to the side giving access to her nape. He ran his tongue over her nape and gently bit which made her whimper his name. He again kissed over the same place and looked at her with his eyes which were hungry for more such bites and kisses. He moved her arms and pinned them against the head rest of the bed and pecked her chin. He moved his lips a little up and placed them over hers. He kept moving his lips over her lips and slowly started to run his tongue over her lips making her moan his name hard. She bit his lips in passion and they started exploring their lips before they could deepen it further. They couldn't wait any longer and they kissed each other intensely till they could satisfy their thirst. He got reminded of her sloshed behavior and started to wean himself from the kiss. To finish with he kissed her tender eyes and kept stroking her hair. The lovely feel she got while he ran his finger through her hair made her shut her eyes slowly drifting in to her long slumber. He got down off her and rested his head on her chest to sleep.

P.S: Not Proofread

To be continued...



Edited by Aru.Divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RESWAAA!!!!

Cz yes..I am gonna edit this..SOON! :P 🤣 🤣

Hehehehe!!!

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