SS___MANNMARZIYAN___Part-22 Pg-126 PART-23 PAGE 136 updated - Page 16

The last two updates were seriosly hot. ☺️

Originally posted by: monalisa123

What do I say about Mannmarziyan yaar?

The scary part is that raman's Mann wants ishita, abhi's Mann wants ishita, raman's Mann doesn't know that the ishita abhi's Mann wants is the same ishita raman's Mann wants? The scarier part is it seems like ishita's Mann wants what raman's Mann wants, but we don't know what Gayatri's Mann want to do with the characters' mann(s) of her story?

😆

You're making my Mann forget my plot 😆
Well my mann has a problem of complicating the character's Mannmarziyan... 😉
So I too can't say about my Mann
Crazy me 😆

Originally posted by: divazfankau

superb update
continue soon

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: shravani_2311

im mad with this stry...

loving raman i dnt knw why...

want to knw ishu's pov...

indeed its a suprse updte...

Thank you...
I thought of updating till evening, but couldn't make it
So a late night update will be up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Huggie huggie kanna:-)
romantic update..;-)
tum bold writing se readers ka neend choraliya yaar:-D:-D:-D
that too with out touching SCENES only GAZE...PLAY THE KEY ROLE IN THIS PART:-)

:-OAMMA and raman is so close.im loving amma and raman bond.:-)...

Amma invited raman to her home..."i can't make non-veg,but i'll make sure that u won't say veg is bad."

Arey amma tum kya kar raho ..iss LUST KUMAR KO BULAKAR TUM APNI BETI KE NON VEG BANARAHI HO..;-);-);-)

TUMARI BETI HEE ISS GAZE KUMAR KA NON VEG HAI,ISKI TUMARI VEG SE KOI JARURATH NAHI HAI;-);-);-);-)

when trio entering in to house...raman ki maan mai maan latoo phut raha hai...

SHARAM NAHI HAI YAAR ESKO...KYA DIALOGUE MARI;-);-)
ek baar dekha dha...ACHA STRUCTURE HAI THO...TODA TIME GHUR RAHA DHE...MUJHE PEHALE HI NAZAAR MAIN...PASAND...AYE ISS GHAR /TUMARI BETI;-);-);-);-)

opening the gate of his favourite house...
At the same time OPENING THE GATE OF HIS HEART;-);-)

PUTTAR searching every corner of the house as it is a MUSEAUM...
MUSEAUM THO HAI BHAI...HISTORICAL THING HAI HAMARI ISHITA MADAM:-D

LUST KUMAR KA HISTORY CHANGE KARNE VALI;-);-);-);-)
seeing her was the last thing in his mind...Not again...!damm that waist of hers!i 'd have done some great sin to be tourture like this:-D:-D:-D
Ye LUST KUMAR SIN KE BATH KAR RAHAHAI ...BIG JOKE:-D:-D:-D

so madam searching for books and slipped from stool because of raman interuption...
Cha GAZE KUMAR MISS THE CHANCE TO HOLD HER...;-);-)
she rejected his help..:-D:-D:-D
again she slip bcoz of back pain SILLY RAIN,Y U REJECTED HIS HELP...
ABH DEKHO KYA HOGA TUMARA SATH:->:->:->

PUTTAR KO CHANCE MILGAYA...

CHANCE PIE TOUCH KARLE O SONIA ...CHANCE PIE TOUCH KARLE;-):-|;-)
he take her in his arms to lay her down on the bed...

THIS LINES FOR ME...
raman didn't tought his PASSION OR LUST OR WHATEVER NAME U CAN GIVE...

AUTHOR SAIBA E LINES MERAI LIYE LEKA KYA?:-)

"And it was the 1st time i was looking at a women this close...just to savour her beauty ...without touching her"
TUM BINA TOUCH KAR KE BICHARI KA HALATH KARAB KARSAKTHAI HO...TOUCH KARENGE THO KYA HOGA;-);-);-)

SHE EVEN NOT TELL THANKS TO HIM...
"PLEASURE IS MINE"
YE KAHA SA AYA...KUCH THO GADBAD HAI BHAI...ISHITA POV WILL REVEAL THAT...PLEASURE;-):-D;-);-)

They looked at eachother in horror...
ishita touched her shoulder to make sure,that her saree pinned and all that was another WEIRD DREAM..BUT FOUND IT UNPINNED...;-);-);-)

EE KYA NAYA SAAPA HAI,I DNT WANT THIS REE..I DNT WANT ISHITA IN RAMAN CLUTCHES...ETHNI JALDI AUTHOR SAIBA...

AUR YEE KYA HAI

PLEASE DONT SAY NO;-);-):-O:-O:-P:-P:-P

I WANT TO GIVE A NEW NAME TO RAMAN AS GAZE KUMAR...YEE BANDHA DEK DEK KAR BE KUCH KAR SAKTHA HAI...:-D:-D:-D

ESS SAB MAI KUCH THO ACHA KUWA ...GUESS KARO :-)

SAALI GHAR PAR NAHI HAI:-P:-P:-P:-P

hey today i watch ANGRY KUMAR RE...BUT YEA THO HUNGRY KUMAR HAI..:-):-):-)

LUST KUMAR KO BULAKAR TUM APNI BETI KE NON VEG BANARAHI HO I like it 😆


PASSION OR LUST OR WHATEVER NAME U CAN GIVE...: You're right, I wrote this line remembering you. You got me 😉

I think no one else noticed the "PLEASURE IS MINE" of RKB
You're great... It's really gadbad... 🤣

Ishita in Raman's clutches...no way...then what happened 😲
Dream...?
Wait and watch...oops...READ

YEE BANDHA DEK DEK KAR BE KUCH KAR SAKTHA HAI
Kya dialogue maari yaar... 👏

Angry Kumar, Hungry Kumar, Lust Kumar, Gaze Kumar air kitna naam yaar... 😲

Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

No no no no plz...

Galat time par roka yaar...

Plz don't say no for what yaar...

Kuch samajh aa raha hai...

Plz continue soon...

Can't wait yaar...

I am super tensed now...

P.S. Was that Mihika...?

Always galat timing 😆
It's too hot and romantic nah...
So don't take tension dear 😉

Originally posted by: hana_y

wow awesome gaya im being a fan of you too now superb well writen the way he admire her beauty wow yaar you will kill us with such a dream yaar thw for pm

Thank you dear 😊

Originally posted by: sush_avina

Omg kamar se burn body ..

hai hai too good...

Please continue

Sure dear 😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice update

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: .arima.

amazing update
thanks for pm
continue soon

Thank you 😊