SS___MANNMARZIYAN___Part-22 Pg-126 PART-23 PAGE 136 updated - Page 15

im mad with this stry...

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Like Janani calls this RKB, LUST KUMAR ladkiyon ko friendship keliye todi bulayenge... 🤣

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Huggie huggie kanna:-)
romantic update..;-)
tum bold writing se readers ka neend choraliya yaar:-D:-D:-D
that too with out touching SCENES only GAZE...PLAY THE KEY ROLE IN THIS PART:-)

:-OAMMA and raman is so close.im loving amma and raman bond.:-)...

Amma invited raman to her home..."i can't make non-veg,but i'll make sure that u won't say veg is bad."

Arey amma tum kya kar raho ..iss LUST KUMAR KO BULAKAR TUM APNI BETI KE NON VEG BANARAHI HO..;-);-);-)

TUMARI BETI HEE ISS GAZE KUMAR KA NON VEG HAI,ISKI TUMARI VEG SE KOI JARURATH NAHI HAI;-);-);-);-)

when trio entering in to house...raman ki maan mai maan latoo phut raha hai...

SHARAM NAHI HAI YAAR ESKO...KYA DIALOGUE MARI;-);-)
ek baar dekha dha...ACHA STRUCTURE HAI THO...TODA TIME GHUR RAHA DHE...MUJHE PEHALE HI NAZAAR MAIN...PASAND...AYE ISS GHAR /TUMARI BETI;-);-);-);-)

opening the gate of his favourite house...
At the same time OPENING THE GATE OF HIS HEART;-);-)

PUTTAR searching every corner of the house as it is a MUSEAUM...
MUSEAUM THO HAI BHAI...HISTORICAL THING HAI HAMARI ISHITA MADAM:-D

LUST KUMAR KA HISTORY CHANGE KARNE VALI;-);-);-);-)
seeing her was the last thing in his mind...Not again...!damm that waist of hers!i 'd have done some great sin to be tourture like this:-D:-D:-D
Ye LUST KUMAR SIN KE BATH KAR RAHAHAI ...BIG JOKE:-D:-D:-D

so madam searching for books and slipped from stool because of raman interuption...
Cha GAZE KUMAR MISS THE CHANCE TO HOLD HER...;-);-)
she rejected his help..:-D:-D:-D
again she slip bcoz of back pain SILLY RAIN,Y U REJECTED HIS HELP...
ABH DEKHO KYA HOGA TUMARA SATH:->:->:->

PUTTAR KO CHANCE MILGAYA...

CHANCE PIE TOUCH KARLE O SONIA ...CHANCE PIE TOUCH KARLE;-):-|;-)
he take her in his arms to lay her down on the bed...

THIS LINES FOR ME...
raman didn't tought his PASSION OR LUST OR WHATEVER NAME U CAN GIVE...

AUTHOR SAIBA E LINES MERAI LIYE LEKA KYA?:-)

"And it was the 1st time i was looking at a women this close...just to savour her beauty ...without touching her"
TUM BINA TOUCH KAR KE BICHARI KA HALATH KARAB KARSAKTHAI HO...TOUCH KARENGE THO KYA HOGA;-);-);-)

SHE EVEN NOT TELL THANKS TO HIM...
"PLEASURE IS MINE"
YE KAHA SA AYA...KUCH THO GADBAD HAI BHAI...ISHITA POV WILL REVEAL THAT...PLEASURE;-):-D;-);-)

They looked at eachother in horror...
ishita touched her shoulder to make sure,that her saree pinned and all that was another WEIRD DREAM..BUT FOUND IT UNPINNED...;-);-);-)

EE KYA NAYA SAAPA HAI,I DNT WANT THIS REE..I DNT WANT ISHITA IN RAMAN CLUTCHES...ETHNI JALDI AUTHOR SAIBA...

AUR YEE KYA HAI

PLEASE DONT SAY NO;-);-):-O:-O:-P:-P:-P

I WANT TO GIVE A NEW NAME TO RAMAN AS GAZE KUMAR...YEE BANDHA DEK DEK KAR BE KUCH KAR SAKTHA HAI...:-D:-D:-D

ESS SAB MAI KUCH THO ACHA KUWA ...GUESS KARO :-)

SAALI GHAR PAR NAHI HAI:-P:-P:-P:-P

hey today i watch ANGRY KUMAR RE...BUT YEA THO HUNGRY KUMAR HAI..:-):-):-)

No no no no plz...

wow awesome gaya im being a fan of you too now superb well writen the way he admire her beauty wow yaar you will kill us with such a dream yaar thw for pm

Omg kamar se burn body ..

amazing update
thanks for pm
continue soon

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Sorry dear I thought I send you the PM 😭
I'll make sure from next time 👍🏼
Coming to the comment;
She only told his apology nothing else 😳
Will try to update soon 😊

No no don't say sorry... Actually I missed it.. As the subject of the pm was Morning coffee... I thought it is some OS or some other so just checked now.
I am sorry

Ohh she didn't share with her good 😉
Woh or problem hi badhaati lol

Okay I am late...Hope u remember me...I regularly comment yar...Was out of station but now i am posting my comment...

Originally posted by: pretty_h

gaya what was that again dream not fair n raman omg he cant control his eyes

the way he stare admire her beauty the lust he feel inside him he was controling it wow

his heart has just stuck on her waist yaar today the way he observe each part os her body wow

but he did not hear amma said ishita or toshi said where are mihika n ishita I thought he may heard but no as he was interested to saw he climps too good awesome thx

Dream or something else... You'll get to know by the next chapter
Thanks for the lovely comment dear 😊