SS ~ LOVE HAPPENS (part 7 - pg44) updated - Page 30

Originally posted by: Piyu97

Waiting Vidu 😳

Originally posted by: divazfankau

awsome updated

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

last time you complained na ki it was a long comment almost like an update 😡😡😡

is baar yeh le shortest comment

i liked so many points but i wont comment on anything 😡😡😡

it was a very cute update with lots of hits and no misses...update soon ahead

and only i know how am i controlling my hands to type all the praise but then 😕😕😕

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

RES

huhhh your buttering worked...i am editing it my typical style

There you go.. Without this, I would definitely miss you 🤗

from where do i start telling what all i liked...the first line itself is just so beautiful

First line se hi tareef shuru? ab iska hum kya kare? *monkey*

"If I had a nickel for every time for every time a saw a concert from a construction truck, I'd be.."

lo banda itni taareef kar raha hai aur yeh madam keh rahi hain thank bunty...only if someone could explain her ki not bunty but it was she who made it exquisite by her mere presence

Hai nah! Ladiya aise dumb harkate kare toh bohot gussa aata hai. of course hum uss catagory mein nahi aate hai 😆😆

i love Raman's sarcasm...not over but at the right time

Silence created a beautiful and comfortable relation between them

another beautiful line...and you know it how much such simple lines attract me

I know, in fact aapke liye hi I put these short and simple lines. Ab ise buttering a samajhna.. 🤗

you know what there is something unique about this particular story...no drama no over the top emotions...everything is just so subtle

I love such things. extra romance and cheesiness, Sirf dekhne mein achcha lagta hai. But when it comes to reading, it bores the hell out of me. 😕

i think in just last to last update i mentioned about Raman hiding his past and it is all open now that too through the book

i really liked how he mentioned about loving his wife long time back...Twenty-one in dog years 👏 you surely use all the words wisely nobody else would write that way

Main hoon na use karne ke liye 😆😆

their moment was so subtle and yet so beautiful with a passion of different kind...loved every bit of it

kiss was soft by words but as deep too

I'm waiting to watch you strut back to bitching rig 🤣🤣🤣

Lo, you're the only one who understands stuffs 🤣

No one else probably mentioned this. But you did.. Last time ki tarah 😳😳😳

aiyo ang laga de re song hottt

koi early morning yeh song gungunate hue ghume toh bas samajh jao bande ki kya desires hain and bande ne kya sochne mein raat nikali hai

Pyaar mohabbatein and consummation. 🤣

The haseen dard 🤣 🤣

Ishita Mihika moment was again done perfectly...there is no one thing i can mention because it was just rightly done

"May I just point out that you broke up with Subbu 72 hours ago and now you're dating some other guy who's not even gonna be in town for 72 hours?

🤣

koi samjhao ise yaar zamana badal raha hai...72 hours toh jyada ho gaye log subah breakup karke shaam ko kuch aur hi kar rahe hote hain 😆

Aapne bada dunaiye dekh rakha hai 😆

Huh! Just be careful. Men.. are hairy🤣

Likhne ke baad I was like, kya yeh theek rahega.. but then haan.. readers aap jaise ho toh kyun nahi 🤣 🤣🤣🤣

yeh bas Mihika hi keh sakti hai

POPPYSMIC

you know what i kept trying to make that noise all the time last night when i read that section and got weird reactions from 😡😡😡

Karo aise kaam aur.. bass mummy ji aaye toh unke saamne na karna, mujhe wapas daant padegi 😆

but again i am short of words it...you wrote the whole Raman's section brilliantly 👏

THANK YOU🤗

oh ho he already impressed her...even i am eager to know how he found her email id...i believe she is already a famous doctor so probably he found out somewhere online...lets see how you bring it out but waiting to know

Madam ko kaun nahi jaanta hai. 😆😆

There's a lot more to know

yes surely there is lot more to know, lottt more to do...just waiting for the next update impatiently

Sorry.. I'm updating.. 10 more minutes and you'll have the update 😆😆

While they kept waiting, Raman had his plans done with Ishita.

how can you end it with such a khatarnak line...now i am going to bug you until the next update is up so you better start working on the next update soon

HEHE!!! see that's how you grab readers attentions. End in a khatarnaak place 😆

phew done...if you complain about the length i am never commenting again

this was again a great update...continue soon

Nahi karungi complain length lekar. You know that I love reading your comments. 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Unresed at 40 😃

Originally posted by: VENBA

Superb update...

It was awesome..

Thanks for pm..😊😊

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Res

Finally Unres

Wow 👏

I quite liked this update..

So many small things made me say "aww"😆

Aww!! now that makes me say Aww 😆

Raman held her shoulder with his left hand and whispered in her ear thank you... cho chweet 😊

She asked him to thank Bunty. I was like "Are you serious"

And Raman thanked him also...loll 😛

Dumb of her nah.. Such stuffs irritate me too

Silence created a beautiful and comfortable relation between them. They could speak a lot without even a word coming out of their mouth. ..... I loved these sentences

THANK YOU 😳😳

So finally ishita knows about Shagun. I personally liked Raman's reply... I would have told the same 😳

Cause tu bhi toh uski tarah reserved hai 😛

Kiss 😲 😲 ☺️

Main paani pee rahi Thi and Sab mooh se baahar 😳

ishu kaafi bold nikli

Unexpected kiss was ☺️

LE!!! Agli baar khaate khaate ya paani peete peete mere updates na padha kar.. warna teri mummy aake mujhe pitgegi 😆😆😆

Aww... both are very happy after their concert date

I just loved this mihika here...

May I just point out that you broke up with Subbu 72 hours ago and now you're dating some other guy who's not even gonna be in town for 72 hours?

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

hmm... mihika ka warning... correct hai boss

But these words "I like him"

even I liked it 👍🏼

Loll Raman finding words in paintings...

I could seriously visualize each action of Raman

that kid... lol poor him 🤣 🤣

LOL!! I was giggling while writing this part 😆😆😆

I was grinning very badly when I read that...

Ahem... E-mail ID bhi pata laga li... Kya baat hai

plans...umm... Interesting
Update soon

P.S - sorry for being late.

P.S.S - Love you n Miss you