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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello ppl😊😊...this is my first os..plzz forgive me for my grammar mistakes.
note: this is about raman and ishita s confession..i know it already happened .but i wrote this long back. thought of sharing it with u ppl...

It was Feb. 14, valentine day. Raman had planned a romantic candle light dinner for Ishita in a star hotel (roof top).Raman was wearing black suit and pant with red tie and he looked dashing with his stubble.He already reached the destination and waiting for ishita. He was restless because he was on a date with his very own wife but don't know what to do and what to talk to her. He just had one thing in his mind that he should make ishita feel special and he was determine to confess his love..tonight..

he was standing in the centre of the roof top which is decorated with
red colour and he was standing near the table to check out the decorations. The
lights are dimmed and it was a new moon day and the moon light is spread
throughout the area.

he heard the sound of her heels and he turned to see his lady love.
There she was, wearing a beautiful red saree with the black designer border. She
had her long hair loose and wearing a classic diamond ear ring. she just looked
perfect .he was awe-strucked. he moved forward to welcome her and they both sat
comfortably in their respective place. She was impressed to see his arrangements
and said

ishita: Raman the arrangements are very good and very thoughtful but don't
you think it's kind of expensive

Raman was pissed, he replied

Raman: Thanks ishita, but why do you care about the expenses, anyway I
am not in the mood to argue with you.

Ishita said, "Raavan Kumar, listen either i am not here to argue
with you",

Raman:"hello! Jhansi ki rani please uh!! don't make me shout at
u"

and they begun to start they usual fight but after certain point they realize ,how crazy they are to fight during their first date. they both stared
at each other and began to laugh. After sometime they had their dinner (of course,
Ishita's fav) and talked about their family, their childhood memories
,etc,etc,.after their dinner Raman said that he have a surprise for ishita.

he hold her hand and they both went to the gazebo which was near the pool
and the light in the pool was reflecting on them. She was curious and started
to blush profusely.

he took Ishita's hands into his and knelt down. He begun to speak with lots of love,which was visible in his eyes.

Raman: Ishita, nahh, my jhansi ki rani.Where were you before. You have
any idea ,how lucky I am to get you in my life. I still can't believe my fate
which has brought you into my life. I was wondering how my creator created such
a beautiful woman both inside and outside. You are just beautiful ishita. roads,
river and falls may change its course. Life may initiate a new path. Raindrops
can hum a different tune. Seasons may change their style but i will remain
forever with you for every minutes and every seconds. Be with me forever jhansi
ki rani. I will be happy till the end and you know why, because "naan
unnai kadhalikeran"( I love you in tamil)" he gifted her a diamond bracelet and
put them on her wrist.

ishita was touched and moved by Raman's gesture. She was overwhelmed and
very happy to hear his confession. His confession was more than she ever
dreamt of. With tears filling her eyes she begun to speak.

ishita: Raman, I thank you for coming into my life and you made me feel complete.
I promise you that I' ll be always there for you in every phrase of our life. I
promise you that I will be yours forever
and ever. I promise you that i ll hold your hands and walk with you in every
situation and I am yours Raman and you know why because "main tannu pyar
kardi haan". Now it is Raman turn to became overwhelmed since he didn't
expect her confession..

they both wiped each other tears, after all they have heard those words
which they were longing to hear for a long time. After their confession they
both shared a passionate hug .they realize its time for them to take their
relationship to one more step ahead. Both came closer .Raman caress her face
with his hand. She closed her eyes to feel what's coming next. He came closest
to her for each and every second

Raman suddenly felt like someone patting his back near dinning table. It
was the manager and he informed him that the arrangements are over and he is
leaving. Then, Raman realize that he was dreaming about ishita and the things
which he was planning to do with her. He was very disappointed

he now hear the same sound of the heels which he heard in his dream and
turn back to see ishita dressed up ditto as he dreamt about. Ishita with much
expectation came near her husband to hear a compliment from him about her looks.
But Raman said "ishita please pinch me once".

ishita was left puzzled.

thanks for spending your time for this os..hope i didn't disappoint you guys..😉😈

plzz dont bash me..

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ruhi_ishra thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Great beginning ... 😊
Update soon !!
v.kaavya thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
thanks..i ll surely do that!!😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
It's beautiful.
Romantic proposal.
R u gonna cont this?
If yes, plz cont sn.
v.kaavya thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5
i jus thought of givin one short story...do u think i shd continue with this??😊
Impossible.Girl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
aww...such a sweet proposal
please do continue it dear
was well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Its a beautiful starting plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Beautiful.
Lehh.. Sab dream mein hua.
Continue jaldi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
lovely update
plz continue soon
v.kaavya thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#10
ppl i seriously hav no idea how to continue this..jus gimme some time...😕
thanks a lot for ur comments!!!😊😊❤️

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