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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Awesome

please continue soon


thanks...

will updte soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Sounds Interesting

Continue soon


thank u so much...

i vl post nxt part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kabhi kam na honge yeh chahat - sounds intense nahi? 😃
Waise passion and intensity is such a combo that makes the story a beautiful one.
I hope you're doing something like that only.
Loved the prologue.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Piyu97




Kabhi kam na honge yeh chahat - sounds intense nahi?😃
Waise passion and intensity is such a combo that makes the story a beautiful one.
I hope you're doing something like that only.
Loved the prologue.
Continue soon.


Piyu i can write intense lik u...

Dnt keep high hopes...

I wil try to write romantic bt nt sure...

Wil updte soon..

P.s seen ur pm nd i vl cmnt on ur updte very soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Waiting for first chapter..
Thanks a lot for pm..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VENBA

Awesome prologue...

Waiting for first chapter..
Thanks a lot for pm..😊😊


thanks dear...

wiil updte soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks vl continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-1

NOT PROOF READ... IGNORE MISTAKES...


It's 4 am wake up...It's 4 am wake up... (it's a alarm ring)
Ishita lazily searching for her mobile to off the alarm as she didn't even slept properly and now this alarm... I hate this alarm... and messaged him to check whether he landed safely or not...?? Her messages didn't delivered to him and she is just irritated as she very well know her raavan kumar and his habits... I hope his phone battery is not dead... ishita messaged for 10 times but her messages are not get delivered... so she decided to call but its getting switched off... each passing minute for her is like hell and after 30 min she got message from raman that he landed safely and going for his next connecting flyte... she is happy by seeing his message finally and started preparing for her MBA exam finally as it her last exam and with this she completes her MBA... she waited eagerly for this moment but it turned out into disaster because of his departure before her final exam... she is trying hardly to read and concentrate on the book but everything is going opposite to that... she tried for nth time to concentrate but nothing is working for her... she chosen to quite the idea of studying and have a quick nap so that she will be not be sleepy during exam...
Ishita got ready and checking her mobile from time to time because its her habit to get good wishes from raman before going to exam but he didn't text her... she is disappointed but made herself think that his usual habit of forgetting this pretty things and he don't even get time to think of all these... she with heavy heart left for exam and texted him that she is going to give her last exam and catch you after that...she don't know how she completed her exam or you can say what she didn't even remember what she written... she just checked her mobile to find the any new messages from raman and here it is ALL THE BEST and "LOVE YOU MADRASAN"... That is enough for ishita to smile which she didn't do for a second from last 24 hours... He just left 24 hours back and for its is like a year or more than that... she just muttered RAAVAN aap kabhi sudaroge( You never change)... she tought she will talk to him when reaches his final destination and it has more 10 hours... she is killing every second like she is killing a year but the wait of her is never ending...
She reached her home and tried to catch some sleep but even sleep is far away from her today... the constant ringing of his toughts and his words is all she can think... she just remembering his words for her and their relation is all she is thinking and being happy... slowly she drifted into sleep... she woke up around 8pm and waited for the time to pass... she is changing channels or listening songs to divert her mind from him but every thing made her remaind of him when she is doing that... how they use to watch television and how use to fight for remote and how he always took trickly took remote from her... those romantic songs which have their memories and some songs even remained her of their secret romantic movie dates...
She is trying hardly to concentrate on some other things but she is only thinking of him and their moments... she hardly spoke to anyone from past 24 hours... she just speaking to show them that she is fine and just pretending to be happy when surrounded by her family so that no one can know how she is alone inside without him... this long distance of their relation making her of loosing herself and the strong JKR which called by his RAAVAN KUMAR is not at all a JKR now... she is seeing her emotional side which she rarely know that it exist in her... her RAAVAN made her to accept this long distance and convienced her in various ways to be happy but she simply couldnot do it... she left the dinning after her dinner and made the way into her room where her world lies... she is completely to herself here and no one can enter this world of her except her RAAVAN... but now he too not here... she started sobbing bitterly and didn't notice the time until she heard her mobile beep... she first didn't bothered but after continuous beeps she just saw that those her RAAVAN messages that he reached safely and his friend came to pick up him...she cleared her face and didn't bothered to reply for some time... when he again messaged ARE YOU OKAY...?? She replied him that she is fine and asked him to message when he reach his room... he said okay and asked her sleep for some time... she just smiled by reading it but he is such a devil... he immediately messaged her... STOP BLUSHING AND SLEEP... and don't even lie to me I know you better than anyone and I can recognise your silence too... she just tought about his last words of him before he left to USA saying KABHI KUM NA HONGE YE CHAHATE... and waiting for his next message and round of lecture from him...
P.S: I am stopping here... I dont know how it turned out... waiting for comments and criticism...
P.S.S: for PM's like index on page 1.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shavi I just read it now...
It was so mind blowing...
Ishita emotions were apt... I know from where/whom they are inspired from...
You brought out the character 's emotions nicely... That longingness that emptiness that unconnectivity that disorientedness everything... N I know it's such a pain which one endures...

I liked your way of describing shavi... Its was awesomely written n well described... Raman on his part was notorious... Haha... Again I got the reference...

Continue soon... Its was awesome... Wanna read the next update sooner...

P. S love you darling...
Edited by shravsss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Its pain to read ishita status.loved this update,awesome shravani

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