ISHRA SS: Katra-Katra (Horror)

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

@pallu Wow emotional update;-(.brilliant update pallu.u always give suprise to your readers.pls dissolve the story.no words to express raman pain.thanks for pm .:-)

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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

nice...

now Raman is restless,

waitting for next

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RIA ROY

@wrizaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

well written... it is becoming more confusing. .. u r shaping up the story perfectly ... the way u described Raman's emotions were really awesome. .. I like this kind of stories a lot... waiting for the next part...

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: anushaq
very nice

thanks 😊

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Pallavi this is truly awesome! The concept is so ripe n fresh n extremely new! Totally different from other stories.

Beautifully written.. Gosh their love making ufff! Wild like animals! I feel myself gng red!

Cont soon.. reallyy wanna knw if Ishita is actually dead or not!

P.S I didn't watch Alone.. wil b watching aftr my exams..n I love ths two songs!

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This is awesome! Raman realising that he was dreaming or was she a ghost? Pls, Pallavi. Ab toh suspense khatam karo! I want to know the actual story! Continue soon.

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Oh no, so she's dead?

I really liked the bit in the end where Raman goes to the lake in search of answers and then breaks down. I could totally imagine KP in that scene, because he does so well in the crying scenes😆

Also, it really went well with the song😊

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: pretty_h
wow awesome the way raman was trting to know if it was a dream n then realise ghost was with him n did love some he felt to understand

the way you make him cry n shout her name in the lake wow too good love it pallavi

thx you did it here pm me for next

n show us how she die or has been murder who knows please do next soon

hey hansa,

Thanks for all appreciation. 😊 Hopefully all ur ques will b answered in d next part.