OS: Patch up while the night is bright - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahhahaa last line...
Ab tau bol do..
I I I .. I luv my neighbours.. Lolzzz.
Very well written..
Love it 2 d core..
Yar seriously I must say yhm forum writers r much more best better den CVS...😉
Plz guys tum log hi CVS ban jao.. Pir tau hamesha hi 1st position mai rahegi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so sweet! A perfect balance of real conversation with a little of RKB's classic one liners!

❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was shooo cute!!😳
N you write LOVELY!!🤗👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Lovely update
Please do keep writing such awesome fics

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha.. the last line took the cake for me.. So cute🤣
Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalz_123

😛

raman did uthak bethak...yaaay i m so happy...i love u, for making him do tht...

beautifully written...tarap raha hu... so cute...

yes lets beat him and then hug him... BAS... loved your OS...Superb


thank u babe ...the uthak baithak was just for u🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks everyone for the likes and wonderful comments...glad u liked my story!😃😃
Edited by fugitives123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fugitives123


thank u babe ...the uthak baithak was just for u🤗



i forgot to mention this...I love...










my neighbour too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .TIA.

Ann 🤗

I totally loved it 😛
I wish the cvs could read this n get some inspiration 😳
I would have loved to see this play out after the ugly scenario we witnessed yesterday😳
I loved that Raman was restless n not liking the things he said. Atleast he had some feelings😕
Puttar should have tadpaod more 😡 Bad boy tht he was 😡
But he came that night itself n apologised 😳 😳
My fav part -
"I...I...I..."

"Ab toh bolo!!!"

"I love my neighbour!!" he grinned nudging his shoulder with hers.



Thank u re Tia🤗
He is a bad boy only but Is se zyada puttar ko thadpaana mushkil tha mere liye...if i had written after seeing today's epi...thoda aur gussa aata!😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veeann

That was just awesome Ann


Now that's what we should have seen. If he had to act abusive, then there should've been remorse. He needs to acknowledge that he acted like a total shithead. Instead from what I heard, he went to the gym and there was no remorse.

Power cut hua, toh Ishita ka fault. Yes, and global warming too. And the Gulf War. And the mouse in my flat.

Love your writing Anu. I prefer this version and I am going to pretend this was yesterday's episode.




Vee!!! Thank u soo much baby...it means alot coming from you...u know I lub u lots na!!🤗
Lol yes...ishita is responsible for our phone crashing issues too😆

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