IshRa OS : |Love Confession|

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all, Diya here... First time I'm writing on Ishra, so I don't know whether you like it or not but whatever your opinion is, please share after reading this writing piece...


As you all watched the promo but I don't know how long Ekta madam will take to bring in onscreen but before she do, I'm posting something.. Please if I do any mistake, ignore it...


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Love Confession


"Offoo!! Papa, you are good for nothing..." Ruhi cutely pouted while banging her head on her tiny palm...


"Oye!! Ruhi chuhi, don't say like that.. I know papa can do this..." Adi corrected her with a cheerful face to encourage Raman..


"No Adi bhaiya!! I'm saying right... Still papa couldn't able to say Ishi maa those three easy words..." She angrily looked at Raman who was sitting there holding his cheeks as he had pain on his teeth, he was cursing himself for listening to his kids...


"Yes!! Even you have a point Ruhi.. Papa speak out!! We planned everything but you spoiled everything, who told you to being a patient there..." Adi disappointingly asked when Raman glared at him...


"Who told me!! Bachho tum toh apne baap ke bhi baap nikle..." Raman self thought still holding his cheeks...


"Papa say!!" Ruhi shouted on her when Raman angrily looked at her & tried to say something "Ouch!!" But he moaned in pain... "Papa!! What are you saying?? We can't understand.." Ruhi politely said...


"Ruhi, I think papa wants some pain relief medicines!!" Adi suggested as he too couldn't understand, the kids started arguing on it when Raman said with lots of struggle "Sshh... Sshh!!" The kids put their fingers on their lips when Raman searches for something & he took Ruhi's one copy & pen then writes something & gave it to Adi...


"Shut your mouths you two... We will talk about it tomorrow, now go & sleep!!" Adi read the paper & looked at Ruhi who already looking at Raman "Achaa!! You are trying to say this.." Ruhi chuckled...


"Okay fine papa!!" Ruhi said & Raman took a leave from their room..


Raman walked in their room & found Ishita was sleeping so peacefully, he smiled seeing her innocence face & walked to her side... He sat on bed next to her "Sorry Ishita, I spoiled the evening,I did a silly mistake..." He chuckled in mind while touching in cheeks & caressed her face when she hold his hand tightly in her sleep.. "But I promise one day I'll tell you about my feelings.." He said in mind & slowly free his hand from her grip & going to leave when Ishita said in her sleep "Raman I..." He smiled & covered her with blanket...

Next morning, sun rays fall on Ishita's face & with a struggle she opened her eyes, her head was spinning when she remembered about last evening "Aiyyo Murgan!!" She quickly sit up on bed & hold her head as it was heavy... Just then Raman walked in room, after taking a shower...

"Arey!! Neelu... Bring a cold Lemon juice for your bhabhi..." He ordered with a loud voice that Neelu could hear him from kitchen, meanwhile Ishita just watching at him angrily...

"What?? Why are you staring at me like a jagga jasus??" Raman asked with a mischievous smile...

"How!! How could you do this Raman?? You know I never touched wine & yesterday you made me drink wine instead of juice... You know I'm pure Madrasi??" She burst out her anger on him...

"Oye Madrasan!! Now you are become Punjabi & by the way, you know how much you were enjoying the drink, so stop this mellow-drama!!" Raman teased her when she looked on "By the way you speak a lot in sleep!!" Raman's words mader her shock, she looked at him with wide eyes...

"What, what I said??" She asked hesitatingly... When Raman sat next to her & replied "Which you wanted to say since long but couldn't.."

Ishita looked at him confused "What!! What I wanted to say!! Tell me clearly Raman.." She became so impatience... Raman started coming close to her "You said that..."

".. That.."

"... That you..." Raman came closer to her with his every word & Ishita's heart was racing like a horse.. She was blushing profusely... "What Raman??" She politely asked...

"... That you love..." Ishita's heart came on her hand as she was sure what Raman was going to say... She was waited for him to complete but as Raman stopped she flicked her eyes to ask...

"You said that you love..." He was so close to her that she could feel his warm breath "... You love wine!!" He said & quickly rubbed his rose with hers, Ishita's mouth became wide in shock "WHAT!!!"

"Yes!! You said I loved the wine, so look I brought one bottle for you... But wait what you thought haan..." He asked in teasing tone when Ishita looked at him angrily & started hitting him with pillows "I won't talk with you Raman.." When he told her hand tightly & politely said "Don't worry!! You didn't say anything which you should say..." He smiled & leave her blushing...

Kabhi kam na honge yeh chahatein... Pal pal bade Yeh Hai Mohabbatein... Played in background...

Next two days left normally, Adi & Ruhi suggested him so many things but unfortunately he couldn't able to say... On the third day Ruhi was pacing in her room when Adi brings Raman in their room..

"What happen kids!!" Raman asked as he knew they were surely planing something..

"Papa!! Did you buy any gift for Ishi maa!!" Ruhi strictly asked in which Raman narrowed his eyes & looked at Adi..

"Papa now don't say you forget Ishita aunty's birthday!!" Adi said when Raman sighed...

"No Ruhi.. I didn't.." Raman replied..

"Okay... Promise me you will make her birthday special..." Ruhi almost ordered her when Adi thought something "Idea!!! Why don't you propose her on her birthday... Isn't it great idea Ruhi??"

Ruhi excitedly jumped "Yes Adi bhaiya it's great idea.. So, papa you will propose her, it will be her gift from your side..." Raman sighed... "But this time you have to follow us!!" Ruhi instructed when Raman agreed as he hadn't any option left...

On Ishita's birthday, it was 11:30 Pm at night when she was roaming in her room "Where are you Raman??" She murmered & checked the clock in every passing minute... Adi once check her & smirk seeing her so restless...

"Hello papa!! Don't come before 12:30 & don't wish her today.. Got it..." Ruhi ordered him over the phone "Okay meri maa!!" Raman was roaming outside the apartment...

It was 12 Am when everyone walked in her room & wished her, she took blessing from Mr. & Mrs. Bhalla...

"Arey puttar Raman kithhe hai??" Mrs. Bhalla asked...

"Woh mummy ji he had some important meeting so may be he will come late..." Ishita replied, soon everyone left from her room...

As per Ruhi's plan Raman came back home after 12:30 Am, Ishita was still awake, she was waiting for him... "You took so much time.." She said when Raman walked in room..

He silently went to fresh up & after coming back, he sit on bed.. "Raman you okay!!" She asked worriedly..

"Yes, I'm little tired!! Good night..." He slept on bed...

"Raman you forget my birthday!! What else I can expect from you..." She self thought & went to sleep...

Next morning, she was getting ready for clinic when Raman walked in room "Umm!! Ishita, today I'll pick you up from clinic!!" He hurriedly said when she shook her head... Soon they left for their respective works...

In the evening, Raman picked her up from clinic & they reached at home... "Arey!! Why does the lights off?? Neelu, mummy ji, papaji.." Ishita called everyone by their names... "No one are at home.. Simmi went to clinic with Ananya & maa, papa went to Pammi aunty's house..." Raman replied when Ishita shook her head as okay & going to take a leave from hall, suddenly some dim lights turned on... The hall was decorated with the balloons & ribbons... Ishita was delighted seeing this...

"Amm!! Happy birthday Ishita..." She turned at him with a smile "It's so beautiful Raman!! Thank you... You didn't forget my birthday!!!!" She was admiring the decoration, meanwhile Raman was staring at her when his eyes fall on Ruhi & Adi who were hiding behind the sofa & signed him to speak...

"Ahem!! Ishita..." He cleared his throat when she looked at him with question eyes "Ishita.. I.. I wanted to say you something..." She looked at him with curious..


"Ishita.. I.." He was stammering when he found a board behind her which Adi & Ruhi held, Ishita shook her head going to turn when Raman said "Ishita tum iss saree mein bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho!!" Hearing the compliment she smiled with blush when Raman continued seeing the next board ".. Aur tum jab hasti ho toh aur bhi khubsurat lagti ho..."


She was hell shocked, as she never expected this from Raman, she walked upto him & checked him "Raman are you alright?? Raavan Kumar becomes Romantic Kumar... How sweet!!" She gently said when Raman took her hand in him "Ishita.. I wants to tell you something..." He looked at her romantically, She shook her head...


"Since long I was trying to say you that I... I..." He was stammering when Ishita looked at him with a smile & Raman looked her behind where Adi & Ruhi was standing with a board...


He closed his eyes & sighed deeply "I.. I wanted to say you that.. That I love you ishi maa!!" He said looking at the board & quickly closed his eyes as he did a mistake again, Ishita surprisinhly followed his gaze but kids quickly hides...

"What!!" She exclaimed, Raman bites his tongue... "I.. I mean.." He hold her hand & romantically looked at her "Ishita you know we get married just for Ruhi, but our relation grown up, we stayed together in our happy & worst time, you handled me & my tortures a lot, today Adi & Ruhi both are with me, you complete my family.. I know in our relation we doesn't need to explain our love but still I wanted to tell you that... That I LOVE YOU Ishita..."

shita's eyes filled with tears when Raman bend on his knees holding a diamond ring "Ishita, will you spend your rest of the life with your Raavan Kumar??" She happily shook her head when Raman slipped the ring on her finger "I Love You Ishita..."

"I Love You too Raman..." They happily hugged when Ruhi came from behind shouting "Yayy!! Finally Papa said I love you to Ishi maa!!" They parted from each other... Ishita hugged Ruhi & looked at Raman with a blush...

Soon the rest of the members came out from their respective room giving them a shock "Maa, papa, Simmi you all at home?? But you all said..." Raman asked in disbelief...

"Oye!! We don't want to miss your romance!! So stayed back..." Mrs. Bhalla chuckled... "Finally mere puttar ne kuch Punjabi sher wala kaam kiya hai..." Mrs. Bhalla praised him when both Raman & Ishita looked down shyly...

Soon Ishita cut the cake & fed to everyone... "Now!! It's time for a picture..." Mihir declared when everyone stands, Raman & Ishita stood far when Simmi said "Arey!! Why are you too stand so far??" And she made them stand together when Raman put his hand on her shoulder & they looked at each other happily... "Ready!!" Mihir said & they all clicked a happy family photo...

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I don't know whether I could write this piece as per your expectation or not, but frankly I tried my best... I hope you like it... Please comment after reading..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This confession was just Perfect...☺️
Hope cv's get their brain back so that they can give us some proper confession..😆
Keep it up😊
Edited by ..DiVan.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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too cute and lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow is just the word coming from me now
Such a lovely and perfect confession
Please somebody make our CV's read this
Good job dear 👏
Hope to see more from you
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice confession. Gud work dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS...
Diya beautifully written, you have included all fun elements perfectly..
Ruhi such a sweetheart, its always cute to see her ordering her papa, adi is too...
Raman writing in book to shut them was so cute😆😆 ...
as usually IshRa nok-jhok n convo was too good esp raman coming closer, ishita was so tensed to know it- I loved the Wine🤣...
Ruhi's master plan was brilliant...

the way u have written every lines that i totally enjoyed it, esp the confession from Raman was so nice❤️☺️...

Finally family coming out everyone heard their confession was superb👏, family photo wow...
hope u get see the confession in show too, but before u made us to read and enjoy the confession yaar...
by reading ur OS, it wont get ur writing for first time... well done 👏

thanks diya🤗...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi diya...
wow... it was cute confession OS...
this will look good in the show too...
that was an amazing attempt dear...
do write more/...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful confession. 😊 Kash aisa hi kuch serial mein bhi dikhaye!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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9 words 2 described it wat I'm feeling after reading dis
Speechless..
Plz send ur work 2 CVS...
Hope dey can use it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful confession
raman confessed on ishitas birthday

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