SongOSthon#1 : 24 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 75

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Anusha cudnt sleep till u updated..wa konked offf..loved it. Deatil tmrw. Love u...

Originally posted by: Veeann

Anusha

What were you worrying about? That was so well written. You kept in on the current track, and then brought in her confession and their consummation at the same time. Thats how I always thought it would go - that they wouldnt wait once they confessed 😳 😳

Loved the song too - went so well with them missing each other. And he finds out she was sleeping with his shirts. Awww.

Trust Ravan Kumar to get all angry again when she missed his calls - thank you Toshi for letting him know.

Loved it yaara. At office so cant do the emoticons for you, but LOVED IT.

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

Ann very good 👏 if you can produce in one day too good 👏👏

I liked that you showed separation tadap on both sides. Him missing her and ordering idili samabhar from 'sarvana bhavan'.is there one really there in nj? Him realizing something is wrong.Good toshiji told the truth I wanted puttar 'our hero' comeback and bajao param, not subbu 😆.After his comeback 'roj ek he shirt or alag alag' funny very funny.🤣

Best was last line 😳☺️

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

@fugitives123

hey Anusha

Wonderful piece of writing dear

in fact i would say the best confession

very sweet take on this lovely song

ishita hugging his shirt...aww

"Same shirt everyday or a different one for each day"...this cracked me up😆

Originally posted by: beckysharp

Ann, my god that was awesome !

Like Anu, I seem to have gotten into this gifs mode :🤣

Oh my, I loved the missing each other, the way Ishu sleeps with puttar's shirt by her side to remind her of him ... that childish anger by puttar so like him ! I loved loved loved it !

Please Ann, do write more...

Originally posted by: .TIA.

Anushaaa 🤗 🤗

I loved it 😛

Biwi missing puttar so much n clinging onto his shirts 😳

Puttar getting angry n doing nakhras 😆

Him giving a surprise n coming back early 👏

Then the couch talk 😃

Couch romance ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Biwis confession ❤️ ❤️

Just asome...all of it 😛

Thank you

Originally posted by: arunabhi

Hey Ann ,

That was a very well written and a beautiful OS. I really don't understand why were you so nervous about it 😆. Calling yourself a grandma soul when you wrote the kissing action so elegantly. I am sure you will call me sweet and all that, but this is one beautiful OS. Esp the way she found him in his shirts and perfume.. haiyeee 😳, Mein marjawaan .

Then his attitude when she did not attend his calls 😳. So puttar I tell you and then Love you my raavan kumar bhalla and the last line ☺️ ☺️.. Bas, got me grinning ☺️ ☺️.

Thanks for this lovely one 😳

@dochdoe : Im sorry for the delay reply! I was travelling and I didnt get time to open up. Awesum updatee!! loved it totally! I loed hw u explained Raman's state of mind, heart and body! bwhaha! Poor man! getting despo, nervous all at a shot! loved hw ruhi calls ishita as ishimaam! hw cute that was!

Originally posted by: swathin

Beautiful update
loved it