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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

@Eyes-wide-shut...song and the story is very much blended,

and of course pen down is very brilliantly .

subbu and Shagun ,noticeing,

ishita and Raman discussing .

very good

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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Hello Minaji! Beautiful OS. I feel like you really were true to (what I know of) Raman's character. It's not easy to be in someone's head for the entire OS, and to maintain that narrative of denial but you were amazingly consistent and committed to your narrative. So well done!

I liked the little teasing glimpses of Ishita - her fragrance, her arm against his. She flits through our mind the way she flits through Raman's.

Thank you for sharing. (I think English has failed me a little today :/)

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Mina beautiful OS . Love this side of Raman he find everything possible way to divert his mind out of Ishu.and everything you write is only him and about him and his thinking that he free from his wife when she not next to him. But actually every thought in his mind was involve withe her from the time he wake up till he go to bed it never be a moent he not miss her but he still Ravan Kumar so evrything in his style and under his control . I am glad that have chance to read your story and really want to find out about your other story that you write before so I can catch up with them. Thanks dear for join in witing in this Song OSthon the meaning of. The song so beautiful too .🤗