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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: ishruhi

we were waiting for one from yesterday evening na...my withdrawal symptoms are at its peak...so rules thodna...thanks that nisha answered.i dnt know any other way to ask!

Tum hi voh bechaari ho na jiske update poochne ke kuchh seconds baad hi Nisha offline chali jaati hain ?? 😆 Is that you ??

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Errantnomad

@Errantnomad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Errant,
Just as its people's choice to love K JO movies and Kekta shows unconditionally, shouldn't I have the choice of being hurt?

I write ONLY for pleasure. Tear up R&B, II, Ranjan, Mr Iyer, Mr Iyer, Minion, Chachu to shreds
Saying nasty things about ME HURTS ME. Maybe I should suck it up, but its "my choice" to be hurt.
Just as its people's choice to insult me, its my choice to be hurt. Pretty straight forward.

If I were to draw analogies I would say if you invited someone to your house fed them FOUR MEALS day after day after day for 5 months, cooking TWO HOURS EACH DAY NO reason except you love them, they insulted you with harsh words? Maybe you are a seasoned mature, Zen like Buddhist person that will use it to become a "better human being", thank them, send them off on a paid world tour holiday saying "their hurtful words made you a better person" etc .

Unfortunately I am extremely flawed and immature... I react the only way I know... GET HURT.
Its TOTALLY stunning to me that in fact makes me quite speechless when I think about it, that this Forum MANDATES Ishita Bhalla or Kekta Kapoor
should not be insulted but its OK to insult a Member. Wonder how lawyers defend an imaginary character like Ishita Bhalla.

I WRITE FOR PLEASURE ALONE, after a long day at the job, commute, taking care of family, kids and cooking.
I am not an author of any repute. I spend two hours a day MAINLY to hang out and suck up happy vibes and the rest to tell a story.
Me, the characters, or the story NONE of it is perfect, in fact it's as defective and flawed as can be.
I appreciate questions on "why I think II did a certain thing" OR "why R&B reacted a certain way"
I will passionately provide an argument for why I think so.
I love the 100s that ONLY say nice things. THAT'S ALL I want... Insult the characters with full gusto
Please don't insult me or my writing. If you have nothing nice to say, you can quit reading
I believe not only KJo and Kekta or Ishita Bhalla
BUT EVEN non celebrities aka mango people like me are entitled to not be insulted...
I FULLY understand its impractical to only receive bouquets, but I DON'T want brickbats. I get ENOUGH from life outside IF. More than enough... So I humbly request people that feel like insulting me to walk away and NOT read the story. I am too old to change myself. My family and friends love me the way I am... FULLY. It would be impossible to change, its impossible for me to handcraft a consummation to your liking.

To ALL others: I was deeply hurt, I wont pretend to be a celebrity and take in my stride etc.
But wont quit writing
Trash the characters as much as you like.
Spare me if you can... please
If you cant... let me know... I can wrap it all up in one chapter
My apologies...

I CHOOSE NOT TO RESPOND TO THIS POST, NISHA. ITS BENEATH ME TO BE PROVOKED TO RESPOND TO THIS.

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#273

yes yes yes vidya.its me paavam girl...always that happens.(i cant quote ur comment.my phone is not allowing)paavam SR will always be there to console me...

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: Ashu25
Beautiful Nivi!!!

Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl
Wow lovely!!👏 ok please please please use ur writing skills nivi dont let corporate world get to you ...

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Nivi outstanding poetry... you are so immensely talented... Doc S ko hum batayen? Oh! Wow!!

Thank you to all three of you, but you are being far too generous with your compliments. 😳 I would call it amateurish at best. 😊

@Nisha: What he doesn't know won't hurt him. 😉 😆

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charlie1950

@charlie1950

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

I just woke up and was searching for my cup of tea i.e an update but found none
That's ok but what is not ok is that there was a big hungama of some sort where lady author got hurt .
Nisha writes a wonderful story if it wouldn't have been this good she wouldn't have this much readers .
Out of her busy schedule she gives us a
way to live in totally bliss of this story
I really appreciate her for all her efforts and I totally love her story the way it is
Her story is totally hatkay. If somebody don't appreciate that pls and kindly leave so that peps like us continue to enjoy it
Khushi nahi deni ati toh dukh dena ka bhi haq nahi kisiko
🤗 to u nisha. Lov ya yaar
B happy u make us happy

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

The unknown and distant

When she went down in the morning ready to grab breakfast on the go, Ranjan was again pacing the kitchen, drinking coffee, talking loudly in Punjabi, she didnt try to listen cause it didnt make any sense to her

She picked up her lunch case, and grabbed a croissandwich and poured coffee into her thermos, stirred sugar, and bolted the door, she was supposed to go meet Akka

at the hospital and then head to work, she had requested Ranjan's driver to give her a ride today.

R&B was gone this morning, she had gotten a text from him that he was going to be in NOIDA all day, he had told her about a auto parts manufacturer in Faridabad yesterday...that was their new proposal, not quite a proposal but a "case Tan wanted him to look at"

He had agreed, and spent most of the day with them, the company was in existence and profitable... the new piston idea was being tested... a long way to go

She had told him about bumping into Chachu in the elevator while returning home from the hospital,

he had listened "U think he is in trouble?" she had asked

"I bet he knows about it" (Ranjan) R&B muttered shaking his head "And ummm... no"

"I read about all sorts of Bihar stories, I cant believe someone I know is involved" II was in a daze

"Yep its all about how involved u should be" R&B had ended it cryptically...

"Were you afraid when you were there?" she quizzed him

"Not really" he shrugged...

"I dont understand most of what Dad does" she muttered looking out the window "I hope Samar is safe"

"None of us do" he muttered looked out on his side "He should be" (Samar)

As he waited on the NOIDA toll bridge for his turn to pay, the events from last night ran through his mind

He was aware Chachu was afflicted with the gift of exaggeration, when his wife told him about

Chachu fearing Samar's condition, he had let it pass, when Ranjan had woken him from sleep to narrate, he had wondered

what the heck the idiot must have gotten himself into

He was sure, by now, Samar must have beeped women all three men "supplied", he had looked at his Bihar financial model over coffee downstairs in the patio... the most "economically feasible" was Jain's plan,

it had two completely built structures with minimal modification requirements... Jha was the most expensive, his lots were closer to town, Ranjan was hauling cars from Mehrauli

and Ghazipur distribution centers to all over Delhi

And Patna was not half the size of NCR in fact 20% maybe max... so there was no point in having a distribution center 5 kms from the showroom, might as well have one sintead of two

The workshop didnt require 200 of repair bays, 25-50 max... Hyundai showroom was 5 kms East of the location Jha was suggesting, it didnt take a rocket scientist to conclude a Maruti showroom would be an instant flop in such a scenario😡

But for some reason Samar was hung up on Jha

Going back to Samar's neck being on the guillotine... or that was a hoax too😕

He walked up to the first floor he heard Ranjan in the shower... he walked back down, he hadnt entered his Mom & Dad's bedroom in four years

He grabbed a bite to eat, packed his stuff up, he had to be at one of the new NOIDA Extension sectors today at 9 ish...

A company that had a proposal for a "personal shopper for senior citizens" idea

There was a whetting team... they passed on India proposals to him, he reviewed financials before even expressing any interest

Ranjan walked down, pleasantly surprised to see his son eating breakfast

"Did u talk to him?" R&B asked

"Subah se 6 phone aa gaya Harish ka... raat ko I left my phone on the swing" Ranjan worried

R&B didnt say anything

"He wants to close the deal with Jha" Ranjan muttered

R&B didnt say a word...

"He is sure Jha is a good man" "the papers are clean too" Ranjan claimed

So Ranjan was going to walk into the least cost effective proposal in order to bail out his nephew? or reward his nephew for displaying sub par

business skills?

He wondered how Ranjan operated in matters unrelated to Chachu and his progeny... he was really curious now

"Did u look at the proposals again?" Ranjan asked

"Hoping somehow magically Jha would turn out to be the saint? And Jain the crook?" R&B wondered

"I did" he said instead... he didnt say "NO CHANGE" because he wanted Ranjan to assume that

"Hmmm" Ranjan paced worriedly, gulping scalding hot coffee

"He shud be home tonite" Ranjan muttered

R&B nodded leaving Ranjan with his room full of thoughts

There was a huge case of breakfast Minion had made, poha, croissandwich, banana bread from a bakery in Malcha, and other kinds of bread

She picked it up, and walked over to Pre natal care, and found Akka's room, Amma and Appa waited outside in the "living room"

Paati was there too...

She set the food on the side, and began serving them...

"Nanna toongineya?" (did u sleep?) Amma asked smiling fondly

"Hmmm... neenga?" She asked softly

"Edo" "Appa toongave ille" (Appa didnt sleep) "He was fearing how the next three months will be"

"Epdi pohumo" (how will it pass?) "the unknown scares us" Amma said

"Ayyo yenn ma?" "We can only hope for good ma" "Malai Mandir la vendindeya? (did u do a mannat at the temple?) Ii enquired handing Amma a plate

"Hmmm u know... 6 months pregnant in a hospital" Amma's dam burst

"Azhade ma, paati paakara" (Paati is watching)

Amma sniffled

Bala had gone home to shower and change just before II walked in

"So Appa pesinala? About loss of pay for a year with Athim?" (did appa talk?) II asked

"Bala thinks its not a good idea" Amma said softly... crying more...

II sat down... looking at the room door leading to Akka...

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Hsp.canada

@Hsp.canada

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Thanks for the update! I feel better now, Phew 😳

Comments later after the rugrats go to sleep.

Muchas Gracias

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#278

I lovveee Minion... muaaahhh.. one of the cutest'est' character here ... I would want to see him interact with II more ... can I expect that.. II used to speak to Selvi DII mein.. yahan par kyun nahi ?? Paavam Minion.. usko bhi achcha lagega 😛😉

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: ishruhi
yes yes yes vidya.its me paavam girl...always that happens.(i cant quote ur comment.my phone is not allowing)paavam SR will always be there to console me...

Paavam you 😆😆😆 chalo, today that didn't happen 😉