IshRa TS - Kaon jeeta [completed]

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Hello YHM'ians.

I'm writing a two or three shot - Kaon jeeta ? Because of two reasons.
1: Fed up of the current track. Just want a change from Shagun's politics.
2 : Fell in love with movie - Detective Byomkesh Bakshy I watched today.

First time I liked a detective movie.It was so good.
Now enough of my bakwas.
Hope you enjoy it.

Part 1:Below
Part 2 : Page 11
Part 3 - Page 19

Note : Shagun lovers be away cuz no shagun is here. There are no kids in this TS.
No custody drama and Ishita is not hurt.
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Raman came back from office shouting "Ishita... Ishita kaha ho yaar tum?" (Where are you Ishita?)

Ishita was arranging clothes in the cupboard. Raman came near her and back-hugged her.

Ishita "Raman ...what are you doing?"
Raman "Loving my wife.What else?"
Ishita "hmm...Khana laga du?" (Will I put food)
Raman "Nahi ...baahar jaa rahe hai" (no,we are going out)

Ishita got excited and asked where.
"Shanti,Mrs.Bhalla shanti. Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai.Go get ready.we'll leave in 15 minutes"
(calm down Mrs.Bhalla calm down.waiting will give you sweet fruit)
Ishita got ready and they left.

Ishita "kaha jaa rahe hai?" (Where are we going)
"Movie "
"Movie...kaon si?"(movie...which one)
"Chinta mat Karo.It's your favorite"(don't worry.it's your favorite)
"Batao na please" (tell me please)
"Wait dear madrasan wait"

She saw Raman taking tickets for detective byomkesh baksy movie.She thought it's interesting. It will be a nice change.Both IshRa enjoyed the movie and came out.

In car
Raman "Toh madrasan. Kaise thi" (how was it)

"Bahot acchi.Par Aap ne aise kyu kaha jaate waqt that its my favorite"
(very nice.But why did you tell it was my favorite)

"Mujhe laga tumhe ye pasand aayega kyunki tume jagga jasoosi ka bahot shauk hai.Socha yeh dikha dunga to improve kar logo.Seekha ki nahi?"
(I thought you would like this as you love spying on others.i f I showed you this u might improve.Did you learn or not)

"Huh? Aap na kabhi nahi sudheroge.Vaise isko dekhne se pehle bhi main acchi jasoosi karti thi"
(you'll never be proper. Before seeing this also I was doing good spying only)
"Kaise...Sanjana mihir ki behen na"
(how?sanjana is mihir's sister)
"Vo galathi tha" (that was a mistake)
"Nahi nahi...vo tumhara faulty jasoosi tha"
(no.it was your faulty spying)
"Aap kehna kya chahte ho?"(what do you want to tell)
"Yahi ki tume aata nahi yeh sab"(you don't know this)
"Mujhe aata hai"(I know it)
"Prove it"
"Aap mujhe challenge kar rahe ho" (are you challenging me?)
"Yaa...challenge. Prove you're an amazing detective"
"Okay"
"This will be no fun without any punishments."
"Yes.Agar me jeetu to aapko aapki dil ki baat batana hoga"
(if I win,you'll have to confess your heart talk)
"Accha JKR.to agar tum haari to tume...tume mujhe kiss Karna padega."
(okay.if you lose you'll have to kiss me)
He bent towards her and told huskily "not on cheeks"
"Challenge accepted" she told.

It was almost two weeks and she found no trace of challenge.She went to Raman and asked "Where is my challenge?"
"Which one...oh detective... Ishita I was just joking.you took it so seriously"

Next day she found Raman talking on phone "Yes.sweetheart. I'll never disappoint you."
"Your wish is my command"
Ishita was eavesdropping this.
"Aarey meri biwi ko kuch pata nahi chalega hamere baare mai toh kal milte hai cafe coffee day me chaar bhaje." he kept the phone.

(my wife won't know anything about us.we'll meet tomorrow at cafe coffee day 4'O Clock)

He saw Ishita back she asked "who?"

He told "ishita voh main...ishita voh main bas...Client ke saath baat kar raha tha.Mr.Chopra " (Ishita I was just talking to Mr.chopra)

She faked a smile and went outside.
"Kaon thi yeh.Raman kis ko sweet heart keh rahe the.mujhe pata lagana hi hoga.Kal cafe coffee day chaar baje"
(who was this? Whom was Raman telling sweetheart?I'll have to find out.)

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Precap : Ishita sees Raman-sweetheart together in cafe.

That's it.Part 1 is up. Comment please. Criticism and appreciation both are welcome.
I know it's short but please bear me.Next one will be longer promise.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres...very interesting yaar... lovely start//.continue soon
Edited by shalz_123 - 10 years ago
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Wow wonderful... Nice start..
I can't wait.. Plz update next part soon..
That raman-sweetheart phone was awesome.. Wht an acting Raman..
Eagerly waiting..

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nice start...
really nice to read ur update
hope u continue soon
thanks for the PM
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awsomeee hai yaaar...
or actualy yehi ishita ka challenge hga ;)

update soon
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RESERVED!!!
😆😆😆

^^Was that large enough???😆 Just read the first part... Much fun ahead😆

I've been a fan of BB bachpan sey, Par that title song trailer made me scrunch my nose. But, you say you love it... So, will give it a watch!😃

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Awesome
Loved it
Gyess Raman has done that call purposely
Now wiling to see if Ishita will fulfill his punishment
Waiting
Cont. soon
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Thanks 😆
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Originally posted by: shalz_123

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unres...very interesting yaar... lovely start//.continue soon

Aww...a comment from you.
Thanks. It means a lot

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