FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 95

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and superb amezng continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: beckysharp


Vee, Awesome update !

As the girls said, I couldn't help butgiggle in the midst of the most sentimental update ! Dr. Bhavna and Ann !
BTW, did Ann take permission from permanent custodians of Puttar to pat him on the back and comfort him? Both the joint custodians are not only miffed they are willing to sue !
@godschild, The sexy svelte Ann does not know who she is dealing with... she has offended the most possessive of all custodians of Puttar by patting him on the back and trying to comfort him ... she does not realize the consequences of the action, that are coming her way !


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The most possessive CUSTODIAN...I dint know someone has puttars custody here 😆 😆
I would like to fight as well then 😉 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -godschild-


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The most possessive CUSTODIAN...I dint know someone has puttars custody here 😆 😆
I would like to fight as well then 😉 😆


Well there's a huge queue already for that n a massive custody tussle going on, believe you me ! So you are way back in the queue !🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: beckysharp



Well there's a huge queue already for that n a massive custody tussle going on, believe you me ! So you are way back in the queue !🤣


ohhh 😆
well in my head he's biwis n if she doesnt want him then hes all mine already 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing👏👏👏 I really do believe that your a most gifted writer coz I just read the whole story at once. It wasn't a bit boring so full suspense and your writing skills is proved well coz I felt that I'm living with characters. It's so awesome. 😊😊😊 Hope you would update soon . Waiting for the next one😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Veee..Soorrryyy for the late reply.. I was busy with my acca exams, now free!
Awesumm updateee as alwaysss, but I hated that doc and nurse who just gave him 2 minutes to see his wife! Unfair! huhuh!

Beautifully written Raman's emotions... Cont soon... Looking forward for the next updatee! :D <3
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Veeann


...transfixed. She had never seen such terror on anyone's face before. She stepped toward him instinctively, forgetting her dislike for him, forgetting what he was. All that she knew was that this man before her was hurting, anxious, terrified ... and that his fear was born out of love.


"Yes, jeeju" Mihika did not realise the term that slipped out of her mouth. She put her hand over her mouth the next minute, as realisation hit her, but then, the look on his face tore down her defences. "Yes jeeju" she repeated.



The above 2 paragraphs are so powerful writing for me in this entire chapter. You brought out the gripping fear and all consuming love in Raman from a third person perspective so beautifully...




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shadeslayer

Awesome update!!!! I guess the B parivar were the nly ones who were ROTFLng after reading such an emotional update.🤣

On a serious note, loved the moments shown, Mihika is also team ishra and ass-oak is dead ass😆. Looking forward to the next update.

P.S.- My hug is pending🤣😆


Kiss kiss Ko hug karega bechaara???? 🤣 But yes, you get a hug, just let me find you a role 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

I promised today, didn't I?? But I got busy responding to dubbus ludicrous comments and I haven't finished writing. Will do it tommorow. Sowwy. Blame Dubbu. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower



The above 2 paragraphs are so powerful writing for me in this entire chapter. You brought out the gripping fear and all consuming love in Raman from a third person perspective so beautifully...





Thanks mate 😃

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