FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 93

Originally posted by: fugitives123

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Awesome update Vee..I loved the way the entire scene played out in my mind. I could imagine and feel puttar's pain and anxiety.So wonderfully described vee...I so badly wanted to comfort him...I'm really glad that the tall and shapely nurse ann was there to comfort him. She seems to have a calming effect on him. 😆

In the next update I'm expecting puttar to beat the crap out of Asshok 😡

And hopefully biwi will be awake smiling at puttar. Puttar should patao the nurse to get some time alone with biwi.😉

Originally posted by: sky-if

Dr Bhavna with an American accent?! and nurse Ann!😆 First guruji and now these two - I love the side characters in your story as much as the main ones.

Mihika's realization and Raman's 'amma' were beautiful.. I hope biwi wakes up in the next update and its not all about Ashok's pitayi although I do look forward to that too:)

Originally posted by: GloryBeckons

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! read all the parts in one ago the last night...just beautiful ...This is the best ever ff ever on IshRa i have ever read, and also one more FF "A contract of Love" is 2nd on my list ...Before this that was first. Bot are unique in their way... and am glad i read this one... Pls update soon and reveal IshRa marriage to everyone and looks like this kidnapping scenario may just help them ... Bala and now mihika too seems Raman's way and now only Mrs. Iyer and Vandu needs to be convinced as the talks of Mr Bhalla and Mr. Iyer suggest that they may talk for their marriage. Hope ishRa see their grand wedding and enjoy the rasams and all.

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

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doc and Ann...nice combo to look after biwi...😉🤣

chor ke haath chaavi deh diya toh koyi gal nahi...huh?

anyways I love the way Mihika managed to get Dr Bhavana and Ann to get some lone time for putthar with biwi...

Raman's emotional trauma was so beautifully written V...awesome and amma's reaction was natural and Raman tackling her just for a glimpse of Ishita talks volumes about Raman's love!

cont soon!

Originally posted by: rutu83

awesome update

i love the way you portray raman's emotions. don't get me wrong you're great with ishita's as well but for some reason raman's are amazing. beautifully portrayed. i could see kp, mihika and dt here 👏

Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary

LOVED THE UPDATE...I THOUGHT ISHITA HAD NORMAL FALLL BUT NOW IT LOOKS SERIOUS TO ME😭😭😭... HOPE SHE IS FINE AND ASKS FOR RUHI AND RAMAN WHEN GETS UP...AB RAVAN KUMAR WILL RUIN ASHOK KHANNA KA GANNA BANAYEGA😆

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Okkk ... Loud gasp. In office. And then re-read to make sure. Dr. Bhavs & Ann 😆 ... I call unfair Vee, where are Vids & I. Bas.

The hospital scene was beautiful. I could feel the raw emotions of RKB and his plight of not being able to hold the woman who he loves.

Vee ... this is probably the only FF in YHM forum where I have diligently written comments for every update on both threads (ok, missed a couple of times but you know why ). Every time I read an update I realize anew why ... coz you write every emotion so beautifully that we can almost touch it.

Ok ... enough of your tareef Vee. Let's get to RKB punching the daylights out of Ashok.

PS -- I loved how one look at Puttar's face & Mihika got converted to Ishra-ism. Lol its almost like a religion 😆