FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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fugitives123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#891

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Yay i'm the first to comment😃

Awesome update Vee..I loved the way the entire scene played out in my mind. I could imagine and feel puttar's pain and anxiety.So wonderfully described vee...I so badly wanted to comfort him...I'm really glad that the tall and shapely nurse ann was there to comfort him. She seems to have a calming effect on him. 😆

In the next update I'm expecting puttar to beat the crap out of Asshok 😡

And hopefully biwi will be awake smiling at puttar. Puttar should patao the nurse to get some time alone with biwi.😉

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#892

OMG 🤣🤣.. Shapely nurse and the doctor both of them are so mean. They give like 2 min for puttar and biwi. Bad bad people 😈🤣🤣..

The tadap when puttar wanted to meet biwi and make sure she was fine more than anything was so beautifully penned. Loved the emotions and you do it every time. Mihika ko pataliya in one shot and she now goes all Jeeju. Puttar effect I tell you, works like a charm anywhere. Can't wait for Ashokwa's pitayi 😉😆. That's going to be fun. Before all that get puttar biwi hug and all these side actors can wait 😛. Loved it as always 😳

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Sushma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Amazing update

but so chotu.. long karo na please...

Please update soon

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monalisa123

@monalisa123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#894

My routine every time I see an update from Vee on this

Scream- check

Dinner plate down-check

Tv off- check

Bedroom door shut: check

Lights off-check

Sit on the bed- check

Might sound crazy but can't help it. I love this story that much

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Deep

@rk654

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Posted: 10 years ago

#895

superb update vee but very chhotu 1 do big update like before👍🏼

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cloudy24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Ashok khanna ll be a dead meat now😆😃 wow update di😊

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Sorry, it's a small update but my mojo is lost and I have to go see Dil Dhadakne Do. Longer update this week, by Thursday. 😃

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Emotional update vee;-(;-(;-(
mihika understand the situation of raman and his tormoil.;-(
she helped her jiju..realisation struck her what she called now:-)

Amma is right in her place.she love her daughter...like raman loves ruhi.
Raman proctect ruhi at any cost in evil eyes...
amma will think same as raman..:-)

mihika smooty handle the situation ..love her today...SAALI KO KUCH AKHAL AAGAYA:-P:-P:-P
i love the way raman looks ishita:-)