FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 81

Short but good update !!

I hope poor Ruhi is ok. And ISHITA passed out. I hope the snatchers weren't able to take ruhi. Raman needs to come back asap. 😡

Yaar Vee, hamare plane ne to nosedive kiya with this update. Looks like not too many updates left before u end this story.😭

Yaar, hum to abhi sad sad ho Gaye😭

Oh, forgot to mention: thanks for the update Vee. Amazing as always. I wish u never stop writing.

i'm so hoping for romi and mr. bhalla to become hulk or something 😳

continue soon

frst of all...i hope u remember me😳😳

yaa...its been so long since i hav been here...but i am so glad that i am back and read this ff

okk...it was long one phew...but ur wrtng payed for the time...just brilliant work dii👏👏simply awesum

i am in luv with this ff

and mind u this gonna be one long comment

read it wen u have free time

Begining the story...in the newzealand...i have never been to any such place...but the way u depict the background the surroundings its just so beautiful that one can never help but imagine that wonderful world...and ofcourse...that oing in heart arises...to be to that place once in life😳😳

okk...coming to the story...in the chilly cold snowy land...away from their homes...watever they shared...him saving her...taking care of her...she feeling good about him...he took care of her whole night and next night she did the same...the feelings they shared...their past life...the vulnerabilities everything...just perfect.

as they grew closer...aware of each other and the kiss...so beautifully written...i never wanted them to come out of that world sachii...so apt it was...but poor man...couldnt understand his feelings...though ishita knew wat she felt...that was gud.. atleast one sane mind...but again...words do hurt...ofcourse they do...and smtyms so much that we do something regretful in anger or perhaps...the thought we have lost everything makes us do..something which we realise later shiuld not have been done...just like Ishita did.. a peomise to her appa...to marry a boy of his choice...there she promised and there our puttar's bulb glowed...Nd he went to the extent of possessing her at any cost...amazing concept dii...hatts off to your imagination...the way you write...one of the best proposals ever. i just loved that.

there started the secret dating of our iyyer girl and punjabi puttar☺️along with abhi being kabab mein haddi😔and ruhi custody case bhi opened...so much for raman...but he has his strength now naa...ishita with him...romance raomance romance...dii...u r the one of best ever romantic writers on the forum no doubt and i salute u for that⭐️👏

the planning and all continued...secret marriage it seems...i loved the way you expressed a girl's feelings marrying without her parents letting know...so natural it was. And even i love bala, mihir, neel n rinki...the real cupis. Meanwhile how can I miss...the puttar's great deed...of letting her go...after so much...finally the wedding...that too pure dramatic😆😆but ishra together...

their meetings before their final honeymoon..so lovely and finally...after lots of wonderful surprises...puttar and biwi united...and the way you hav written it...i m repeating...u r the best dii...brilliant work

their missing each other part when he went to mumbai and that one scene in the court of ruman kissing ishita...that stole my heart away...shagun and her failed attempts😆😆and ashok oldie fatty🤣so he took back the case...good decision khanna...though wat else can be expected from him except planning a foolish plan which surely gonna end in a big failure soon. Ofcourse i love ishima n ruhi trust...looking forward to c how he lands up himself in trouble again...i so want that dialog...mujhe raman se darr lagta hai by ashok...pls pls pls...it will be fun🤣🤣

ok ok...meanwhile..watever happened at the custody party...ishita and raghav pe puttar ki possessiveness...even then he didnt loose his control...good job man...though he couldnt watch her also..mand she ran behind...ofcourse she had too...that romance and quick love making...hot hot hot☺️☺️

so mihika knws now...good for her...though i now wish ki she helps ishita instead of frowning at her anymore.

I so loved that phone conversation...those sweet nothings...he said to her...and with shyness, nervousness and love she replied...again so beautiful

is hecoming back and they finally being the family with the end of this ruhi drama? Looking forward now

Wat next? Eagerly waiting

cont soon dii...and keep the pms coming

thnkew for the pms

superb ff

one of my ever favourite on IF

brilliant👏