FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 76

Beautiful update Vee glad Ishu had talk to Abhi about she love Raman and now he out of her life only have to deal with their Parents now.Ashok had plan to kidnap Ruhi I guess it will fail either Ishu or Raman will save her.The telephone convo is very sexy and how he made her more desire in him and miss him even Raman also yearning to talk and touch her too. I can imagine their passion is so intense don't know what will happen when they get back together. Thank you for the update they still have many thing wait for them in next update. Hope everything will be alright soon.Have a wonderful week ahead dear.🤗🤗

Amazing update

shit i hate this ashok so so so much!!!!

Hey Vee...maine aap ki story padhi...par yeh meri 1st comment hai aap ke thread par...
Very great Love Story of IshRa ...I ever Read...
Fabulous Work...👏 & yeh 2nd thread...Chori Chori...Chupke Chupke ...to muje bahot achcha laga...

Yeh Mihika ko vilian bana ke kyo rakha hai...😕

Muje laga tha ki yej Aahok Raman ki absence me IshRa ki shaadi ki sachchai sab ko bata dega...par yeh to humari Ruh baby ko kidnape karne wala hai.....

I hate this Ashok...😡

I love your writting...pls update as soon as possible...kyonki jyada wait nahi hota...& Haa CVs ki tarha...IahRa ko separate karne ki koshish mat karna...please...

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan

Vee the update was beautiful. I like the way you shooed Abhi from the picture and emotional atyachar of Ishu over Mihika to keep her all shut was just the best. To get he shut Ishu agreed to all that Mihikia said about Raman was just 😳. How much she loves him 😳...

Ashokwa and his dumb plans.. Will soon go down the drain 😈 and I will party that day. Shaggy , I have no comments. But the best part was Phone romance and the how much you miss me ?? How much you want me ?? Eeekkksss and It was so blushy ☺️ ☺️.. Why can't Amma let her talk freely at least. Their conversation was too hotwa and here's the scene for you. Not the balcony but yes adjust with this 😳

Originally posted by: fugitives123

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Awesome update Vee!!❤️

She ached for him and he ached for her...and I ache for them to be together soon!!

Loved the narration. I liked how you managed to include so much in this update. Ishita-Mihika convo, Ishita-Abhi convo, Ashok's plan, Ishita-Raman convo(❤️).

Phone moon wala romance was tops!

I loved imagining him loosen his tie as he walked to his terrace to see the moon with her. And that "Where will you kiss me" and "What else will you do to me?" was simply

Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful update Vee glad Ishu had talk to Abhi about she love Raman and now he out of her life only have to deal with their Parents now.Ashok had plan to kidnap Ruhi I guess it will fail either Ishu or Raman will save her.The telephone convo is very sexy and how he made her more desire in him and miss him even Raman also yearning to talk and touch her too. I can imagine their passion is so intense don't know what will happen when they get back together. Thank you for the update they still have many thing wait for them in next update. Hope everything will be alright soon.Have a wonderful week ahead dear.🤗🤗

Originally posted by: prayosha

Hey Vee...maine aap ki story padhi...par yeh meri 1st comment hai...
Very great Love Story of IshRa ...I ever Read...
Fabulous Work...👏

Yeh Mihika ko vilian bana ke kyo rakha hai...😕

I love your writting...pls update soon...& Haa CVs ki taraha...IahRa ko separate karne ki koshish mat karna...please...

Thanx for the update...

Awesum awesome update! Loved it! Raman n ishita sweet naughty talks over pphone ws tooo adorable...

Finally Abhi chpt closed forever!

Hope khanna doesn't harm ruhi or ishita... yuckk! Hope his plan fails miserably. Raman jaldi aao...

Cont soon.. its getting evn interesting.