FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 73

Originally posted by: beckysharp

Hiya Vee, wow what an update ! Thank god mihir stopped mihikafrom bursting into the bhalla apartment !

This was me, after reading the update !

This is me, the biggest fangirl of your writing !

Originally posted by: SA1234

Wow!! You killed it.

Watched yesterday's epi now and then got to read this. I am so dead!!

Originally posted by: .TIA.

Oo Myy God !! Vee this was awsome. 👏 👏

Ufff I'm still fanning myself.🤣

Thank god for Mihir man, this Mihika sometimes needs a smack on the head 😆 😆

Puttar n Biwi

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan

Sheeshhh ... !!! What have you done here and i am fanning myself big time.. Blush wala update ☺️... Hadd hai Vee ☺️ ☺️, I had promised myself to match the scenes from the show and this hawtness cannot be matched. Abh mein kya karun .. But puttar is possessive and we know that.. Remember the Pin romance, when he said dusri ungli mein bhi chubadun when she suck his fingers.

This is too hot for that but that's all I can match with ☺️ and the other moment he was jealous during the anniversary surprise when he said kambhakt phoolon ki kismat ko tho dekho but that was more on the passionate side. But after reading this I would really wanna see a possessive puttar unleashing his love on Biwi ☺️ ❤️.. You're a marvel Vee. Every update is super brilliant. Thanks for this one 🤗

Have read your story in one go.. Its such an amazingly portrayed story and you have superbly handled the emotions of be it Raman Ishita or Ruhi..

beautiful update continue soon. And thnks for posting this.

Vee last part is burning this part was blasting full with passion and desire this Ishra both too hot to handle when they are together. I think this time Ishu has to handle all situation during Raman not here atleast Mihika know all the truth don't know she will help them or not. But I am sure Ishu will convince her and help them. Will wait for next update.thank you for next to next update dear.Have a great start for new week.👏👏

Congratulations Vee for crossing 100 pages!!!🥳

Originally posted by: avni_19

Hayeee! Whattt an updateee! A beautiful sensual love of ishra with one of my fav song... blissful at the moment

Tooo awesum and amazing! I love the fact their love is so strong and pure. Perfect. Thank God Mihir spelt the beans to Mihika...

Looking forward for the next update! Ishu misses Raman n vice versa! Hayee! <3

Thanks Avni. I need to end this soon because I dont want to get into another thread, so I may have to cut down the missing each other and speed up the reveal 😆

Originally posted by: -Gan-

Vee I'm sorry that I sound repetitive, what an awesome update with brilliant use of a beautiful song. I'm loving how realistic your leads are.. Possessiveness and intense physical attraction are normal attributes of anyone as much as in love as these two are and them being forced to hide their marital status and living apart add up to their actions more. so Mihika knows now.. Hopefully she'll help ishita now..

Can't wait for the next update... Your story just is an amazing read .

Thanks Gan - i so want to see an intense physical attraction on the show, but we just get BKT, so I am dreaming it up and writing it here. 😆 😆