Originally posted by: umeirah02
Naa hi mujhe update boring laga naa hi stretched! & sorry ki kya baat hai... we can't forget that you have a life outside the forum...!! Coming onto the update... once again I'm at a lack of words... Trust me your updates are so refreshing; I just can't seem to have enough. Truly, I love the characterization and the purity of the relationships between each and every family member... Waise kya yeh wali Shagun real life se inspired hai? I loved how Mummyji didn't give into Shagun's.. so to say.. demands! Also the tact with which Ishu handles Shagun is something I love!!!
Ahhh... how can I forget that opening scene between Papaji & Raman... Your updates are magical Pankhuri Di... They always manage to bring a smile to my lips. Awww I really found that moment very cute when Mummyji said that she doesn't want any negativity between herself & Ishu!!! & Pari is gorgeous... I love her ๐ณ
& now coming on to the crux of the entire update; there wasn't a single moment which felt boring or unnecessarily long. I believe that's also because you write this story with so much love and adoration that it automatically begins to reflect. You know when Ishu said to Raman that she wants to go on a holiday I found out instantly ke yahi reason hai.. To say the least this update was beautiful... I could FEEL each & every emotion. Moreover, I could literally imagine IshRa, no joke!!!! Plus, jis poetic andaz se Ishu broke this wonderful news stole my heart away... Awww Raman was damn cute when he said "tum Papa mein Mummy" ... brilliantly done cos I felt every ounce of the emotions come out!!!! Great job ๐ณ
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