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Posted: 10 years ago
such a long wait :( :(
but truly worth the wait :) ;)
u know the Raman in ur story is really superb as in he seems so unreal koi itna acha kaise ho sakta hai
needless to mention AWESOME update
n Congo on half century 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maanvir

Please read the note above

Part 50

"Sach hai ke dil to dukha hai
Humne magar socha hai
Dil ko hai gham kyun
Ankh hai nam kyun
Hona hi tha jo hua hai

Us bath ko jane hi do
Jiska nishan Kal ho naa ho"


Did he just say that?


His eyes glistened with tears,
My eyes turned moist too,
Raman wiped a tear at the corner of his eye!


"Sab kismat ka khel hai. Is par hamara koi bas nahi hai" he said smiling weakly
"This is a play of destiny. And no one has control over it" he said smiling weakly.

Akka often used to say God is the best Planner!

Today I realised what she meant.

My life may not be going the way I planned it!

But its definitely going the way God planned it!

And God is the best Planner after all!

Who else but He would know what is best for His creations!


"Aur jo hotha hai achhe keliye hotha hai" I added.
"And whatever happened, it happened for our good" I added.


"Hmmm...I hope so. Anyways ab mujhe chalna chahiye" he said.
" humm... I hope so. Anyways now I should leave" he said.


"Arrey aise kaise? Sham tak ruk jao. Shadi attend karke chale jana" Raman invited him for the wedding
" how come? Wait till evening. Attend our marriage then leave" Raman invited him for the wedding.


"Sorry boss! Mujhse nahi ho payega. Don't get me wrong please. Mera dil tumhare jitna bada nahi hai Raman ke mai apne pyar ko kisi aur ka hote hua dekhoon. Sham tak kahin mera irada badal gaya aur mai villain ban gaya to phir museebat ho jayegi. Ab tak mai is kahani me Main Lead to nahi par ek positive character play karta aya hun, jate jate khud ko negative nahi banana chahta. So it's better I leave" he explained
" Sorry boss! I can't do this. Don't get me wrong please. My heart is not as big as yours that I can stand and see my love is going to be someone else's. If I changed my mind till evening and I bacome villain then you will be in trouble. Till now I am not the main lead in this story but still I remain a positive character, I don't want myself to be a negative at the end. So it's better I leave" he explained.

"I understand. It's alright" Raman hugged him


"Thanks buddy" he said returning the hug


I smiled at them

I have seen people fight for love

I have heard friends becoming foes for love

But here I was a witness to the friendship of two people who could have easily turned foes

I guess it's all because of Raman's goodness

Why am I giving the entire credit to Raman? You may wonder

I don't deny that Viren is a nice person but if Raman had not sacrificed initially, then this bonding would not be possible

Viren himself admitted that his heart is not as big as Raman

So basically it's Raman who is responsible for this scene that is unfolding in front of me


"Time to say good bye buddy" Viren said breaking the hug


"Yeah...Keep in touch" Raman said giving a handshake


"Hmmm...I won't promise...pehle khud ko achhi tarah samjha lunga ke Anamika ab hamesha keliye chali gayi hai... mai bewajah tum logon keliye pareshani nahi banna chahta"
" humm... I won't promise... First I have to accept the fact that Anamika is no more in my life... I don't want to be a problem between you guys".

He turned towards me then

"Ishita...hamara sath sirf Char Kadam ka tha...Kash maine usi din tumhara hath sari umar keliye mangliya hotha to shayad aaj kuch aur hi majra hotha...anyways as you said jo hotha hai achhe keliye hotha hai. Is yaqeen ko sath lekar ja raha hun. Hamesha khush raho" he said softly
"Ishita... We were together for only "Char Kadam" ... I wish I would have asked our togetherness for whole life that day , then today would be a different scenario ... Anyways as you said, whatever happened always happened for our good. I am going with this believe of yours. Always be happy" he said softly.


I simply nodded


"Aur haan ek bath tum bhi yad rakhna"
" and yes one this always keep it in your mind"

I looked at him quizzically


"Sare Ajnabi bure nahi hothe" he smirked
" all Strangers are not bad" he smirked


I chuckled and showed a thumbs up


"Bye" he waved


"Bye" I waved too


"Tumhe kahin drop kar dun?" Raman asked
" Should I drop you somewhere?" Raman asked.


"No I will manage. Ab aage ka safar mujhe khud hi thay karna hai ek nayi manzil ki taraf. Tumhari manzil tumhara intezar kar rahi hai" Viren said to Raman pointing towards me
"No I will manage. Now onwards I have to manage by myself towards my destiny. Your destiny is waiting for you" Viren said to Raman pointing towards me.


Waving a last good bye Viren started his journey towards an unknown destination


An awkward silence prevailed between me and Raman


I had my eyes on my toes that were drawing imaginary patterns on the floor


A lot had happened in this one night


Acceptance, Sacrifice, Confrontation etc etc


All the events of the night replayed in my mind in few minutes of silence which was broken by Raman


"Abhi tak naraz ho?" he asked
"Are you still angry?" He asked


That reminded me of the confrontation

I was still miffed so I did not respond


"Ishita" he called out


But I chose to keep quiet


"Mere taraf dekhogi bhi nahi"
" you don't want to look at me either"


I nodded my head in negative still keeping it bent


"Bath bhi nahi karogi"
" you don't want to talk either"

I did an action replay


"Pakka?"
" sure?"

I nodded in affirmative


"To mai jaaun?"
" so, should I leave?"

I stood still


"Mai jaaun?" he repeated
" should I leave?" He repeated


I was angry but I did not want him to leave

Yet I did not want him to know that I want him to stay


"Mai ja raha hun"
" I am going"


I slowly checked if he is leaving
When I found him still standing in the place I knew he would not leave



"Mai sach me jaraha hun"
" I am really leaving"

I heard tapping of foot
I thought he would really leave and instantly my head shot up only to find him standing at the same place and tapping his foot


He had a lop-sided smile on his face

I glared at him

With a sheepish grin he stepped ahead and said "Actually mai ja hi raha tha. Par mujhe yad aya ke mujhe tumse tumhare beauty salon ka number lena tha. Isliye ruk gaya?"
With a sheepish grin he stepped ahead and said " actually I was going but just then I realized I need to ask you beauty salon's number. That's why I stopped".

I gave him a puzzled look meaning what will you do with it?


"Mujhe bhi sham keliye make-up karwana tha" he said with a serious face
" I also need makeup for the evening" he said with a serious face.


I gave him Are you out of your mind look


"Nahi maine aaj tak kabh make-up nahi ki hai. Par aaj make-up ki zaroorat hai. Wo kya hai na ek gaal mera laal hogaya hai. Isi halath me agar Shadi me chala gaya to log to poochenge na ke kisne chanta maara. It would be embarassing right?" he asked with a tongue in cheek
" No , till today I never applied makeup. But today I need it. Actually one of my cheek is red. If in this condition I'll go outside , people will ask who slap me. It would be embarrassing right? He asked with a tongue in cheek.


I gave him a I am not sorry It was your mistake look


"Aise hi chala jaun? Pakka? Phir to mujhe logon ko batana padega ke bholi bhali Ishita Iyer ke chehre ke peeche ek Jhansi ki Rani hai"
" should I go like this? Sure? Then I have to tell everyone that behind this innocent face their is a Jhansi ki Rani".

"Aapne mujhe Jhansi ki Rani bulaya? How dare you? Theek hai...agar mai Jhansi ki Rani to aap Ravan Kumar. Mujhe kidnap karke Viren ke hawale jo karnewale the. Isliye aap Ravan Kumar. Samjhe na" I accused him
" you call me Jhansi ki Rani? How dare you? Ok them... If I am Jhansi ki Rani then you are Raavan Kumar. You were kidnapping me and handing over to Viren. That's why you are Raavan Kumar. Understood... " I accused him.


"Samajh gaya" he nodded obediently "Kam se kam isi bahane tumne bath to ki. Mera plan kamyab raha" he winked
" understood" he nodded obediently " atleast because of that you talked to me. My plan works" he winked.


I opened my mouth and closed it like a fish

I had fallen into his trap


"Aise ladte hue you look cute"
" you look cute while fighting like this."


"Pataane ki koshish kar rahe ho?"
" are you trying to impress me?"


"Wo koshish to ek saal se jari hai. Kash mai isme kamyab ho patha" he commented dramatically
" that I am trying from an year . I wish I could have succeeded." He commented dramatically.


"Apko na business chod ke poori tarah writing pe concentrate karna chahiye. Movies ke script likhna shuru kardo. Bahut kuch hasil karloge"
" you should leave business and in full concentration you should start writing. You should start writing movie scripts. You can earn a lot".


"Aaj jo maine hasil ki hai uske badd mujhe kisi aur cheez ki chahat nahi hai"
" I don't need anything after what I earn today ".


"Kya matlab?"
"Means?"

"Aaj maine us ladki ko hasil kiya hai jisko dekhte hi mujhe pyar hogaya tha. My love is back"
" today I earn The girl who is my Love at first sight. My love is back".


I could not stop a blush rising on my cheek and a wide smile spreading on my face


Raman's POV


The bright rays of sun started to appear on the dark sky when she smiled

It appeared as if the sun was waiting for her to spread that smile to re-appear on the sky

I felt content


"Lo subah hogayi. Kya hum is nayi subah me hamari zindagi ke nayi kahani ki nayi shuruat karein?"
" this is a new morning. Should we start our new life with this new morning?".

She nodded agreeing


I was more than happy


"To phir shuru se shuru karte hain.
Hi I am Raman Kumar Bhalla" I said extending a hand towards her
" then we should. Start from start. Hi I am Raman Kumar Bhalla" I said extending my hand towards her.


She smiled amused and shook my hand


"Hi I am Ishita Raman Bhalla"


Did she just say that!?


-----------------------------to be continued-----------------------


This is not the end...

Ab shuru hoti hai ek nayi kahani...

IshRa ki kahani...

Aapke reviews ke intezar me...




Nice update ... English translation in blue...
Edited by smilydear - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful updt .awww ishita raman bhalla waiting fr next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww!!!!! such a lovely part
Loved it
Awww!!!! Ishita raman bhalla 😳😳
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayayau! Finally ishita raman became ishra! Looking forward for their naye shuruwat!
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Posted: 10 years ago
congratzzz and nyc update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update continue soon
wating early for ishra new story
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Posted: 10 years ago
mindblowing , marvelous!! 😳😳
Chalo update mil hi gya akhir!! 😆😆
Continue soon 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
You don't find love, it finds you...
Hey Manny...🤗...
So sorry for late comment...reason toh aapko pata hi hai..
Anyways...wat an update yaar...Dil khush kar ditta...
Superb Superbb n Superbb... 👏 👏 👏
Hayeee...my IshRa... 😳 😳
My life may not be going the way I planned it!

But its definitely going the way God planned it!

And God is the best Planner after all!

Its soo true...God is definitely a perfect planner...therefore everything in our life happens for a reason...

Why am I giving the entire credit to Raman? You may wonder
No wonder Ishita...its obvious... Now all credit will obviously go to Raman...no reasons n no explanations reguired...its an ailment called LOVE...😆😆

Ajnabi/Viren is soo realistic yaar...I can relate to his every saying n I can feel his turmoil...its definitely not easy to let go ur love...the best part is that he doesn't make false promises of remaining in touch...
Thank god aap par Ekta mata ka asar nahi hua n aapne Ajnabi ko negative character nahi banaya...iske liye aapka bahot bahot dhanyawad...

Rest of the IshRa convo n gestures were like WoWww...Ravan Kumar n Jhansi ki Rani...
Real IshRa...❤️
Ishita is such an innocent soul...love this naughty Raman even more...😉

And and and the BESTEST PART...
"Hi I am Ishita Raman Bhalla"
I was like...Did she just say that????😲
Oh yesss...MRS. ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA...
U deserve a tyt wala hug for this particular line...🤗

So its definitely not an end...*happy dance*

I guess I can sum up this half century. 50th update by this quote from One Tree Hill...
You ever heard the expression The best things in live are free.' Well that expression is true.' Every once in a while, people step up they rise above themselves sometimes they surprise you and sometimes they fall short. Life is funny sometimes. It can push pretty hard but if you look close enough, you can find hope in the words of children, in the bars of the song and in the eyes of someone you love. And if you're lucky, if you're the luckiest person on this entire planet, the person you love decides to love you back.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

You don't find love, it finds you...
Hey Manny...🤗...
So sorry for late comment...reason toh aapko pata hi hai..
Anyways...wat an update yaar...Dil khush kar ditta...
Superb Superbb n Superbb... 👏 👏 👏
Hayeee...my IshRa... 😳 😳
My life may not be going the way I planned it!

But its definitely going the way God planned it!

And God is the best Planner after all!

Its soo true...God is definitely a perfect planner...therefore everything in our life happens for a reason...

Why am I giving the entire credit to Raman? You may wonder
No wonder Ishita...its obvious... Now all credit will obviously go to Raman...no reasons n no explanations reguired...its an ailment called LOVE...😆😆

Ajnabi/Viren is soo realistic yaar...I can relate to his every saying n I can feel his turmoil...its definitely not easy to let go ur love...the best part is that he doesn't make false promises of remaining in touch...
Thank god aap par Ekta mata ka asar nahi hua n aapne Ajnabi ko negative character nahi banaya...iske liye aapka bahot bahot dhanyawad...

Rest of the IshRa convo n gestures were like WoWww...Ravan Kumar n Jhansi ki Rani...
Real IshRa...❤️
Ishita is such an innocent soul...love this naughty Raman even more...😉

And and and the BESTEST PART...
"Hi I am Ishita Raman Bhalla"
I was like...Did she just say that????😲
Oh yesss...MRS. ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA...
U deserve a tyt wala hug for this particular line...🤗

So its definitely not an end...*happy dance*

I guess I can sum up this half century. 50th update by this quote from One Tree Hill...
You ever heard the expression The best things in live are free.' Well that expression is true.' Every once in a while, people step up they rise above themselves sometimes they surprise you and sometimes they fall short. Life is funny sometimes. It can push pretty hard but if you look close enough, you can find hope in the words of children, in the bars of the song and in the eyes of someone you love. And if you're lucky, if you're the luckiest person on this entire planet, the person you love decides to love you back.



Awww...itna pyara comment...

love u Hersheys...this is y i miss u...

ur cmnts alwys bring a huge smile on my face...

U mk me feel special...

Aila...ye to sare LOVE ke symptoms...

OMG am I in love with u????😳

Did I just say that!?

PS: I am STRAIGHT & happily married to the live version of Raman of Char Kadam😳

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