#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1)

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Manny post update fast or else be ready for the consequences...
Dont be shocked if u find some crazy girls at strike outside ur house...😛
All The Best...

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

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Part 48

"Most painful pain is when you realise your love is no more yours"

(Author's Note: Copied from .Harshita. aka Hersheys comment on Part 46...Thnx fr the longgg lovely cmnt with heart touching quotes)

Did I just say that!?

Now it was my turn to be the statue.

It appeared Anamika had passed on her role to me now.

So like a silent spectator I took a back seat to watch the confrontation that was bound to happen.

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Ishita's POV

As he tried to pull out the ring that sat on my ring finger, in an instant my other hand landed on his cheek.

And to be frank, I am not a tad bit ashamed or guilty of doing that.

He deserved it. Didn't he?

He was definitely shocked and was probably trying to register what just happened.

His left hand rested on his reddened cheek and mouth hung open.

He blinked twice, thrice at the gap of few seconds not believing that I had actually slapped him.

For a brief moment I pitied him but then his words rang in my ears and actions flashed in front of my eyes, which made me even more furious.

I was not done yet.

The slap was just a trailer...Picture abhi baki hai...

I went ahead and grabbed his collar.

"How dare you?" I said shaking him furiously.

He was taken aback and almost fell but steadied himself just in time.

"Aap hote koun ho? Aap ne khud ko samajh kya rakha hai? Aapko lagta hai aap bhagwan ho jo sabke zindagiyon ka faisla khud karoge?"

"Ishi..."

"Chup...bilkul chup" I did not let him complete "Aap bilkul chup rahenge. Samajh gaye na aap. Ek dum chup" I warned waving a finger at him.

"Ab mai bolungi aur aap sunoge. Koshish bhi mat karna kuch kehne ki. Samjhe na aap" I made my stance clear and he slightly nodded amused at my actions.

"Apko kya laga? Aap writer ho to sabki zindagiyon ki kahaniyan aap khud likhoge?"

"Agar sare failse apko khud hi lene the to phir apni kitab ka ahkri panna khali kyun chod diya? Usko bhi khud hi bhar dethe. Ye kyun kaha ke ab ye faisla mere hath me hai ke mai chahun to is akhri panne par apki zindagi ka anth likhun ya phir ek nayi kahani ki shuruath. Jab ke aapne apni aur meri kahani ka anth khud hi likh diya tha"

A stream of tears flowed along with the ocean of my emotions.

"Mujhe nahi samajh atha ke aap sabith kya karna chahte hain. Khud ko mahan banana chahte hain ya phir meri nazron me khud ko itna girana chahte hain ke mai apko chod kar chali jaoon.

Par ek bar kaan khol kar sun lijiye Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla, aap chahe khud ko kitna bhi bura sabith kar do, mai apko itni asani se chod kar janewali nahi hun. Samjhe na aap?"

I yet again warned him by pointing my finger.

He had come out of his shock and was now smiling at me.

That smile on his face made me even more furious.

I realised it was my confession that I would not leave him at any cost what made him smile.

"Has kya rahe ho? Aapko chod kar nahi jaungi iska matlab ye nahi ke aap mahan ho ya phir aap mujhe pasand ho. I just hate you"

I had lost all my strength by letting out my anger, frustration and all emotions that had clouded my mind until now.

My knees felt weak and I collided into his chest holding his collar for support and kept mumbling "I hate you Raman"

"But I..." Raman had begun saying something when a voice from another direction was heard

"Tumne sahi kaha tha. Maine sach me bahut der kar di"

Did he just say that!?

-----------------------------------To be continued--------------------------

Ughh! This was more difficult than I thought...

I now admit that confrontation is not my cup of tea...

Nevertheless do tell me if u liked it or not...

PS: Is anybody volunteering for translations of hindi dialogues? I would be grateful if someone did that...

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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Samantha

@Divancraze

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

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Finally that moment has come..!!!!

THE CONFRONTATION

I loved Ishita's confession 😳

She will not leave him easily...

I'm starting to feel bad for Ajnabi now...

Edited by Divancraze - 10 years ago

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

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Most awaited part is finally up.

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Loved the confrontation.

ishita was so much Jhansi ki rani in this update.😆

Iss line me bahot dum tha - Par ek bar kaan khol kar sun lijiye Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla, aap chahe khud ko kitna bhi bura sabith kar do, mai apko itni asani se chod kar janewali nahi hun. Samjhe na aap?"

Feeling sad for ajnabi now 😔.

Continue soon dear

Ab hamare liye toh aap hi bhagwan ho,yeh sab kya ho raha hai jaan ne ke liye aapke updates zaroori hai.Aapki chaar kadam ki aakri panno ko aap hi ko bharna hai voh bhi jaldi

Can't wait for more

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

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So finally the much awaited confrontation... Before reviewing the update...let me say...Superbb Jo done by ypu dear...
U have very well managed to keep it Realistic which is very difficult task n much needed...
Comingg to the update...
Confrontation or Confession or Both??😉
"When a leaf falls who should be blamed? The wind that blows it away? The tree that lets it fall? Or the leaf itself that gets tired of holding on?
So who should be blamed for the situation in which three of them are? Ajnabi who is madly n truly in love with his Anamika and desires to be with her? Raman who falls in love at first sight with an unknown girl , with time his love only increases for her nd that too such an extent that he's ready to forego his love for the love of his happiness? Or Ishita who inspite of hating strangers falls in love with a guy about whom she knows nothing except his fake name...and when she decides to move on with her future...her past appears before her??...
I don't think anyone of them is at fault!!!...Its all pure Destiny...somethings are destined to be happen...
Meeting of Ishita n Viren...chaar kadams...telling their fake names Ajnabi n Anamika to each other...Raman falling for Anamika at the same time... Later Ishita-Raman alliance...Meeting of Raman with Ajnabi...
Everything was planned nd kisi ek ka dil toh tootna hi tha na...here its of Ajnabi/Viren...
But I gues this heart break wont be that difficult for him if he truly loves Ishita because...When u truly loves someone... All u want is happiness of ur love even if that is with someone else... He may have to find solace in the fact that his love has got her love...

Voh chahat hai meri...voh mohabbat hai meri...
Voh ibadat hai meri...voh saanson mein hai meri...
Toh kya hua jo voh amanat hai kisi aur ki...
Taqdir mein na sahi par voh dil ki har dhadkan mein hai meri...

I just love few dialogues...

"Apko kya laga? Aap writer ho to sabki zindagiyon ki kahaniyan aap khud likhoge?"
At this line, I felt like hugging Ishita...😳

He had come out of his shock and was now smiling at me.

That smile on his face made me even more furious.

I realised it was my confession that I would not leave him at any cost what made him smile.

"Has kya rahe ho? Aapko chod kar nahi jaungi iska matlab ye nahi ke aap mahan ho ya phir aap mujhe pasand ho. I just hate you"
I don't think any confession can be better than this...
OMG...Raman is such a cutie...his shock turned to smile...
That sense of belongingness n her right over HER Raman in her voice is something for which u deserve a tyt hug from me@Manny...😉
"Tumne sahi kaha tha. Maine sach me bahut der kar di"
Aww...i do symphathasize with u Dude but how dare u interrupt IshRa moment ???😡

LUV U MANNY...
UPDATE SOON...

Edited by .Harshita. - 10 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

I already love the incomplete update. It feels great when a scene comes across as you wanted it to be.

@Ajnabi we know you're too late but couldn't you hold the admission for 30 more seconds? You stole IshRa's moment!!! #NotDoneDude

Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire
I already love the incomplete update. It feels great when a scene comes across as you wanted it to be.

Phew...Sigh of relief...

Honest confession...I always look fwd to ur cmnts...Bt I am scared at the same time...😲

I literally send a silent prayer before reading your cmnt wishing it to be a positive one...

And when my prayer gets answered you will find me on cloud 9...

Thanks Roshnee...I am on cloud 9 now

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire
I already love the incomplete update. It feels great when a scene comes across as you wanted it to be.
@Ajnabi we know you're too late but couldn't you hold the admission for 30 more seconds? You stole IshRa's moment!!! #NotDoneDude

@bold: One more reason to hate him haan?😉