#2 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Shifted to new thread- Link on Pg 1) - Page 21

Mujhe toh lagta hai kisi ka nahi lagega 😛 all three are trying so ideally phones will be engaged hehe jokes apart I think raman will call aajnabi while aajnabi will call ishita and ishu will call raman and here is the perfect love triangle hehe beautiful update all three pov were beautifully written especially ishita 😉 I thought aaj ishu next chapter likhegi koi nahi jaldi likhegi but these three people who are trying to connect each other will again create nice twist which I m waiting for 😉

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Who called who? That's a pretty interesting question. Since this is an IshRa story so chances are that they'd end up together so Ishita calling Ajnabi is pointless. Similarly, since Ajnabi thought it was something he should've done ages ago, so he can't be thinking about calling Raman and Raman has only one option left in his redemption since he's given Ishita the manuscript.

So, I think Ishita called Raman, Raman called Ajnabi and Ajnabi called Ishita, unless they're calling someone outside of the trio of course!

Amazing as usual . Loved it. You know what we want..Ishra to stay connected and together and in love. Bcoz u promised that ishita will be with raman or else I will take this raman.On serious note since u are writing their destiny ...hope we will get we wanted. I felt bad for Ajnabi.
Since u bring lots of twist. I cant keep my expectations high but u are as usual is amazing and unpredictable.
Hope u update soon..
Thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: maanvir

Firstly glad to have u back...I was missing ur cmnts...Ur cmnts r lik movie review for me...u get the gyst of what is right and what is not...frm ur cmnts i can undoubtedly say that u are a very practical person and entertain no nonsense👏

Coming to the cmnt now, great analysis...now lets c if ur analysis and assumption is right or not😉

So many complements!!! Thank you!

I could totally be wrong in my analysis! Ajnabi is a huge Drama Queen (he really thought calling an almost stranger was an option!! He stopped since it was the night before his wedding!! WTH!!) so there's no telling who he might call and Ishita makes bad decisions all the times! Raman is very high on emotion right now and people make strange choices when influenced by emotion.

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

So many complements!!! Thank you!

I could totally be wrong in my analysis! Ajnabi is a huge Drama Queen (he really thought calling an almost stranger was an option!! He stopped since it was the night before his wedding!! WTH!!) so there's no telling who he might call and Ishita makes bad decisions all the times! Raman is very high on emotion right now and people make strange choices when influenced by emotion.

intresting update lets see with this call whose life changes ishu's,raman's or ajanabi's

Wow yaar you are awesome!

Originally posted by: maanvir

You seem to hate Ajnabi😆

Am I right?

I do!! 😆Just because he's plain stupid! His life would be so much easier if the guy used his brain! Raman and Ishita are both in this tough spot just because this guy never thought that someone else could've picked up the phone! He believed she forgot him yet he called her again after almost 11 months!! Hello! If she forgot you in a couple months, what are the chances that she'd remember you after 11 months? Point is, he's really stupid and he's created this huge mess!! Life is a mess without you acting stupid (take Raman for example) and Ajnabi was so lucky that he got everything served to him in a platter and he messed it up because of his stupidity- it just makes me mad.

But he makes a good character to read- in a good story, you always need someone to hate/dislike more than the others- Ajnabi does that for me.

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

I do!! 😆Just because he's plain stupid! His life would be so much easier if the guy used his brain! Raman and Ishita are both in this tough spot just because this guy never thought that someone else could've picked up the phone! He believed she forgot him yet he called her again after almost 11 months!! Hello! If she forgot you in a couple months, what are the chances that she'd remember you after 11 months? Point is, he's really stupid and he's created this huge mess!! Life is is mess without you acting stupid (take Raman for example) and Ajnabi was so lucky that he got everything served to him in a platter and he messed it up because of his stupidity- it just makes me mad.

But he makes a good character to read- in a good story, you always need someone to hate/dislike more than the others- Ajnabi does that for me.

Hmmm...I am quite impressed...
do u write stories too?
I would love to read them if u do...

And if you don't u must start writing...
I am sure you will be great

Getting more interesting,waiting for the next.