OS: Faasle aise bhi honge, yeh kabhi socha na tha - Page 4

Originally posted by: _DarkLady_

I loved the OS.😊

There was so much hustle bustle going on in the show, that I didn't get scope to explore where they're coming from, their point of view individually, not that the CVs thought to give it a heed to justify their actions, even impulsive ones, with their perceptions. If they had cared to acquaint us with their inner turmoils the essence of the character would have been restored. But, you did and did that impeccably. 👏

Very relevant piece... enjoyed it thoroughly.😃

Thank you very much 😳 I agree, with so much going on, the focus on the drama-quotient is masking any character-introspection.

Originally posted by: taara113

Sometimes i feel somethings can only be written and not enacted... I wld not want such a scene to play in the show(as if, if i wanted they wld 😆) bcz i feel somewhere they wil loose the subtleness of the emotions that i cld read...it was beautifully written specially the last bit...

Thanks 😳

I know what you mean 😛 this OS (and that's how I tend to write usually too) focuses more on the 'internal' workings of their minds & hearts. It wouldn't play well on a screen, because the dialogues aren't much. but like you said, even if we wanted something, it's not like they are queuing up to grant our wishes 😆

Originally posted by: Anum_says

brilliantly done...awsome..

Thank You 😊

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Very nicely written lucky


We will not see this on the show

Thanks Leo 😊

yes 😆

Originally posted by: RollingStones

This is Beautiful Lucky...

Never commented on your work...but I have always Loved ur writing ..

Brilliant you are...

Your Raman -Ishita Ramblings are just WOW...

You totally get the Character which our CV's used to once or may be they still but now blinded by TRP...

The Raman Morgue scene was soo Gut Wrenching , The 100 deaths that He experienced at that Time...sadly CV's never concentrated on that ..easily slided under Carpet...

Its soo Sad , They wasted such Potential Characters..

But thank Lord for ppl like you...I can still find my Raman-Ishita somewhere...

Hey thanks 😊 I am glad you have liked the earlier ones too. yes, the Ramblings are quite special to me 😳

I winced when I read about the morgue scene. It's OK to show it for drama, but I don't think its ok for them to sweep up such serious things under the rug. that scene deserves a follow-up. Irrespective of who's right and wrong, that one moment would have really caused a 100 deaths for anyone. let alone a man who has been called in to identify his wife and child

Originally posted by: --Megha--

Awesome post Lucky.

U r right, Ishra as a couple need to introspect their overall relationship dynamics n also be together in fighting the odds. 😳

I love the Ishra u have sketched- 11pmish, flawed yet real. They had their ups n downs but they always Understood the other. I guess I have this Ishra safely stored in some part of my brain where they exist and now whatever I see on screen is just a bad dream.

I loved the song u used, one of my favs. ❤️

Somehow Ur OS, the mental turmoil Ishra is going through reminded me of this song-

Manziloon Pe Aa Ke Lootate Hain Dilon Ke kaaravaan
Kashtiya Saahil Pe Aksar Doobati Hain Pyaar Ki

Manzile Apni Jagah Hain Raaste Apni Jagah
Jab Kadam Hi Saath Naa De To Musaafir Kyaa Kare
Yoon To Hai Humdard Bhi Aur Humsafar Bhi Hai Meraa
Badh Ke Koyi Haath Naa De Dil Bhalaa Fir Kyaa Kare
Manzile Apni Jagah Hai Raaste Apni Jagah

Doobne Waale Ko Tinke Kaa Sahaaraa Hi Bahot
Dil Bahal Jaaye Fakat Itnaa Ishaaraa Hi Bahot
Itne Par Bhi Aasmaan Waalaa Giraa De Bijaliyaan
Koi Batlaa De Zaraa Yeh Doobtaa phir Kyaa Kare
Manzile Apni Jagah Hain Raaste Apni Jagah

Pyaar Karnaa Jurm Hai To Jurm Hum Se Ho Gayaa
Qaabil-E-Maafi Huaa Karty Nahin Aise Gunaah
Sangdil Hai Ye Jahaa'n Aur Sangdil Meraa Sanam
Kyaa Kare Josh-E-Junoo'n Aur Hauslaa phir Kyaa Kare
Manzile'n Apni Jagah Hen Raasty Apni Jagah
Jab kadam Hi Saath Naa De To Musaafir Kyaa Kare
Yoon To Hai Humdard Bhi Aur Humsafar Bhi Hai Meraa
Badh Ke Koyi Haath Naa De Dil Bhalaa Fir Kyaa Kare,...

Thanks Megha 😳 This one is one of my favs too... Did I tell you ? I watched him live front row, singing this song... it was something else 😳

Yes, the IshRa in my mind are still the 'old' couple from the 11 PM slot. Its really not easy to imagine them to be so changed 😛

I love this song you have posted too 👍🏼

Originally posted by: maaloo

Awesome OS. Superb and simply beautiful.

I loved the ghazal that you used at the start and the Gibran quote that you used to end it..Amazing emotions conveyed.. and how i wish this would have played out.

Superb 👏

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

It was such an Amazing OS...
Gr88 work...
Superbb...very well written...
Bookmarked it...Its definitely among ones I would love to read again and again...

thanks. 😊

@Bold - thats really so kind of you 😳

awesome it was...i usually dont read IshRa stories...being still hung-up on Arnav-Khushi ff's...

Originally posted by: anjs

awesome it was...i usually dont read IshRa stories...being still hung-up on Arnav-Khushi ff's...

but read this only, cause its written by you...and must say i loved it...this is exactly what they need in the near future...

but must be my pre-conceived notion bt Ishita, she comes across as a little selfish even here...

Hey thanks 😳

I think the essence of this OS is the fact that they are both, to a certain extent, oblivious of the other person's pain, and I would even go on to say that they didn't consider each other in some key situations.
As a viewer, you and I may sympathise with either Raman or Ishita more than the other, agreed. But the fact remains that he hides things from her, and she went on to do things she thought were right without considering him. He thinks she left him, she thinks she had to run away because his mistakes left her no choice.

And at the end of the day, they don't even apologise to each other or even talk about the grief that was caused(in the show I mean).