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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: arunabhi

The one you wrote on Ishitha's POV 😳.. May be i am wrong ...

Happy vacation 😃

Are you talking about the letter? Dear Raman one? And I was supposed to write Dear Ishita, that one right?

Yaar vacation ke pehle mui exam bhi toh hai. 😕

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Are you talking about the letter? Dear Raman one? And I was supposed to write Dear Ishita, that one right?
Yaar vacation ke pehle mui exam bhi toh hai. 😕

Yes .. That's the one I am talking about ..

You will rock your exams Doc 😃

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Doc, you know how I feel about your writing... but couldn't bring myself to read this yet... and then we all got some potential great news thanks to Aani and suddenly i found my strength again!😉

So this... how beautiful , Doc. The song first off- gorgeous, thanks so much for the translation. The house- home analogy, the Rooh-soul analogy, the Raman- Ru , the Ishu without Ru... so many beautiful, delicate comparative points in a short piece- I am so impressed...👏

I don't really know that much about the Gurdwara traditions and I appreciate the little lesson included... In my experience there is nothing as peaceful as a temple/church/Gurdwara/Mosque/anyplace of worship... and you captured that so beautifully.

Thank you so much for this , so very well done.

Here's hoping for a more sensible YHM and an awesome exam result for you my dear!

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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kuls

@theshushreader

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

amazing n well written os..

depicted the pain very well

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Doc 🤗 ... loved this one. So well written ⭐️

Especially liked the weaving of their pain and memories throughout the story and the fact that they still supported each other during the tears, laughs, memories and the determination to get their child back.

Am just catching up on all the written works on the forum from now on :-). Not watching the episodes till they show some respite from all this melodrama involving little kids.

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: arunabhi

Yes .. That's the one I am talking about ..

You will rock your exams Doc 😃

Post my exam I will pen down Dear Ishita letter. 😃 Thanks Aru! I really hope I do well on the exam. *Fingers crossed* 😃

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Doc, you know how I feel about your writing... but couldn't bring myself to read this yet... and then we all got some potential great news thanks to Aani and suddenly i found my strength again!😉

So this... how beautiful , Doc. The song first off- gorgeous, thanks so much for the translation. The house- home analogy, the Rooh-soul analogy, the Raman- Ru , the Ishu without Ru... so many beautiful, delicate comparative points in a short piece- I am so impressed...👏

I don't really know that much about the Gurdwara traditions and I appreciate the little lesson included... In my experience there is nothing as peaceful as a temple/church/Gurdwara/Mosque/anyplace of worship... and you captured that so beautifully.

Thank you so much for this , so very well done.

Here's hoping for a more sensible YHM and an awesome exam result for you my dear!

Anu!!!! 🤗 Gurl you never have to explain yourself to me, I know we all have lives and real life commitments, hence I am so thankful that people take out the time to read and comment, it really is a priviledge to interact with everyone here and especially you. 😃

You praise me silly and make feel like I am some sort of a 'writer' when in reality I am just an emotional moron who likes to blabber. 😆

You know in all honesty I wrote this because I was feeling very restless and needed a place of zen, so closed my eyes to meditate and transport myself to the Golden temple and I am not religious to begin with but for some reason the Golden temple just soothes me and I felt that Ishita and Raman need that place of zen where the calm and serenity can envelope them for a little bit. I do not like talking religion on a pubic forum so I was very skeptical writing about it. 😕

Thank you as always for being awesome and making feel like a million bucks! And thank you for the wishes, I really do hope that do well in the exam because I really need to do well and put this exam behind me. 😊