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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: malaxmi
Well written OS. Thanks dear.

Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate it. 😃

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: afnu
Amazing and well expressed os😛.Thanks a ton for this os😳

Thank you very much for your kind words, this was very disjointed attempt but thank you for appreciating it nonetheless. 😊 Thanks for reading.

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Veeann
Res 😃

Edited. Doc, what an awesome surprise.

Just loved this little story. Love how you show Ishita and Raman having a relationship that is separate and distinct from Ruhi, yet at the same time tied up in every way with Ruhi. Love how she sees Ruhi in him and that he recognises that.

Love the positivity of this piece, how they want to fight together for Ruhi.

Thank you Doc.

Vee 🤗

I was afraid that this may come off as Raman and Ishita totally being dependent on Ruhi but I am glad that it didn't appear so to you. 😳 They are parents but they are also a couple and I didn't want to tilt the balance towards parenthood by itself.

Glad you liked it! This was written at 5 AM as I was having a restless night without much coherence and I cannot do negative, it's not in me to write or think about negative characters or negative storylines, I like to live in la la land. 😆

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
Bae. Studying Bio. Procrastinated for 6 hours. Kill me. Will read. Res'd.

Good luck BAE!!! Don't worry I procrastinated as well. 😕 But I am telling myself I won't allow myself to eat till I finish 3 sections of cardio so I either stay hungry or better start studying. 😆

Good luck liver!!! ❤️

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
it was beautiful

Thank you Prachi!! 😃

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Soujanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

LOVE LOVE LOVE! This is just PERFECT! The helplessness and depending on each other. That's how I want to see our Ishra. The super couple who face everything and get through the toughest times together. Great work!

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: arunabhi
Hope you are doing good Doc 🤗.. Long time 😳...

This OS is special. Raman did realize the pain she is going through and also they are nothing without Ruhi. I loved it when both decided to fight together. His heart is for Adi but Puttar is grown up version of Ruhi which made Ishitha look at Raman after all this drama. Brilliant connection Doc 👏👏👏..

The song selection .. You re so perfect when it comes to connecting story lines with songs. Loved the song. Thanks for this wonderful OS.

Aru 🤗It is so nice to see you!!!! I can't wait for my exam to be over and this track to get over so we can have you back with your incredible gifs!

Thanks for your kind words Aru, I always felt that Raman is a grown up version of Ruhi, he is delicate, mature, loving and has that same infectious smile like his little daughter. For me Raman and Ruhi are very similar and they matter to Ishita equally, not one more than the other, it's just a different kind of love, one is for a spouse and the other is for a child. 😳

Thanks for liking the song, it is of a depressing tone but still has that melancholic beauty. 😃

After the exam I am gonna harass you for some cute puttar kiwi gifs. 😊

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: avni_19
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Doc, Wowww!! such an awesome positive surprise. Beautifully written! Those IshRa moments and in each step reminding them of Ruhi was simply beautiful and adorable!

In short, I loved how they both were finding solace in each other's arms and fighting together to get back their little angel and light of their home - Ruhi!

The pic of Gurdwara brings peace to sight!

Hope CVs peep into this piece of yours... Its brilliant! CVs are running out of ideas!

Before I end, All the best for your exams... Hope your preparations are going good.. I bet its way better than the serial shit we get these days!

Goodluckk!!!

Hello Sunita! Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment, Bangla sahib gurdwara is a part of my growing up before I moved to the states, even though I was all of 10 I still remember early morning visits and sometimes stopping after dinner to just sit there in peace with my family.

Ishita and Raman are a team and will always will be! Regarding CVs peeping into this I doubt they will spend time because stuff like this doesn't raise TRPS and don't get them money, so they need a sobfest, or a screamathon to make some money. 😕

Thank you for the wishes! I need all the luck, prayers and wishes I can get. Thanks once again. 😃