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Chapter 5:-
The same evening...

Mr bhalla n Mr iyer met n became good friends. Same with the ladies. Both the ladies share the story of the heartbreak of their children. N den after some chit chatting both the senior couples left for home.

In bhalla house

Toshiji shared this with Simmi. (Since this is not important I vl start the conversation from the middle.)

Simmi: aap sahi keh rahe ho mumma yeh koi wajah nahi hoti hai divorce dene ki...

Toshiji: aur tu dekh yeh wahi kudi hai jiski god mein kal humhari ruhi chain se so rahi thi... Bechari bachhi na jaane kya beeti hogi uspe...

(Jz then Raman enters with ruhi in his arms... Plz note one thing though ruhi is more than a year old, she hasn't started walking. She only crawls now... I no its little strange... But her first vl also b special...)

R: kya ma kaun bechari...

To: are woh bachhi ishita...

R: itni badi ghodi jaisi hai aur aap bachhi bol rahi ho... Khair kya hua use...

Raman sits on the sofa with ruhi. Toshiji narrates the whole story...

To: dekh puttar aaj k zamaane mein bhi aise log vote hai ...laalat hai inpar...

R: uski zindagi k baare mein sunkar toh mai bhi bahut hairaan hoon... Maa aapki bechari toh sach mein bechari Nikli...

Si: bhai aapko is baat pe bhi mazak...

R: are Simmi chhodh na ...kyun doosron ki life mein interf...(suddenly he remembers something... Got up in a hurry). Simmi tu ruhi ko sambhaal mai aata hoon...

Si: Bhai hua kya...

R: are Maine kaha na mai aata hoon...

Raman immediately walked up towards the opposite door which was open... Raman saw that...Mr. Iyer was watching TV n Mrs iyer was busy in the kitchen but ishita was nowhere to be seen... Mr iyer saw him standing ...

Mr I: yes...?

R: uncle ji mai Raman... Saamne waale ghar mein rehta hoon...

Mr I: bhalla ji k bade bete na...

R: ji haan

Mr I: kaho beta much khaas kaam tha kya...?

R: haan uncle woh mujhe actually... (Speechless)...

By now Mrs iyer was also standing...

R: (took a deep breath) uncle actually mujhe ishita se milna tha... (In one breath)

Both the senior iyers were staring like an alien...

Mrs I: kyun kya hua...

R: aunty kuch kaam hai...

Mr I: beta woh toh market gayi hai bas aati hogi...

R: ji theek hai...

Before Mr or Mrs iyer could say anything, Raman had already left...

Mrs I: aiyoo ajeeb aadmi hai...

Raman was rushing downstairs. He so wished that he could jz meet ishita once n say sorry for what he told in the morning... N dat too not in front of others... Male ego u no...he sat on a nearby bench n waited for her. After about 15 minutes waiting, ishita arrived. Ishita was about to enter the corridoor when Raman stopped her.

R: ms lucky boy, ek min...( he wanted to say ms. Ishita, but god knows y when his mouth opened dat came out.)

I: yes Mr. CEO (same situation, with that she turned)

R: woh mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

I: kya...

R: woh actually...

I: kya hua (asked politely)

R: actually mujhe kehna tha ki...

I: ki...?

R: sorry...

I: sorry ...sorry kyun...

R: aaj subah k liye...

I: subah k liye... Kya hua tha subah... ...

R: mummy se pata chala tumhare divorce ka karan... Aur phir tumhare jaate waqt Maine...

I: are nahi nahi aap sorry mat bolo aapko thodi na pata tha... Aapne toh aise he casually bol diya tha... Aap plz sorry mat bolo...

R: lekin aap...

I: plz aap sorry mat bolo plz...

R: achha theek hai nahi bolts hoon ...waise tumhe ek genuine baat bolu...

I: haan bolo...

R: tumhara jo husband hai na...

I: excuse me...

R: sorry ex husband... Ab khush...

I: haan...

R: khair whatever... Toh tumhara Jo ex-husband tha na...

I: tha nahi hai...

R: haan hai 😉 woh thoda paagal hai na...

I: (getting the meaning) hahaha😆 pata nahi

R: chalo thank god tumne ek genuine smile toh Di... I no m so cool... Mai sab theek kar diya na...

I: haan haan very funny... Bas ab apne aap ko zyaada chadhaiye mat aap... Waise ek baat batao... Mai kya bahut special hoon...

R: kya Matlab...

I: aaj subah thanq bola abhi sorry...😉

R: shut up...

I: anyways mai chalati hoon, appa w8 kar rahe honge...

R: haan chalo mai bhi uppar he jaa raha hoon...

I: chaliye...

The started walking upstairs

R: waise ms. Lucky boy...

I: god mr CEO sabse pehle toh yeh ms lucky boy bolna band kijiye... Kitna kharab lagta hai...

R: same applies to you also...

I: ohk.. Fine aah se mai sirf ishita aur aap sirf Raman...

R: ohk toh sirf ishita...😉

I: Raman 😡

R: achha theek hai...😆 toh ishita employee of the year... Not bad..

I: kyun aapko bhi toh CEO of the year...

R: haan toh mai hoon he aisa...

I: oh god plz not again...

R: waise tum karti kya ho...

I: Richlife finance... Senior executive..

R: wow that's really amazing...

I: aur aap...

R: kaise tumhe pata nahi..

I: nahi bas aise he formality k liye...

R: very funny... PSR... Family business...

I: family business 😛 wow...

R: dekho baat karte karte ghar bhi as gaya... Waise tumhe pata hai tum actually special ho...

I: kaise...

R: mere baad tum pehli woh insaan ho jiski god mein meri beti chain se soyi hai..

I: huh... Kya...

R: aur nahi toh kya meri beti aaj tak kisi ki god mein nahi tiki tumhe chhodh k...

I: wow tab toh m special... Waise name kya hai aapki beti ka...

R: ruhi ...ruhi bhalla...

I: ruhi... Bahut pyaar name hai...

R: hmmm...😉 Usse bhi achhi salary hai..

I: salary 😲 !!!!! Oho apne sun liya tha...

R: haan socha nahi tha ki itna kadak jawab dogi tum use...

I: kyun nahi socha tha...

R: actually jab tumne jab card maanga toh laga ki phass gayi lekin nahi... Not bad...

I: thank u so much...

R: so friends...?? (Forwarding his hand)...

I: (thinks a little) sure (gives her hand)

A perfect handshake. Followed by a brief eye lock. Den broken n headed home not before that palatna smile dena n a sweet bye bolna.

Edited by ...Forever... - 10 years ago
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awww...so cute...freindship ho gyi...lovely update...waiting for next...
continue soon
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Superb
Ishra parents are not fighting
Ishta became friends
Continue soon
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awesome update
please continue soon 👏
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Aww so cute in love with your story wanna read more plz continue soon ur story is mind blowing I loved the positive attitude of both ishita and raman and of course ishita's nautanki friends are awesome and ishra convo was superb ek baat batana whats ms lucky boy I mean why lucky boy and of course loved ishita's karara javab to that man so its employee of the year and ceo of the year padosi padosi haan not bad
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Chapter 6:-
Days passed n the pragati was on full swing. As in, Raman n Ishita have become good or say best of friends. Relation between Ruhi n Ishita was no less than a perfect mother daughter duo. Ishra used to share each n every good n bad news with each other.

There was an unspoken agreement between Raman n Ishita for the full day time table. Early morning when Ruhi vl wake up then ishraru vl go for a walk. It started when Raman n ruhi were out for their usual morning walk n there they saw Ishita jz enjoying the essence of the first morning rays. Then Ishra decided that the trio vl have their morning charge together. This morning walk vl b followed by Ishita n Ruhi spending time with each other. Jz these two. In the meanwhile, Raman vl get ready for his office. Then papa-beti vl have their fun loving moment, during when Ishita vl get ready. Den after giving two sweet kisses to Ruhi by Ishra, both vl lve for their respective officed in their respective cars.

In the evening... Ishita vl b the first to return from her office. After freshening up, the first thing, she vl do is to take Ruhi for one more walk. During this walk, Raman would return, n vl always b welcomed by a sweet short line from Ishita... "😊 dekho papa aa gaye"... Giving a kiss on Ruhi's cheeks he would reply... " hmmm... Ishita aunty pareshaan toh nahi kar rahi hai na meri ru ko..."... "shut up"... "Aaye haye jhansi ki rani pure form mein hai"... "Very funny raavan kumar"... This was a daily dose Ishra would have in their lives. Though the little angel doesn't understands the conversation between Ishra, but she also used to laugh at her papa n her Ishita aunty. Ishita will give Ruhi to Raman n the trio vl walk towards their respective homes. N after dinner, yet another walk for Ruhi. During this while Ruhi vl fall asleep, be it in Ishita's or Raman's arms. Den Ishra vl have some casual talk n den they vl also return.

Mrs bhalla n mrs iyer were the two most happiest persons with this pragati. Same with the two gents. The two families including Raman became aware of one fact that Ruhi was Ishita's support system n for Ishita, Ruhi comes first before anything. Relationship of few days became an example of love n affection. Raman was very happy that Ruhi got her mother, though in that legal way, but dil ka rishta was this only.

Amidst of all this, the log (people n neighbours) used to talk rubbish n spread rumours about Ishra having an affair. The parents vl jz ignore it for their child's happiness n Ishra being an ignorant of what the people will think jz brush it off.

It was one Sunday morning when Raman asked Ishita to come for shopping with him n Ruhi. But Ishita didn't agree as she didn't want to become the kabaab mein haddi in the papa-beti moment. But then Raman somehow convinced her by saying that... " tumhe chalna padega kyunki agar beech mein Ruhi royi aur mai nahi hua toh tumhe he sambhalna hai..."


Not completed vl continue soon


Edited by ...Forever... - 10 years ago
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Such a lovely story..
Very interesting...
Really like the way of your story telling...
Please pm me when u update next...😊😊
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read whole part in one go its a cute story do continue it
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Continuation of 6th Chapter... (29th March)

It was one Sunday morning when Raman asked Ishita to come for shopping with him and Ruhi. But Ishita didn't agree as she didn't want
to become the kabaab mein haddi in the papa-beti moment.But then Raman some how convinced her by saying that...
"tumhe chalna padega kyunki agar beech mein Ruhi royi aur mai nahi hua toh tumhe he sambhalna hai..."

Ishita hesitantly agreed.

In the mall.,,
Ruhi was sitting in the trolley. 1st they went for ruhi's cloth. Ishra as usual nok jhok for green (ishu) n blue (raman) frocks

i: aap dekho na yeh green colour ruhi par bahut achha lagega...

r: are shut up yaar... ruhi pe yeh blue achha lagega after all blue mera favourite colour hai...

i: are th green bhi toh mera favourite hai

r: beti kiski hai...

i: aapki 😭

r: toh...

after this ishita walks toward another counter for good dresses. At first raman didnt notice but then sees she is somewhat like khafa
khafa n gum sum... He didnt understand the reason first but then something strikes in her mind. He takes ruhi in his one arm n the
green dress in the other n walks towards where ishu was standing. He carefully makes ruhi sit in the glass slab with the green dress
in her on hand n stands behind her n hides himself behind ruhi. All dis is not noticed by ishu as she was lost in another world.

Raman takes ruhi's hands in his n starts actioning.

r:- ishu aunty yeh dekho, yeh dress achhi hai na... mujhpe achhi lageg na... dekho dekho...

i: (gets tears in her eyes) haa beta yeh dress bahut achhi hai... meri ru pehnegi toh aur achhi ho jaaegi...

raman was quite surprised to hear ru as he only calls her ru... but then ishita ruhi bond is special.
He comes back from ruhi's behind thinking that ishita is all ok now but then seeing raman she turns away her face saying ...
"lekin beta aapke papa bilkul achhe nahi hai dekho na aapki ishu aunty ko kitna pareshaan karte hai."... faking anger.

raman holds her shoulder n says "sorry ishita.. tum jaanti ho na maine jaan buj k nahi bola woh... ruhi tumhari bhi utni he hai jitni
meri..."

i:- still faking anger ... aapko kya lag raha hai aapke sorry se mai maan jaungi...

r: are mai sorry bol raha hoon na... m sorry m sorry ...holding his ears ... sorry sorry sorry

juz then one shopkeeper sees n considers them as a perfect family.

s: arey bhabhi bhai sahab itna bol rahe ho toh maan jaao na

r: oh hello bhabhi hogi ter girlfriend

i: aur nahi toh kya... mujhe kisi pagal kutte ne kata hai jo mai inse shaadi karoon...

saying so ishita picked up ruhi n left for billing...

s: kya sahab ...

r: kya...

s: kyun le rahe ho humhari firki...

r: firki... Kahe ki firki...

S: who madam aapki patni nahi hai..???

R: nahi yaar nahi hai

S: lekin phir aap dono toh ...

R: hum dono kya...

S: aap dono toh bilkul pati patni ki tarah ladte ho... Aur woh dekho... woh aapki beti hai..??

R: haan

S: toh who madam ko dekhiye...( points towards ruhi n ishita ) unn dono ko dekh k kaun nai kahega ki dono ma-beti nahi hai...

R: (sees towards them n he was in awe...) sahi bola yaar tu koi nahi kahega... afterall Jhansi ki rani chahe jaisi ho... pyaar toh bahut
karti hai meri beti se...)

I: raman chaliye...(shouting)

R: haan haan aa raha hoon

Next they walk to gents section. Raman selects shirt for himself. N that too of green colour for apology from ishita. Ishita was
playing with ruhi when raman called her.

R: ishita dekho yeh shirt kaisi hai..??

I: (turns towards raman ...shocked impressed surprised) (/sarcastically says) achhi hai... but ruhi tumhe kya lagta hai tumhare papa
par yeh colour suit karega

R: ofcourse karega... kyun nahi karega ...afterall ishita aunty ka favourite colour hai... hai na ruhi...

Ru: laughs Hahahaha speaking anything n everything

I: ho gaya toh chale...??

R: haan haan chalo... lekin ruko...

I: ab kya hua... kuch chhutt gaya kya...??

R: haan chhuta toh hai (speaking worriedly)

I: kya..(asked worriedly)...

R:(picks ruhi in his arms) ruhi, tumhari ishita aunty ne tumhare liye itni achhi frock li... Toh tumhe bhi toh lena chahiye na...??!?!?!

Ru..: hahahaahahaha... laughs

I: are nahi raman uski zaroorat nahi hai...

R: u keep ur mouth shut n follow us...

I: us..??

R: mujhe bhul gayi aap ishita aunty (doing action wid ruhi's hands)

I: awww... Lekin raman..

R: shhh...

Next to the ladies section.

S: madam yeh dekhiye yeh laal rang aap par bahut achha lagega...

I: kya bhaiya kya sade sade suits dikha rahe ho... kuch achha dikhao na...

Meanwhile raman was lost in someother world. He patted ishita's shoulder n said

R: ishita...

I: haan (without seeing him)

R: (little bit shouting) ishitaaa...

I: kya hai raman...( now looking at him...)

R: woh dekho..) he pointed towards something

I: kya

R: woh...

She sees it. It was a mindblowing blue anarkali with black chiridaar n blue-black dupatta.

R: woh le lo... woh tumpar achha lagega..

I: (shocked surprised impressed) not bad Mr. ravan kumar aapki choice toh badi achhi nikali

R: shut up aur jaake try karo use

I: sure..??

S: ofcourse madam sir itna bol rahe hai toh jaiye na...

I: ohk...

She goes for change N then comes Raman sees her

"Beautiful" first word which comes out from his mouth. She indeed was looking so... ishita sees the cost... then says...

I: are nahi raman... Yeh utna achha nahi hai...

R: kya matlab...

I: matlab isme woh baat nahi hai chhodiye na kabhi aur le lenge...

Saying so she goes for change.

Meanwhile in the shop...

R:yeh Jhansi ki rani pagal ho gayi... Itni achhi dress chodh rahi hai... (something strikes in his mind)... Bhaiya price kya hai uss suit
ka...

S: sir 10,000

R: yeh madrasan bhi na... (smiles at her simplicity)

Ishita comes after changing.

I: raman chaliye

R: haan tum chalo ...yeh bags aur ruhi ko lekar jao... Mai aata hoon...

I: lekin hua kya...???

R: are tum jaao... Yeh lo chabhi...

In the car... Ishita was playing with ruhi when she sees raman coming with a bag... he sits in the driver seat... keeps the bag in the back
with other bags... n ishita n ruhi were sitting in the passenger seat...

I: yeh kya hai...

R: gift...

I: gift... Kiske liye..???

R: hai ek... Tumse matlab...

I: nahi... Mai toh aise he puch rahi hoon...

R: puchh rahi ho toh ek kaam karo... Usko dekh bhi lo...

I: sure...???

R: of course

Ishita sees it... N literally shocked...

I: raman yeh...

R: ruhi apni ishita aunty se kaho ki ravan kumar aur ru ki taraf se unke liye ek gift...

I: lekin raman mai kaise...

Jz then ruhi starts crying n raman says...

R: dekho tum lene se mana kar rahi ho toh meri beti ro rahi hai... agar nahi liya toh soch lo kya hoga... aur agar meri beti royi toh
mai tumhe nahi chhodunga...

I: ohk fine thank u so much for this...

R: gud...

I: bas ru... dekho ishita aunty le rahi hai na... bas bas chup ho jao ...

She feels raman's gaze n says...

I: ab humein hi dekhte rahoge ki chaloge bhi

R: haan haan chal raha hoon...

N day passes by.

Precap: subbu's entry...

Edited by ...Forever... - 10 years ago

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