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Posted: 10 years ago
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New Story - Meri Dost Mujjse Pyar Karogi

Part 2:

The drive to Bhalla house was more a silent one as both were fighting the battle of emotions that they were having, was it lust or love. Can friendship be a step? When they were still battling between their emotions the car made its way through the society of the Bhalla house. He applied the break and the sound brought her out of the thought she had been having till now.

The Bhalla house was full of life chirping and noisy all happy due to arrival of Mihir and Rinky. Ruhi, Sharavan and Adhi had their own plan to invite their Bhua and Fufaji. Yes Adhi had sneaked out of Shagun's hotel lying that he is visiting one of his friends. They had made a huge welcome card with few snaps that were taken during their wedding. Though those photos were lacking the usual brightness of the just wed couple they still looked divine together.

Toshiji did their tilak an d welcomed them in. Mihir gave a warm hug to Raman and the whole environment was chirpy.

Simmi took Rinky aside and asked if they did something or just have been wasting nights. If they did, did it hurt her and does she needs any guidance?

R: What are you asking?

S: why don't tell me you guys are becoming another Raman Bhai and Ishitha

R: Di, what wrong about them, we really want to become like them

S: Everything is good about them but for not thinking about themselves

R: Joavo Di, you don't have any work

S( Self Talk) oh god what do I do... I will only have to do something.

They had a huge lavish lunch full of items which were favorite of Mihir and Rinky. The whole dining table really seamed a site to be cherished. The whole family was there Ruhi, Adhi, raman, Ishu, Romi, Mihir and Rinky. Toshiji was the most happy person.

Toshiji and Ishitha made Mihir and Rinky feed eachother. The mere touch of her lips was giving him heavenly pleasure.Rinky playfully bit his fingers and gave a funny winning smile. That gave him electric shocks. How nave was his wife, he thought to himself.

Romi gestured to Simmi and Simmi spoke up

S: Listen today is a movie date for two couples. The newly wed and the old wed still worth to be called newly wed

T: What are you saying Simmi

S: Mama We have booked 4 tickets for a movie. Let the new love birds and the pld love birds go. She said pointing to ISHRA and MIHKY.

Both Mihir & Rinky blushed and looked at each other. Ishitha looked up to Raman with a pinky blushy face while Raman winked at her with a naughty glint.

Ruhi: yeh yeh Ishima and Papa are going for a date. And started jumping.

Adhi looked on to see his father happy with ishitha aunty and his sister being all happy abt it. He wished he was also with them. Soon they came dressed for the movie date.

Raman was wearing a black T shirt and a blue jean while Ishitha wore a pista green anarkali. They took Adhi along to drop him to Shagun on the way.

Soon they reached the theater and Mihir went up to the online counter to get his tickets. Raman was flirting with Ishitha and she was feeling Shy. Rinky had gone to the washroom and just returned along with Mihir and saw her Raman Bhai naughty avtar.

Raman had pinned Ishitha to a corner and had one hand on her hand and other on her cheeks. Ishitha had closed her eyes and had surrendered in anticipation. Raman closed the distance and kissed her gently. Mihir and Rinky were just awed by the romantic avtar of their Bahi. Rinky looked at Mihir and he too looked at her. A fresh beam of desire was widely visible in both there eyes. They didn't know this was only a trailer of what they were yet to see.

Raman soon composed himself after seeing Mihir and asked him and Rinky to chill out as it's their date too and also made it very clear that they must not intrude into the privacy of Mr and Mrs RKB.

Soon they went into the movie hall. Naughty Simmi and Romi had booked the corner most balcony seats for both the couple. Pair of seats at the last and last but one row. Raman took the last but one row and asked Mihir and Rinky to occupy the last row. It was really really mature movie and from the time the movie had started Raman and Ishitha were in their own dreamy trance. Raman reaching out to Ishu's shoulders, Ishitha snuggling into his hard arms, Raman kissing her she kissing him back.

Mihir and Rinky were literally confused thinking which movie to see, the one that was being played on screen or the one that was off-screen by their Bhai. Whatever it may be it was sending a different sensation to both of the Mihir couldn't stop his hand moving and holding Rinky's shoulders and she leaned on his shoulders. She felt relived with his support else the movie was burning her inners.Mihir was looking at Rinky time and again. She was looking divine. How he wished to capture her lips. These sinful thoughts he thought to himself. His Bhai was giving him tough time with his wild love with his Bhabi. Rinky's proximity to him was creating havoc in him. He thanked his stars that the movie ended. He breathed a sigh of relieve and they game out of the movie hall and left to their respective homes.

They ordered dinner and soon retired. Mihir removed the pillows in between and demanded her to share the bed without any barriers.

M: Rinky I think we don't need these barriers between us

R: Hmm she just hummed and assumed her position on the bed.

Both slept looking for a new morning

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Posted: 10 years ago
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☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️
too romantic...
mihir... romance k tym bhai ne tumhe piche chod dia... 😆
Edited by SuryaIshraholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awww... tooo romantic
awesome...
poor rinky n mihir.. hahaha..
their confusion abt which movie to see..
hahaha that line just cracked me up..
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Blush attack ☺️ ☺️
Which movie to see 😆

How did miss the earlier update 😲
Very nice ...

Waiting to see what happen after removing of the barriers 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love the premise of your story! I think Mihir & Rinki are so cute, and you have done such an awesome job of weaving in both of their perspectives! Plus, romantic Puttar is always fun! 😊

Can't wait for your next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Really loved your take on the movie date night it was soo romantic and funny, poor Rimi they were so confused.

I wish the CVs would give this couple a chance I feel they are just ruining everything.

I want to read more please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome. Totally in love with it.
Poor RiMi ...Confused which movie to watch
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsum part...with loads of romance..
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update...
Mihir and Rinky look cute as a couple...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️ ☺️☺️

too romantic...
mihir... romance k tym bhai ne tumhe piche chod dia... 😆

thanks Anu will try more Romantic updates

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