Ishra SS: Baawari Piya Ki ( chapter 7 on page 22) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
awesumm update!!
imagining shagun as positive is hard to digest! hahahah!! :P but i like it as positive.. pls dont change her to negative!

Cont soon! :D loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Loved it dear..

Thank god shagun is +ve character...

thank you thank you yaar. I was so nervous when u was writing first part, but I m glad that you all like it. ya shagun is positive here, actually I don't want any negative character here.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PAYALDIVAN

tooo good yaaar now ishra ki love story ishu ki jbani tooo goood mza aaenge waiting for the love jourmey to begin...
and ek or thank u raman ki zinda hone ki hope dene k lie

thank you payal, I am also excited to pen down my story for ishra. and ya Raman zinda hai ya marr gya its a suspence and I will took tym to reveal it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you prachi, actually I was waiting for your comments guys, and I am feeling good that u like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni_19

awesumm update!!

imagining shagun as positive is hard to digest! hahahah!! :P but i like it as positive.. pls dont change her to negative!

Cont soon! :D loved it!

thank you avni for appreciation, ya it is also hard for me to imagine shagun as positive character but I really don't want any negativity in my story so I changed it. and ya I will not change her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start awesome update felt good that shagun is holding positive character and hope to see raman soon loved it continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Lovely start awesome update felt good that shagun is holding positive character and hope to see raman soon loved it continue soon

thanx for liking isha. will update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start...
Continue soon - waiting to hear IshRa love story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Interesting start...

Continue soon - waiting to hear IshRa love story.

I am glad that you liked it. will update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woh pehli baar, jab hum mile...
hello friends, I am back again with my second part. first of all, lots of thanks for your encouraging response for previous part, I was take so much time to think about this part,actually I was preparing about their first meet,so finally after so much thinking, I decided to pen it down. I hope you all will like it. again criticism and appreciations both are welcomed

ishitas eyes glittered with sparkles of joy, her pale face suddenly became lightened on hearing to tell about their love story. Vandita,Shagun and Mihika trio witnessed her excitement. Mihika somehow wanted to stop Shagun because she thought might be discussion of Raman will hurt more but she decided to became quite. she opened her tablet and caressed her and mihika photo and showed to shagun, shagun became little confused and asked
shagun: ishita, yeh toh tumhaari air mihika ki kaafi puraani pic hai na??
ishita: haan,6 saal pehle ki. jab mein London GUI this meri further degree me liye aur miku MBBS me first year mein this. kehte hai na destiny se zyada kisi ki nahi chalti. MBBS karne ke baad mein Delhi mein hi MS karna chahati thi but appa... won man hi nahi rahe this. I still remembered that day...
6 years back-------------------
ishita: no,no,no Maine kaha na ki mein london nahi jaane wali. main aap logo ko chord kar nahi jaane wali
appa: but ishu, listen na beta...
ishita: no appa, I will not leave to London alone, main aapke aur amma ke bina nahi reh paaungi air akka Jiju ki bhi toh abhi abhi shaadi hui hai na. phir mein bhi chahli jaaungi toh that soon a ho jaaega.
amma: ishu beta we are glad ki tum humaare baare mein itna sochti ho but kanna mera air tumhaare appa ka yeah dream that ki tum higher studies lo, please kanna. hummari yeah wish poori karogi na?
appa: air ishu wahan tumhaari best friend mihika bhi toh hai na. uska admission bhi same college mein hi hua hai. please kanna man jaao na...
after lot of pleadings,she agreed to pursue her MS in medical college of London. it was destinies after all because she have to met her life partner and love there. ishita reached to London after 2 days. mihika gladly received her from airport. mihika was 4 years younger then ishita and was daughter of iyyers business assosiates Teddies. she was so excited that her best friend and mentor will live with her for next 4 years. mihika and ishita gladly reached to reddies bunglow.
mihika: ishu,ishu,ishu I am so happy today,finally you will live with me. kitna mazaa aaega na. Sochi him roz college jaaenge, swath mein padhenge air tu merit studies mein bhi help karegi, haina!!! ishu main kya...ishu tu sad hai kya???
ishita: nahi mihika I am OK.bas I am missing amma appa.
mihika: are yaar, kya tu chote bacche ki tarah emotional ho rahi hai. 4 years hi toh hai, dekhna haste haste nikal jaaenge. chal chalke lunch karle. mihika managed to cheer her friend and both went to take their lunch. rest of the day passed by arranging ishitas room,arranging her wardrobes and preparing for next day.
Next day, London University, Medical college campus-
next day, the both young and Indian beauties entered in college campus in mihikas imported car. they both were dressed in very simple dresses.where ishita was dressed in simple blue chudidaar suit and mihika was dressed in white floral frock. every eye was drooling these two southindian beauties. both friends were became so happy because everyone giving them special attention. mihika stood near a bench and started to searching someone. ishita became little curious on seeing her friend weird behavior
ishita:miku kisko dhoondh rahi ho??
mihika:rukh na bataati hoon. tujhe surprise dena hai.
ishita:surprise??? kaisa surprise???
mihika: are yaar plz 2 minutes ruk jaana. won log bas aane waale hai.
they both were discussing something when suddenly a black Mercedes sttopped near mihika. and a boy in black shirt and black jeans with shades came outside from car. his one hand occupied with Mac Donalds burger and other one is occupied with strawberry shake. he came hurriedly and said, "I am so sorry miku, kya Karin aaj subah uthne mwin late ho gyaa. tune naashta nahi kiya hoga na, yeah le tera favourite burger khaa me.
mihika: aree tum do minute apni gaadi parr break maaroge? pehle tum inse Milo, she is my friend ishita, I tell you na she came here to completed her last 3 years of MS and ishita he is my fiance mihir..
ishita: FIANCE????? yeah sab kab hua??? air tune toh mujhe much btaaya hi nahi. yeah sab???
mihika was going to explain her about their meeting when they heard a voice, a man of nearly 27 years came from car, dressed in blue denim and white shirt, he was wearing shades. he was carrying some books in one hand and his I phone on another hand, he was instructing someone on phone and cutter phone on saw 3 figures, "yaar mihir, tu mihika me pyaar mein ajeeb majnoo ban gaya hai yaar,Abe gadhe majnugiri hi karega toh padhega kab?? pakad apna saamaan aur...
mihir: are bhai, kya kar raghe ho?? fiance me saamne toh izzat ka kachra mat karo. he looked emberresly at mihika and found that she was also giggling on him."dekha bhai yeh bhi daanth nikaal rahi hai."
they trio were busy in their own talks while ishita was staring them blankly. she was unable to under stand about this new arrivAL.suddenly mihika reminded about ishitas presence and she intreputed two brothers and said
mihika: are aap dojo bhai apni ladaai baad mein continue karna, Raman bhiya aap pehle meri friend se miliye, bhiya yeh hai ishita, meri best friend, she came here to complete her ms, mihika was continues her blabbering but that two souls have no effects on her voice. Raman was completely mesmerized by her beauty. that blue chudidaar was completely complimenting her fair tone skin, her kurta was completely reveling her curvy figure, her wet lips due to her lip gloss was tempting him more while his big brown eyes became wider and wider because of his continuously staring. she was feeling uneasy under his sharp gaze, she noticed his mouth was opening in completely O shape and his eyes was freezes on her.both mihir and mihika was amazed seeing their brother in such state. mihir slowly shook Raman and he came out from his dream world.
mihir: bhaiii. aap theek toh ho na???
Raman: hmmm... haaan, ky..,kya bola tu?
mihir: bhaaiii aap theek ho na??
Raman: are mein theek gun, tu pehle chillana band kar. election mein khada hai kya???
mihir: ishu Didi meet Raman bhai, oops I mean Raman bhai, my best friend, mentor and the manager of bhalla group of industries London branch and bhai yeah hai ishu akka, miku ki friend. kal hi India we aai hai air hummare saath yahi padhengi. cool na... both of them shake hands formally, Raman was emberessed by his stupid behaviour while ishita was quite amazed with him. she was feeling something strange in her first meeting with raman, there was not normal, ishita wanted to talk with Raman but he excused himself and went to his office and the trio gang departed towards their respective classes.
...
in car
Raman was driving towards his office but his mind was not concentrating on roads today, ishitas smiling face was dancing in front of his eyes, her giggles,her melodious voice were ecoing in his ears. he stopped his car with sudden brakes and said,"hey mata raani,yeh kya ho raha hai,ishita ka face meri aankho me saamne se jaata Lyon nahi??? kya paagalpann hai yeah?? yeah koi alien toh nhi hai?? main roz kitni ladkiyo se milta gun, unka chehra toh mujhe gun tang nahi karta, phir iske saath kya gadbad hai??? kahi isko jaadu toh nahi aata, hypnotize Marne wala???

pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kar diya
tera bann betha hai mera jiyaa
jaane kya hoga,kya yoga kya pata...
okk guys I am done with my chapter 2. please please Dearie's reply or like it. ur replies will be motivate me. agar reply nahi karoge toh mujhe yahi lagega that you all are not interested, so plz leave your replies.,.,,...

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