PicOSthon: 39 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 93

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Posted: 10 years ago
@DipaRB6.. firstly let me confess I was really excited for this second OS of urs on the thread. Ek to d pic was brilliant, plus u r soo soo creative. 👏 Infact I am so glad to hv met u on the thread. 😊
Kudos again for choosing d pic..i thought a 100 times bfor putting the pic in the list..infact i never thought anybody wud voluteer to take it! And you did such a brilliant job with the pic.. i mean u even encorporated the media bit n him touching her blouse/saree part in an altogether different scenario! 👏 👏 hatsoff! Shashtang Dandwat Pranam to you maate! 👏👏

Coming to the story..i loved the whole concept. Her not saying the i love you.. then regretting it later wen she fears loosing her life..n later the i love you and d love making 😊
I found d catty part..n her eyes looking like Ruhi really cute. 😊😊 N the media bit and then encorporating d towel around her n him touching her for confusing d saree as kanjeevaram! 😆 Super creative..I mean I cud hv never been able to think of such a concept.

Plus the writing was as elegant as always.

Again, thank you for participating here. I am indebted to you for dis. Really. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Again, let me know if guys are having any problem in navigating through d index. U want me to remove d pics from d index in d main post?
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Posted: 10 years ago
@khuarnav,
just finished with ur OS..

firstly one complaint..y did u make Shagun kiss raman..🤢 😕😆

Coming to the story. U wove a brialliant story around d pic 👏 Well done..i cudnt guess how u wud use d pic till d end! 😊

They kissed infront of everyone? 😲😆n people cheered! 👏😃 🥳

Loved d intimate portions. Overall i found d story engaging and gripping..i was glued till d end. Plus u wrote it brilliantly.

Well done.Thanks for participating here! 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
@vidya_prasad: dis is d first tym i read ur OS. you write well yaar! 👏👏
i was laughing like crazy on dese lines:

Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge 😆😆

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave 😆

Yes,Guilty kumar accha tha 😆
I found d OS really really cute. Well done yaar!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well done buddy, where's 3rd april os?
peace.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RS472

Well done buddy, where's 3rd april os?

there r 2 oses for 3 april: on pages 128 and 130
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey pallavi amazing updt loved it thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
vidya di
It was amazing!!!
Enjoyed throughout the os
Loved how you used Raman's tiredness
A lighthearted os with all elements of a story in it- comedy, romance, guilt, fight, drama, everything
Loved the divider scene- the license fight and the bechara policeman

Loved these lines:
"Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge"

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave"

"Jhooti. Compensation needed"

Awesome yaar.
Keep writing
Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

@vidya_prasad: dis is d first tym i read ur OS. you write well yaar! 👏👏

i was laughing like crazy on dese lines:

Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge 😆😆

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave 😆

Yes,Guilty kumar accha tha 😆
I found d OS really really cute. Well done yaar!


Thanks a lot Pallavi di.
This means a lot to me.😳
Impossible.Girl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: darlingpinks

vidya di
It was amazing!!!
Enjoyed throughout the os
Loved how you used Raman's tiredness
A lighthearted os with all elements of a story in it- comedy, romance, guilt, fight, drama, everything
Loved the divider scene- the license fight and the bechara policeman

Loved these lines:
"Yeh kya hogaya.Pichli baar maiyya-biwi kaha to daant padi.Ab padosi bola to bhi daant padi. Beta idhar se katle warna ye dono tumara keema banakar tera jeena haram kar denge"

"Baaki lecture tumhare khatare ko suna dena.I'll leave"

"Jhooti. Compensation needed"

Awesome yaar.
Keep writing

Thanks dear.
Glad you liked it

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