Originally posted by: peace..
@Dipa, i was just talking of out-of d box ideas, n see..dis was another Out of d box idea 👏 👏 I mean i feel it was already a really tough pic, n den wat way did u used it in d story! 😃 really intelligent use of d pic must say 👏
some lines i really loved:
As she picked them out, he would grab them from her and put them back, making sure to hold her hand for as long as possible. 🤣 😉
After the long break from him, her body was reacting very strongly to each brush of his skin; like a reformed addict who was lapsing quickly. 😉
prompted her to take the drastic step of going out to nervously purchase the black slip and sending him that photograph a few days ago. I It had certainly elicited a reaction from him, of many shocked and drooling emoticons, 😆😆
n trendy kumar!🤣
.aaj kal toh bade compliments dete ho meri sarees ko aur ab kya hua. Ek baar try toh karlo" - cute! 😊
vaise i m really waiting for d day wen KP wears a purple shirt on d show 😊
n i cant stop laughing on dis one: Hasso hasso...chaar din kya ghar main nahin tha, pati ke liye izzat hi nai rahi". 🤣 🤣
n den dis one:
Suddenly, Ishita felt self-conscious of Raman standing behind her in his state and started to back away 😉😉😲 🤣
n den watta a twist of him loosing all his clothes left in d trial room 😆
"Kuch toh sharam karo, do bachcho ke baap hain aap. Safeid baal bhi nikal rahe hain tumhare aur Mall ke fitting room mein aapko yeh baatein sooj rahi hain?" 😆 😆
Aah n d romance ❤️ Freeing her hands from his she curved them around his neck and knotted her fingers into his hair..
n den d spate of uske baads! 😉❤️
"Uske baad good night! 😆
Teek hai, good night boldoonga lekin uske baad no more words. And I want to see that black nightgown, ok?" haye! u literally stole my heart wid dese lines dear! 😃
Dipa, u really did a brilliant job with the pic..really brilliant..watta a paisa vasool OS! 😃 Some portions/dialogues were so comical 😆😆👏
I am falling short of words to admire dis awesomeness, thank you for participating here yaar. 😃 Wud love to read ur oder stories, i m getting to know d writing styles of so many writers on dis OSthon!
N cant wait for ur next OS on d thread. 😊