Ishra FF Destiny- A cruel game updated chp 17- I just love you- pg 36 - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitii

IKR 🤣
She knows everyone here 😆


😆 We met also on her get well soon thread.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dil-E-Pagalpan


😆 We met also on her get well soon thread.😆

The formal one 😕 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitii

The formal one 😕 🤣


I was like this.

Thnx nitti and neha for informing.

So rude na?😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dil-E-Pagalpan


I was like this.

Thnx nitti and neha for informing.

So rude na?😆

Absolutely 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

Everytime someone says absoluetly I have a big grin on my face.It reminds me Aahil's sexy voice and how he says absoluetly.😃😳

I'm like that only, until someone becomes really close to me.😆 Tough one.😆 Till someone speaks to me, I dont.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dil-E-Pagalpan


Everytime someone says absoluetly I have a big grin on my face.It reminds me Aahil's sexy voice and how he says absoluetly.😃😳

I'm like that only, until someone becomes really close to me.😆 Tough one.😆 Till someone speaks to me, I dont.😆


Good grief 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I know it's been too late not updating. More than half a year. I'm really sorry, I lost connect with the show and stopped coming here and as usual u all know how lazy I'm. I'll give my other story's update also today only and from now on I'll be punctual in time. It's a bit short update, next one I'll give long. I just connected with my FF now, will give long updates from now on.

Sorry, really sorry!!!


Really sorry! Maaf kardo please!

***

Chapter 17- I just love you!


The preparations for the wedding were in full swing. With Punjabi and Madrasi Clash it was becoming a pucca classy messy what not wedding. Bollywood style, Southie masala. And men's head had gone by the shopping they did yesterday. 4 hours, God! How do they even have the patience to sit and select so much. And Mihir? Standing beside me and admiring his lovely Mihika! Sigh! My eyes looked for the only one I wanted in front of me now, my Ishita. It's been 1 week and we haven't got proper time in any sense.

Bande ko Shaadi Ke Naam Se Kya Banadiya. Punjabi Jawaan Munde Ko Ladki Ki Ek Jalak Keliye Istara Tarsa rahe hai.

I was cursing my fate when she came there down, in a brown kanchiwaram, some khol under her eyes, the mehandi bowl in her hand, stepping down like a princesses and wearing the most beautiful thing in the world, her smile.

Down she came, passing by me, giving me a glance with a blush on her face, making me smile and taking my heart away...

Her smile could take away my breathes and her eyes make me want to stay there, looking at her forever. She was the purest women. The most wonderful mother. Adi had come here for the wedding and for the first time I could see him happy, laughing, living and all because of the selfless love and care given by her.

I looked for my son and he came their playing along with his little cute sister. He just looked like me, dressed in a red and black sherwani and my darling princesses in a lovely pink frock which their Ishima had selected for them. In just 1 week Ishita had made my Adi hers, he had started to grow to show his love for us, to learn that their is no harm in expressing his love. He didn't yet call her Ishima, but I knew he had accepted her as his mother.

Both of them went to their Ishima, asking for ladoos. My heart danced at the sight of all my loved ones laughing and smiling. It was enough, my life was complete at that moment as I preserved it in my mind and heart as my soul rejoiced.

'Oye Ishima ke chamche', I went there. 'Papa Yaad Nahi Aate Kya?'

'No Papa' Adi teased. 'Nahi Papa We love you!' said Ruhi coming to my arms and asking a chocolate.

'Chocolate keliye Papa varna Ishima ki side.' They giggled and I looked Ishita as she met in my eye. I tried to show all the gratitude and love I had in my heart for her and she gave it back to me from her eyes.

Ishita's parents called her to put Mehandi and she gave her hand, I just looked at it. How I wish my letter would be there. I knew our families had already got the matter between me and Ishita, we simply waited for the right time.

And there a beautiful design was being woven on her already beautiful hands whose touch made me go crazy, whose caress made me a little kid. They were the hands I wanted to stay arrested forever. Mihika teased on whose name should be written on those hands as she said Kuch Bhi with her lips. That sounded so good coming from her. So Innocent.

Baby, How I want to kiss those I said in a tiny whisper standing beside her so that only she could here. She blushed and turned. It seemed as she wanted to say something as she turned, but Oh! Man! her hands shaked and the mehandi!!!

'Aiyooo!' She screamt in that high tone of hers and looked at it once laughing and blushing. I didn't understand why, then I looked it to find 'R' written there. Can I just be more happy?

'Kya hua akka has kyu rahi hai?' her concerned sister asked.

'Yeh Mehandi!'

Mihika looked at it and understood why.

God! Man! I'm feeling so happy, I've got everything in the world now! She's mine and it's my mark!

***

The night was beautiful. The moon, a crescent one. And the winds seemed to sing their own music. A certain sense of calmness reflected. And there she came, my love, in casuals, hair a bit messy, but let me admit even like that she looked the most gorgeous woman on the earth! My heart hummed it's own lyrics matching the winds music and her hair was dancing to it. I just love her.

Terrace was always our meeting place and somehow today I convinced her quickly to come up and look she came warming up my heart, with one cup of coffee and one cup of tea in her hand as always.

Here, she gave me the tea. I always loved her tea's, they had some sort of magic and I never understood how I could like the madrasi style.

Raman- Finally Madam Ko Ab Time Mili Hai!

Ishita- Raman Aap Ko Toh Pata Hai, Shaadi Kal Hai Aur Yeh Aap Kya Keh Rahe. Ab Aap Ki Ma Ko toh impress karna padega na.

Raman- Accha teek hai par tere talwar meri maa mat dikha dena. Jhansi Ki Rani

Ishita- Kuch Bhi!

And we laughed. I stopped for a while and stared at her laughing face and my heart warmed up. She looked at me staring and asked what. I just shook my head and tucked back a strand of hair obstructing my view as my hand lingered there. I was simply completed, my life had found it's meaning.

He placed his lips on her as the moon witnessed love uniting!


***

Oh Baby!
It's burning...it's burning
My heart's burning
and I just wanna let it burn
In the fire this love has set...

I just wanna say
I love you
A hundred thousand times wouldn't be enough
Cause My heart keeps humming it every breath...

Why Does this heart dance
Every time I see you
I just wanna kiss those lips
That keep giving me beautiful smiles...

Let me just touch you
And let life come into me
What magic have you done?
That I just live in you...

Oh Baby!
Just Be Mine,
Stealing my heart,
Let your heart be named mine,
Cause that's my home...
***

Okay guys, I promise another update by the end of this week. Really sorry! How was the update and song? I penned the song on my own! Do give your views. Hope you liked it. Appreciations and Criticisms are welcome.


Yours,

Rashmi





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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Lovely story yaar

When is the next update?
Plz continue soon


Thank you so much!
Just updated!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

It was awesome..I seriously don't what to comment 🤣..I already told u many-times that U write awesome ..🥳
This was one of my fav story and me the lazy one never commented thou🤣
Now I'm so happy as a reader that u are continuing this story..and not so happy as it was short 😳
As u said I'll give my comment from next update..🤣
I loved this update..that song was awesome..I think this also has been said to you earlier 🤣
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