Ishra FF Destiny- A cruel game updated chp 17- I just love you- pg 36 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update... but what happened to Raman... really looking forward to the next update. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty_h

wow read all in a go cont I love it pm me for next n hope it not shagun who is the new entry


thanks a lot dea
glad that u liked it
will surely pm u
wait for next part to know ur answer
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

Wow thanks for writing this 😃😃

I have read all in one go..


thanks a lot di
Glad that u liked it
that means a lot to me
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Lovely update... but what happened to Raman... really looking forward to the next update. 😊


thanks a lot dear
keep reading to know the answers- if u read the update carefully u'll come to know what happened- i have given a clue
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

Update karona...
I'm waiting...


aaj raat 10 ko ya phir kal evening tak hojayega pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
part15a awesome update wht happened to raman??
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks dear

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

part15a awesome update wht happened to raman??


thanks, wait for the next part- updating in 2 min
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks for your support and the encouragement. Here I am with chapter 15B. Hope you'll like it.

Note: Another change, I know I keep changing the story but can't help. Raman had married Shagun and they had given birth to Ruhi and Adi.

Chapter 15 B: Humari Jaan

He needed me today, I needed him today. After the dinner at the dabha, all were getting into the bus when I caught him and asked what the matter is.

Flashback:

R-Adi ne call kiya tha and as soon as he completed the sentence there were tears in my eyes. I hugged him. I had met Adi a few times when Raman had gone to visit him in the hostel. Shagun never bothered to come, so she didn't know about me. I had visited Adi only a few times, but I had created a strong bond with him in those few times. He was a junior Ravan Kumar. But, sadly he never accepted me and Raman as his parents because Shagun had poisoned his mind against Raman. Raman had said that Shagun had died just a few months ago in an accident and Adi had also known the truth of Shagun. Raman was taking care of all the expenses of Adi, but Adi was still in a hostel. We had gone to see him just yesterday. He was slowly seeing Raman's love and had started to call him dad, but still there was a long way to go. And hearing that Adi had called Raman I was very happy, but why was Raman sad. I pulled away from him and asked why he was sad.

R- Adi ne call to kiya tha lekin

I-lekin kya Raman?

R-jab usne phone kiya tha to mein bohut khush tha par

Flashback:

Seeing Adi's caller id Raman had become very happy and lifted the call.

R-Adi. Kaise ho tum beta?

A-Aap. Sorry mein aapko nehi phone karna chahta tha? I am sorry.

R-It's ok beta. He could feel some muffling sound. Aap teek ho na beta?

A-aap ko kya? Aap mere liye kuch nahi lagte. Mujhe koyi nahi chahiye aur especially aap. Mein mere koyi nahi sirf naam keliye aap mere dad ho. Accha hota agar mai paida hi na hota.

R-Adi. Aisa mat bolo.

By that time the call was cut.

Flashback ends

I-It's ok Raman. Use kuch time dejiye. Vo yaha mihika aur mihir ke shaadi ko holidays mein aaraha haina tab vo aapka pyaar dekhega.

Raman could just nod his head.

I surely said some soothing words, but I myself was hurt, just those few meetings with Adi had made me a mother to him which he may not acknowledge.

Humari jaan basti hai Ruhi aur Adi mein.

Flashback ends:

Later, on Ruhi's insistence or my will I agreed.

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Guyss, don't go anywhere because after an hour or two I'll be back with a emotionally packed update which can make you also cry.

Anyways, how was the update? Hope you liked it. Please comment. Apperciation and Critiscism is welcome.

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Posted: 10 years ago
short and nice and sweet plz update its nxt parts soon and also i rqust u plz update that parts little bit long plz i u dont have any problem plz.. Weldone~_@-,
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Posted: 10 years ago
So short dear.
It was good. Poor Raman.
Continue soon.
Love this line : Humari jaan basti hai Ruhi aur Adi mein.

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