Divan FF: Help her change part 4 page 23 UPDATED

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Viji15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: aaminah123
Viji this was good! I like the way you write. Looking forward to read more from you.
I hope the presentation presentation went well!

Aaminah 😃
Thank you so much, hearing it from a writer like you feels good 😆
Yes presentation was well i thought, just have to wait for my boss's approval now * fingers crossed*

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Viji15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sargam21
Beautiful👏

Thank You :)

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Viji15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: avni_19
oohhh!! thisss iss WOWWW!!! I loved it totallyyy! <3 <3 <3

Thanks alot! glad you like it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
Superb OS!

Thank you :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

It's a beautiful piece of writing but she doesn't need to change! She's perfect just the way she is!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Aww cute. Nice story...DiVan is the best 😳

I like that even though the title of the story is "Help Her Change" its also him changing. Very nice

Edited by Drb6 - 10 years ago

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Viji15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
Superb OS!

Thank You :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: VENBA
Beautiful and lovely update..
Awesome...👏👏

Thank You soo much😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shalz_123
tht is just awesome... there is a second part??? plz plz post...
the way he gives bytes these days makes u wonder, they r really helping her move on... amen to thr frndship...

PS: ur other ss?? when r u updating??

Thank You...lol its not really a second part, but i did write a bit more...sort of on the romantic side to their relationship...which might feel offensive to some as it's a real couple 😳 im getting alot of positive feedback and I might end up posting ...we'll see.

and my other SS is on a hold for the moment busy with some official matter but will get to it soon :)

Edited by Viji15 - 10 years ago