FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: zola007
Great part !
Loved Ishita's views !
Subbu as always a jerk !
I thought they were married already ! 😆
I didn't understand one thing though 😕
"Only one had stayed, but even he had been sent packing after that fiasco with her parents arrest on their engagement. "
Means their marriage hasn't been fixed yet and the engagement didn't happen !?
This got me quite confuse !
So both in NZ !
And Ishita met with an accident ?!
Guess it will happen Raman will pass by too ?!
Well really hope ! 😆
Eagerly waiting for the next part !
Thanks for the PM (:

Hi Zola

I was talking about the Ishu Prateek engagement there, I had forgotten his name when I was writing. 😆

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Thank you for all the comments guys.

I will try and update the next part tomorrow. Meanwhile, I know I said I'll stay true to the serial story, but I'm going to deviate a bit now, otherwise this will be a never ending saga. But I'll still stay true to the Ishra characterisation. 😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Hey V

On the forum n reading my pms after ages. The show is sapping my moral so I am staying away.

But I am pleased to find out that u r starting a new fiction.

I will start to read this evening n my feedback n review will follow as well.

Thanks

N yes please do pm me for updates!

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

V! That was terrific. I love the little insightt we got into their past encounters in Raman's view and the rescue just sounds so filmy and Harlequin, love it. The mood music was necessaryy for sure...😆

Looking forward to the next update, looks like thy've both got each other on their minds though neither is willing to look at why and this'll give the the opportunity to really examine it. I can't wait.

Looking forward to th e next update.😊

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: RomComFan
V! That was terrific. I love the little insightt we got into their past encounters in Raman's view and the rescue just sounds so filmy and Harlequin, love it. The mood music was necessaryy for sure...😆
Looking forward to the next update, looks like thy've both got each other on their minds though neither is willing to look at why and this'll give the the opportunity to really examine it. I can't wait.

Looking forward to th e next update.😊

Thanks Anu. Am trying to remember to write dialogues in English, but holla if you need translations 😃

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

V, am so sorry for commenting so late yaar... read the frist chapter ..n loved it... excited to see their confrontation... now tht u have seen the holi olv... thoda hot romance bhi socha hoga in ur next update... 😉

lovely update... continue soon...