FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

oh am so glad that u started a new story

really looking fwd to it

congos

continue soon..

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Great start to the FF..

Awesome..👏👏

Waiting for the next part...

Welcome back...😊😊

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

amazng update...

loved it...

waiting fr next..

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

You're a brilliant writer and the way you have described the place. Makes me wanna visit the place. I am sure I will 😳. That's one place I have always wanted to visit.

The way you have described his past and his bond with Mihir, just beautiful. His thoughts being disturbed by his mad madarasan. The effect she is having on him ☺️☺️. I can't wait for rest of the story to unfold V. Thanks for the Pm.

Lovely start 🤗

Edited by arunabhi - 10 years ago

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

V, FF from u... yey yey yey...lovely start... looking forward to raman romancing his madrasan... but y he wants to run away from his madrasan... ?? i wonder... cant control kya otherwise. .. the way u have described the island...makes me wanna go there... sigh... lovely...u didnt pm me..😕😡 do pm when u update..😃

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

wow it was awesome
d way u described raman mihir relation was beautiful
loved it

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Simplyyy great start! Loved it! Looking for miya biwi chup chupke romance! ;-)

The introduction of The RKB and his relationship with Mihir was described fantastically.

Cont soonn... looking forward! :-D

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Oh Vee, I'm already sold on this FF! I absolutely loved Mihir's reflections on his & Raman's past. I could just feel the angst and frustration Mihir felt for his Bhai!

Can't wait for the next installment!

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Perfect start-up for the story by giving us a low-down of how Raman's heartbreak and how he's finally made it now. I love the setting of New Zealand and somehow, having Raman alone in chalet with his feelings about his Madrasan excites me. Can't wait for the next part.