A strange relationship- Updated PART 6* 14 March* PAGE 19

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

hahahahahha!! this was simply crazyy updatee!! OMG!!! The car oincident and Toshiji's sudden outburtst.. omg! im rofling like crazy and i landed up with hiccuos.. i couldl literally imagine IshRa's faces! :P LOLL

Loved it totally.. now raman is hurt too.. poorr guy!! looking forward for the next part!

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

i can see the phone call scene happening lol

awesome update

continue soon

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hahaha..its too real n fun.. 😉 😛 update soon

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abha

@..abha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Amazing,Superb👏👏

Both the parts were awesome.Both ishita and raman think that they are not good for each other. Raman's mom was cute.That phone call was indeed embarrassing.I can imagine raman's expression.Ishita opening her thoughts about raman what she thinks will bring them closer.I loved their thoughts. Mihir trying to be cupid.He is Aware of his feeling towards Ishita. This one is beautiful piece arshi.I loved it.Continue soon and pm me,if possible.

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: abha2701
Amazing,Superb👏👏
Both the parts were awesome.Both ishita and raman think that they are not good for each other. Raman's mom was cute.That phone call was indeed embarrassing.I can imagine raman's expression.Ishita opening her thoughts about raman what she thinks will bring them closer.I loved their thoughts. Mihir trying to be cupid.He is Aware of his feeling towards Ishita. This one is beautiful piece arshi.I loved it.Continue soon and pm me,if possible.

Thank you so much. :)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Just wanted to say thank you for sending me a PM. I will now read and shall comment after that, in a while.

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Angel

@hasiniangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Firstly I loved it

But tell me seriously, I just saw the glimpse of karan, divyanka and ssharad in it. Is it that way??😉

Pm me if iam crct..

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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Beautifully written👏 Please continue soon.

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arshi21

@arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: hasiniangel
Firstly I loved it
But tell me seriously, I just saw the glimpse of karan, divyanka and ssharad in it. Is it that way??😉

Pm me if iam crct..

Thank you :) but to answer your question, i can understand why you would think like that but its not exactly like that. I wanted a bold, intelligent yet innocent girl for this story and a smart, aggresive yet an amazing guy at heart.

the whole smoking thing and all i have written for a reason. real people struggle with this kind of problems daily. I hope the raman i have created overcomes this :)