Ss ' jeevan saathi ' updt 19 pg 126 july 15 pm later - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

omg awedome hansa i love this thid jouner of ishra from their first day

the way you show how the flower open the pearls fall wow

ishra was happy for their last task n hiw both support each ever in their dad phase

raman tease ishita for bra was to good


omg both was about o kiss too


you will not make them kiss soon im dure that thx yaar




thank you so much for this sweet comment n for compliment too

im so glad dear haha you got it I will not make them kiss sooner
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asma18

Superb update
..pearl wala part aww. ..
Beautiful. Love it...
Song .hum hogaye apke. ..
my fav.
next part ka intezar hai.
.continue soon
& thnkx for PM. 😊




thank u asma for comment im glad you like it n even the song too
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi guys sorry for making you waiting but from mob to do updt its difficult but still im doing even have to start every times
thx for lots of your support in your comments n likes too .<


sorry for mistakes n wrong spelling too .here we go



JEEVAN SAATHI



PART 14


>out side the weather was in a romantic way with blowing wind the song every things . even in the room it was affected ishra too .
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raman was gazing ishita who was standing near the window looking out side just to not look at raman .




raman who was near to cheminey heating his hands . with only one candle light on the table n with the flame in cheminey too .



more the song words was saying hot words more inside was feeling something too .



a boy brought food which ishra sit opposite to eat n candle in the middle of them it was like a candle light dinner , they did not realise it .



both was their first candle light dinner too , while eating they try to not have an eyes lock just concentrate on food but in vein their eyes met .



for ten mins they were in lost in it but broke n cont eating too , until they finish then raman do a sign to pick her glass to do a cheers for their completing task n a successful project too



>then he thx her to have a candle light dinner as both has realise it n they laugh too .


>all around the room there was like a romantic moment atmosphere was moving .


just as ishita stand to leave the table the window open the breezy wind enter inside blow the candle it off .


ishita hit with chair n was about to fall but he grape her wrist n pull her to him which she fall on his lap



her arms around his neck with eyes open , his hand around her waist too . both eyes met with a intense look and it was sparkling like the pearls was sparkling too



SONG


HEY , HAAN

AAA ...NA NA

HMMM , HMMM ,,, AAHA HAA ...

KYUN BHEKUDI SI CHHAYI HAI


KYUN AAG SI LAGAYI HAI AAPNE..


O... HUM HO GAYE AAP KE...

WHY IS THERE A RESTLESS OF SPREAD ? (x 2 )

WHY HAVE YOU CAUSE THIS FIRE ? ( x2 )

I'VE BECOME YOUR'S NOW



with the breezy wind spread the room , her hair mesh was on her face , both look was going more intense n feel some attraction too , they feel strange feeling inside them .


HO ...

MERA HOSH BHI UDAYI HAI (x2 )</font>

MERA NEEND BHI CHURAYI HI AAPNE ...(x2)

O... HUM HOGAYE AAP KE ... (x2)



YOU'VE CAUSE ME TO LOSE MY CONSCIOUSNESS

YOU'VE ALSO STOLEN MY SLEEP

I'VE BECOME YOURS




without broke their eyes look , he remove her glasses n move her hair mesh which his finger touch her soft cheek skin which make her shiver .

she could not resist his one touch on her skin , it first time some one touch her like this , it was intense n passionate .


he smile to see she too cant resist, his way of touch like others girls , n how she was responding from her face look he knew how much it was affected her , he try to do more to see how much she cant resist .


he put his hand back on her hair n pull her band hair n her hair loose but he could not saw her beauty as it was not bright .

he caress her hair n it flew with the breezy ,her hair coverher face , he remove with his finger to touch her more . n the way he was doing it was killing her more .

she press his shoulder due to control her emo , her feeling , her sensation too . she feel her body hormones was reacting due of his touch .




PEHLE AISE KHABI DIL DHADAKTA NA TAH


BEWAJA ISS TARAH SE YE TADAPTA NA TAH


MY HEART DID'NT BEAT LIKE THIS PREVIOUSLY


WITHOUT ANY REASON IT WOULD'NT TORTURE ITSELF IN SUCH A WAY


he trace her face from her forehead , she close her eyes due of pleasure she was getting , she unknowing touch his neck which give him shiver , it affect him only with a lightly touch , he feel restless with her touch n want her to touch him more . he cont do the trace on her face with more sensation with some blow on her face .


DARD AISA KABHI BI MUJHKO HO TA NA TAH


HAR GHADI YUN MERA CHAIN KHOTA NA TAH


AAA AAHA... AA HAA HAA ..


I HAVE'NT EXPERIENCED THIS KIND OF PAIN BEFORE


I DID'NT LOSE MY PEACE \ REST LIKE THIS EVERY MOMENT



she touch him more on his neck as she too saw his reaction on her touch . he was unable to control him as it was first time he got that sensation , he was craving to feel such a approach touch from a girl touch , he was stunned and surprise too , his gaze become more intense on her he move till her collarbone , he wanted to kiss that part of her , but wait for later as it was her first time for this experience too .


MERI JAAN PE BAAN AYI HAI

HAAN LAT YE KYA BANA YI HAI AAPNE

O.. HUM HOGAYE AAPKE...

IT CAUSE MY LIFE TO BE ON THE LINE

WHY HAVE YOU CAUSE THIS ADDICTION IN ME ?

( I'VE BECOME YOURS )


HE TRACE HER EACH SPACE OF HER FACE , HER BOTH CHEEKS , THEN HER RED ROSE LIPS , SHE WAS UNABLE TO BEAR MORE HIS TOUCH , SHE FEEL HER WHOLE BODY WILL EXPLOSE WITH BURNING FLAME INSIDE HER , BOTH CAN FEEL THEIR BODY PROXIMITY .



SHE TOUCH HIS HAIR CARESS IT N BLOW ON THEM TO MAKE HIM FEEL MORE DESIRE N SENSATION TOO , WHICH WAS HAPPENING TO HIM , HE PULL HER CLOSE TO HIM , THEY COULD HEAR THEIR HEART BEATING FAST .

CONTINUE PART 14 BELOW
Edited by pretty_h - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You just updated let me read first
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resing my first place

I am first one yippee

Oye the update was so short.
😭

Aww.. Romance all around 😳

But why why why you stopped 😡

Update soon 😊

Btw from which the song belongs to??
Edited by sukanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
cont part 14

AE HEY HEY HEY HEY AAHA HA HAA...


CHORI CHORI MACHALNE SE KYA FAAYDA

RAAZ-E- DIL KHOLDENE KA APNA MAAZA


( WHAT THE BENEFIT IN ENDURING RESTLESSNESS SECRETLY? )

( ITS A UNIQUE JOY TO REVEAL THE SECRET OF THE HEART )


she turn her face away to not look him, his eyes was saying lots of things, he cupe her face n make her look at him .


he wanted to admire her blushing face with her red tomatoes cheeks but could not due of lack brightness.


he kiss her forehead which make her feel like butterflies was flying on his one kiss she feel his lips.


she caress his collarbone with sensation way she make him vibe on her way of touch.


raman mind :

WHY IM FEELING SO RESTLESS, WHY IM NOT ABLE TO BEAR HER TOUCH , WHY SHE AFFECT ME SO LOTS, I NEVER FELT IT WITH OTHER GIRLS , WHAT IM FEELING RIGHT NOW, I THOUGHT I WILL CONTROL HER LIKE OTHERS GIRLS BUT SHE IS CONTROLING ME, MY WHOLE BODY ARE CRAVING FOR HER TOUCH NOW, SHE IS NOT MY TYPE MY NOR WE LOVE EACH EVER THEN WHY THIS ATTRACTION, FROM HER TOUCH I CAN FEEL THE SENSATION DESIRE PASSIONATE IM FEELING ALL IN HER TOUCH , WHAT SHE HAS WHICH I CANT SEE IT , MY HEART IS BEATING SO FAST LIKE AN ENGINE OF A CAR RACING , MY WHOLE BODY ARE REACTING AS IT FIRST TIME , WANT TO TASTE HER WHOLE BODY .



MUJHKO HAI MERI IN DHADKANON KO KASAM

AAPKO BHI HAI MUKHSE MOHABBAT SANAM

HEY HEY HEY HEY AAHA HA HAA...


( I SWEAR IN THE NAME OF MY HEART- BEATS )

( IM SURE THAT YOU'RE IN ALSO IN LOVE WITH ME, MY BELOVED. )


IS MEIN NAHI BURAAYI HAI

YEH BAAT KYUN CHHAPAYI HAI AAPNE...

HAAN ... HUM HO GAYE AAPKE..

HO.. HUM HO GAYE AAPKE


( THERE' S NOTHING BAD IN THIS. )

( WHY HAVE YOU HIDDEN THIS FROM ME? )

( I' VE BECOME YOURS )

( I'VE BECOME YOURS )


she caress his arm in such a way which both body proximity was reacting raman can feel ,his manhood boast at any time with her sensation touch on his skin , his hand get down to her neck which he was tracing. giving her more vibes n more reaction too.


ishita mind :


WHAT IS HAPPENING TI ME WHY I FEEL LIKE IM IN CLOUD NINE FROM HIS TOUCH, IM.FERLING LIKE YES HE IS THE MAN WHOM MY HEART MY SOUL MY BODY WAS WAITING, HIS ONE TOUCH MAKE ME FORGET EVERY THINGS JUST BE IN HIS ARMS, IN HIS WRAP N HUG, WHY HE IS WAITING TO MAKE ME TASTE HIS LIPS , HOW I CAN BE LIKE THIS ,I NEVER FEEL TO BE IN SUCH A WAY WITH A PERSON WHOM I DONT LOVE NOR HE, THEN WHAT IS THIS ATTACHEMENT FROM HIM, WHY MY HEART WANT ME TO FEEL MORE SENSATION FROM HIM , WHY I CANT STOP HIM FROM TOUCHING ME N TO CARESS ME N WHY ME TOO IS DOING THE SAME TO HIM WHY MY HAND ARE MOVING AUTOMATICLY TO TOUCH HIM WHY WHY IF HE CONT LIKE THIS I WILL CANT STOP MYSELFT TO BE IN HIS ARMS IM FEELING HELPLESS FROM HIM.


KYUN BEKHUDI SI CHHAYI HAI

KYUN AAG SI LAGAYI HAI AAPNE...

MERA HOSH BHI UDAYI HAI

MERI NEEND BHI CHURAYI HAI AAPNE...

O... HUM HO GAYE AAP KE...

HAAYE...HUM HOGAYE AAP KE...

HAAN ...HUM HO GAYE AAP KE..

MMM...HUM HOGAYE AAP KE...


( WHY IS THERE RESTLESSNESS SPREAD? )

( WHY HAVE YOU CAUSE THIS FIRE ? )

( YOU' VE CAUSED ME TO LOSE MY CONSCIOUSNESS)

( YOU' VE ALSO STOLEN MY SLEEP)

( I' VE BECOME YOURS. )

( I' VE BECOME YOURS. )

( I ' VE BECOME YOURS)


both was so close ishita eyes was close . both can feel other breathe
their face was so close their noses rub they start to moans too.


raman hand was on her neck was caressing n trace it. ishita feel more to come from her body language her breasts was rubbing on his chest too. his body too was reacting to have more .


theire lips touch lightly n they was about to put their lips more close. lights arrive due of the brightness it broke their.


R " auch, oh madrasan it my lap, you are so heavy . ( in a loud voice)


she jump n stand away with an embaressing way n avoid his look too.



I " ayo ama , im sorry" . ( in a panic voice)



R " it ok, by the way you feel relax nah ". ( with a raising eyeborow )


ishita who was not looks at him n was thinking how come raman be in a normal way with what ever has just happen then she realise it not first time for him but hers was that why she feel embareasing.


raman stare her how she was avoiding his look n was looking away too she was moving around like a zombi.


R " oh madrasan what happen are you ok or want to sit on my lap again ". ( in his teasing way n try to touch her)


I " no ,it ok im fine no need your lap again ". ( in a furious way n move away too, )


raman say ok then im going out.



after he leave room ishita was wondering how come she dobsuch an act that too with that ravan kumar how that possible then she put her hand to tie her hair n saw it was tie as it was before .


she was confused how can it be ppossible as he removed the band then how it is tie again when he did it then she realise n start to laugh on herself n


ISHITA SELF TALK :

AYOO , WHAT A FOOL YOU ARE ISHITA, IT WAS JUST A DREAM , NOTHING MORE BUT THAT TYPE OF DREAM N ON RAMAN LIKE THIS , HOW I DREAM ON HIM , SO CHEAP DREAM, SHEE, HORINBLE DREAM, THX GOD IT WAS NOT TRUE .


THAT WHY HE WAS IN A NORMAL WAY , IM WAS LIKE A FOOL .BUT IT WAS LIKE REAL THE FEELING WHICH I FELT WAS LIKE REAL FACT AS HAPPEN . IT WOULD BE TRUE , WHAT I WOULD DO LET HIM OR. I WOULD NEVER LET It HAPPEN I KNOW MY WILL POWER.
BUT DOES HE FEEL SOMETHING AS FROM HIS LOOK IT WAS APPEAR SOMETHING ELSE N IT ALL OF THAT SONG THAT WHY THE ATMOSPHERE WAS LIKE THIS .
WHAT A FOOL YOU ARE ISHITA , NOW RELAX THERE'S NOTHING WRONG HAPPEN . ( she hit her head with a naughty face )


out side raman was under a tree n he was hiting the tree with his foot to remove all his anger frusration which he was controling inside the room .


RAMAN SELF TALK :

HOW I DREAM ON THAT MADRASAN N LIKE THIS , RAMAN HAVE YOUR CHOICE HAS CHANGE TO SEE SUCH A DREAM WITH A BEJI GIRL , NO IT DID NOT CHANGE NOT IT WILL CHANGE , IT ALL THIS SONG WHICH MADE ME HAVE THAT CHEAP DREAM, HOW I COULD TOUCH HER LIKE A CRAYING MAN IN SO MUCH OF SENSATION WAY , HOW THAT POSSIBLE TO FEEL ALL THAT ATTARACTION TOWARD HER WHY I WAS FEELING RELAX HAPPY GET PLEASURE TOO , IN ONE TOUCH OF HER MAKE ME FEEL HOW I WAS WAITING FOR SUCH A TOUCH FROM A GIRL TO MAKE ME GET WHAT I WAS WAITING TO FEEL TO PLEASE ME IN A ATTRACTION SENSATION DESIRE WAY BUT NONE OF THEM HAVE BEEN ABLE TO STOP MY OR FULFILLED MY THIRST TOO BUT SHE DID , WHAT SHE HAS WHICH I CANT SEE OR KNOW OF IT THAT LOOK OF US WAS SO INTENSE I NEVER SAW ANY GIRL IN THIS INTENSE WAY LIKE WITH HER.

HOW COME I SAW THAT DREAM IT ALL BECAUSE IM WITH HER SINCE ONE WEEK OR BECAUSE I DID NOT HAVE ANY SEX SINCE IM HERE .

NEXT TO LIGHT TOO IT COME AT RIGHT TIME OVERWISE MY MANHOOD WOULD BE BOAST AT ANY TIME N SHE WOULD FEEL IT NO THX A LOT LIGHT .BUT WHY SHE WAS BEHAVING STRANGLY AFTER SHE STAND DID SHE FEEL SOMETHING OH SHIT .

WHAT RAMAN CANT YOU WAIT A LITTLE TO HAVE ALL THIS N TOMORROW YOU WILL BE BACK HOME YOU WILL SEE MIHIKA YES MIHIKA MY NEW TARGET N SHE WIL BE WITH ME IN ONE WEEK ON HER OWN WHAT I PLAN FOR YOU MIHIKA NOBODY KNOW IT I WILL COME TOMORROW WAIT FIR ME BEBS I WILL MAKE YOU TASTE MY MAANHOOD N WILL CRUSH YOUR LIPS SUCK YOUR BREASTS BITE THEM BRUSH MY TONGUE ON YOUR FAIR SKIN .

WANT TO FEEL ALL THAT WITH YOU NOT WITH OTHER ELSE . I WILL FIND OUT IF MADRASAN HAS FELT SOME THING . ( with his killer smile n flirt face )


he return in room n saw her sleep on coach he admire her face for a while then he went on bed .


monday next day


morning teacher call raman inform him where he is waiting for them .


ishita come out wearing her churidar , raman get piss n ask her why this look . she say now she feel comfortable in her skin .



both leave


on way raman decide to ask her if she feel thing or no when he was on his lap .


he ask her ... "why she dont let her hair lose ? ,like others girls do
". ( with a naughty smile )



he remind her of some one who used to ask her to let lose her hair .


she then ans him on saying ..." only her hubby who will see her hair lose like her family only who saw her lose hair ".


he murnuring that why even in dream could not seen properly the beauty of her hair .



both cont talk until he ask ...if she felt something when she was on his lap , as she was behaving strangely .


she try to avoid the quest but ans him ... she felt uncomfortable on his lap him . try to hide her embaressing face



they reach to the teacher they greet him raman hug him ishita just shake her hand .


they leave in the van fast to reach univers as all students will wait for them .



in van he congrats them on their project n told them they has been the first in all task n finish it before a day n they did all task .


they ask how he know they did all first . he say by their tag machine they knew who on what time so they cant cheat .



he ask on teacher n how was their days too . they saiy it was fine n teacher too was ok ishita was about to say how he was but raman stop her .



in univers all students was waiting for them n rector wait for them . it was almost three oclock but all cont to wait them .


ishra arrive as they came out they all applause for them n call their name in a laud voices with happy , as they made their univers name top in the country n his name was being known in world too .


rector met them first with a big hugs n happy face with a proudly face , he congrats them n thx too give him , the most happiness which he wanted to have for his univers , he bless them n then told them he will meet them next day n leave with the teacher .


mihir met raman hug him , mihika hug ishu with smile face both was sharing lot if joy too.


romi met raman he ask him how he spend this days with his enermy with laugh face .


he said it was ok n nice too n they were a team so all goes perfect looking at her n mihika too .


romi call mihika n ask her to congrats raman which she did but with a shake hands not hug which raman was expected from her .


the way he hold her hand was in a flirting way he caress her hand n it was tightly hold ,she try to remove but he was not let it go until he hear .


mihir n ishu calling each ever name with a loud vioce n happy face .


ishu , mihir both walk to each ever n have a hug with happy face .


raman who was not happy on seeing their closeness with such a way like they were lover their way of talk with smile touching each ever n how comfortable they were , he was jealous but dont know it n he leave mihika hand n call mihir to go home with him .in a tone way


even mihika go to meet ishu n she told romi she will not meet him at night she will spend ig with ishu .



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precap : ishra in ceremony of reward


hope you guys will like it n will leave your comments too even critics will accept too .


from mob it not easy to do it but im doing that why some times it take time too .



love hansa


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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing updates Hansa Appi. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Resing my first place

I am first one yippee

Oye the update was so short.
😭

Aww.. Romance all around 😳

But why why why you stopped 😡

Update soon 😊

Btw from which the song belongs to??




thx cont it

it from hum hogaye aapke movie
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey hansa dear..will u pls edit your 1 part of this,what is this font size.?will u pls check it out:-(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
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Firstly, sorry for the late comment... 😔
I'm not well so I took more time to complete reading 🤔
Coming to the update...
When I read the first part...;
I was like "this is cheating Hansa...Cottusaa update dha... "😭
Then when I read below... Dil khush hogaya...😳
It was awesomooo...awesome 👏
Love's in the air...☺️
Lusty Bhalla... 😡
Kya kya sochte hai Mihika ke bare mein... 😡
Now comes the jealousy track... 😆
Hansa...please torture him with Ishu and Mihir's closeness... 😉
I want to see a Green Bhalla 🤢
Update soon dear... 😊
Waiting for real vala romance
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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